XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[OMG: Preasent]

Very entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
notbad of a little flash you have here i thought your {MENU} screen could have looked better the one with the present and the play button a few things you could work on here would be adding some {COLOR} atleast to the present and the play buton you should give it more of a button like box or something, LOL the toon is short and very funny, the {AUDIO} is very scratchy, you may want to ad some {SUBTITLES} so you can better understand the dialog, but other then that it was still very funny, and since the toon was very short, maybe you should add a number of short tunes in one flash so that you have more {VARIATY} in there, just another idea that could improve on this cute flash, by the way great short toon, maybe abit more color next time.. anyways great stuff good luck on any other new stuff you got going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
on the menue screen ad a touch of color like the present and make the {PLAY} more of a button just an idea though, more color all around would be nice, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, also adding some subtitles would help as the audio was scratchy.

~~OVERALL~~
Short and cute flash, could have abit more and some few changes as stated above.

~X~

VenturaTV responds:

Why did you go so out of your way to tell me that it needs color and better sound i made this damn flash in under a day thanks for loving it but im sure you could of done somthing else than type this review the present is a play buttion by the way not being rude but tell this to someone who gives a fuck

[Many Hopes of Good]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this was more funny then anything else, and gave me a good chuckle, the random images was more funny then anything else, and it was great kinda reminds me of oldtimes, the joke this year was not that great but this was still a nice touch, i think you should have added much more {IMAGES} for more of the random humor of things, other then that it was some good stuff so nice job indeed, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more images and more random stuff aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random here

~X~

Smidly responds:

Ahhh xie xie! Many thanks!

[China L ng]

Needs more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this one is just as short as the other one with faces, now, i can understand you are still working at it, but you could put much more effort into these, like some {BACKROUNDS} and if you are going to just have them fight have some differant places they fight jumping off cliffs and have them shoot stuff kinda like yugo or something, now these are just a few ideas, another is the flash itself is too short, maybe if you piy a number of short toons together then maybe, also adding more effort into a story would also be another start, so while this is amusing and short there are alot more things to work on so i hope you do look into improving on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding more effort there are a number of things you can do, first of all this one needs some backround or take the sticks into differant backrounds scenes but nneds something more then just the blank backrounds, A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short i would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece, also could use a stop action code for the looping.

~~OVERALL~~
Some sort of stick battle, short and amusing but needs more effort.

~X~

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you

[For china day]

Needs improving and more effort

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok well this was entertaining ill give you that, guess this was for china day and such, your animation is quick and short and seems to {LOOP} so you may want to add some stop action code so it doesnt loop, not just that but you may want to, think more of a story for it yours seemed more {RANDOM} then anything else, and seems to have nothing to do with china day but hey there has been alot worse that has come thru the portal, now all the {FACES} are cute, but you just need much more content and think of a story maybe they could have some sorta battle? or something along them lines, but something but i did have abit of a chuckle watching this so it was ok lol, anyways better luck next time. try and improve with those tips i suggested and ill post a few more down below.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all add more to the story, give it more meaning, it was too short too random, this movie "LOOPS" now thats actually an easy fix, you can use a stop-action-code from the action - script and there are actually lots of easy to understand tutorials here on the site to view on how this is done if you dont know, but anyways the stop-action-code will stop the looping, but dont forget to add some "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons for the viewers to restart viwing the flash

~~OVERALL~~
some smiley icons battling it seems, needs more thought and effort.

~X~

Clown-Catcher responds:

Thank you