XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Many Hopes of Good]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this was more funny then anything else, and gave me a good chuckle, the random images was more funny then anything else, and it was great kinda reminds me of oldtimes, the joke this year was not that great but this was still a nice touch, i think you should have added much more {IMAGES} for more of the random humor of things, other then that it was some good stuff so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more images and more random stuff aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random here

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Smidly responds:

Ahhh xie xie! Many thanks!

[China L ng]

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this one is just as short as the other one with faces, now, i can understand you are still working at it, but you could put much more effort into these, like some {BACKROUNDS} and if you are going to just have them fight have some differant places they fight jumping off cliffs and have them shoot stuff kinda like yugo or something, now these are just a few ideas, another is the flash itself is too short, maybe if you piy a number of short toons together then maybe, also adding more effort into a story would also be another start, so while this is amusing and short there are alot more things to work on so i hope you do look into improving on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding more effort there are a number of things you can do, first of all this one needs some backround or take the sticks into differant backrounds scenes but nneds something more then just the blank backrounds, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, also could use a stop action code for the looping.

~~OVERALL~~
Some sort of stick battle, short and amusing but needs more effort.

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Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[For china day]

Needs improving and more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok well this was entertaining ill give you that, guess this was for china day and such, your animation is quick and short and seems to {LOOP} so you may want to add some stop action code so it doesnt loop, not just that but you may want to, think more of a story for it yours seemed more {RANDOM} then anything else, and seems to have nothing to do with china day but hey there has been alot worse that has come thru the portal, now all the {FACES} are cute, but you just need much more content and think of a story maybe they could have some sorta battle? or something along them lines, but something but i did have abit of a chuckle watching this so it was ok lol, anyways better luck next time. try and improve with those tips i suggested and ill post a few more down below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all add more to the story, give it more meaning, it was too short too random, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash

~~OVERALL~~
some smiley icons battling it seems, needs more thought and effort.

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Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you