XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[No Signal]

Odd but i liked it

~~REVIEW~~
First off great job on putting up some awsome and differant {VIEW-SHOTS} and second you put together some awsome {MUSIC} that seemed to flow well with the slow but fitting {ANIMATION} this was really neat from start to finish with the flow of it but mostly the {STORY} it was actually nice with the silent but some {VOICES} might have gave it an even more strange feel, which was a good thing, now i have to disagree with the {CREDITS} music it seemed to not fit with the whole setting, but still a great little flash here, infact i almost added it to my faves list, if it were not for that ending credit music, but other then that it was a very pleasent flash and story, as to improve on this well the music at the end i would remove, but more ideas and tips on how to improve on this more below, anyways good luck on any new work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The ending credit music should be something more soft as the films music was, seems more fitting that way, another idea might be adding some soft voices to add to the odd and strange effect of your idea.

~~OVERALL~~
An odd yet good flash i liked it very much.

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CaKeS1 responds:

Thank you for such an elaborate review. It helps me a lot. Though this is pretty old xD I'm thinking about remaking A Signal (the sequel to this) as I kinda just got off track and ruined it. But still, thanks for the input!

[A Super Mario Bros Quicky]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
LOL ok i must say this was probably one of the more funnier shorts then the 4 you have out, now you could have done alot more with this one though, like with the ending you could have the red guys, have done something to get more in a more funny and amusing way, maybe they chase him down for a bit and stomp on him, might make for a more funny and entertaining flash but what you have here was pretty funny, but as i have said in the other shorts, you should add more shorts to one flash, since they are very short, and some nice cute animation with the menu screen wouldnt hurt either, anyways good luck on any new stuff you may make, anyways nice job once again. So as improvments longer, more animation and a more funnier ending.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As stated just above, needs to have a more amusing and funnier ending, some animation in the menu screen like you have some of the later episodes

~~OVERALL~~
Another amusing episode

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Mario8th responds:

Thanks. Hey, maybe you could give me an idea for my next animation on your next review or on youtube = D

no, but really, thanks

[Super Mario Bros Quicky2]

Another amusing short

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok so i broke down and finnally saw this one, now i must say the earlier ones get shorter, so atleast the later ones do get better and that shows some improvments, this one was way short though, and i still say you should add more shorts to one flash to make it more stuff for the viewer to see, And on this one would have been nice to see abit more animation at the play screen also, now these are just ideas and my opinions in which it could improve somewhat, but even for a short you should add molre to each one or make them along with other shorts as i said before, Now dont get me wrong i really like these shorts, with the differant mario charcaters, and i love that you have variaty and not just mario, anyways hope to see more from you seen.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation in the menu screen, abit longer of content on this one, more other characters to be shown would be nice aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
Another funny mario short

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Mario8th responds:

This was actually before i knew how to make the animations at the beginning. But know I do and animating is much easier.

[ASuperMarioBrosQuicky4]

Amusing and funny

~~REVIEW~~
So now we are here with episode #4 I had the pleasure of watching #3 so this was a treat, and like the front menu page, even with some animation there one improvment there could be the {FONT} of the title? instead of just the black text title have it more standoutish, As for this little short, it was entertaining and a little longer then before, the {SOUND} quality was really good though very sharp and good quality, so props to you on another fantastic short allthough i would love to see a number of shorts in one episode, but this will due, but mostly it was good, ill be sure to checkout the other episodes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make a better font at the start menu of the title,

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing and entertaining once again

~X~

Mario8th responds:

Thanks! I'll find a cooler font.

[Destructo Box Christmas!]

Funny and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Now when i saw this i was glad to see another episode, i have watched some of them and this one was intersting very funny indeed, First of all the {GRAPHICS} are very welldone, not your normal style, the {VOICES} were pretty straigt on and good wouldnt hurt to have some subtitles though, the voices were somewhat deep, but could help more with some subtitles. but the first one was great, funny, i like how you present these, maybe you should put in more then just the two, but from what you do have it was great, and love how you use differant styles for the graphics, To improve on this, i would have more then just the two toons, maybe a 3rd one so its not too big, but maybe make more with some other wacky and strange stuff happening, but anyways great stuff you have here, i loved it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add another toon or two, maybe even have some more {EFFECTS} like with the second toon, there seemed to be more stuff going on.

~~OVERALL~~
A couple of good and fun clips of xmas destruction

~X~

DestructoBox responds:

More then 2 shorts in submission probably won't ever happen mostly because that would mean we'd have to NOT release shorts as we finish them just to be able to release them in multishort packs. We'd rather get them to you all asap without waiting for another short to be finished. This was a special case since last years special wasn't on newgrounds and we wanted to bring you all the sequel without waiting another year!

Thanks for watching!

[ASuperMarioBrosQuicky3]

Cute little short here

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was actually pretty funny, but still kinda on the short side but guess thats why you put in "QUICKY" but maybe as an improvment you can put a whole bunch of quickies in one flash say 3-5 might make for a better flash with much more to see then the short quicky, but as for your short little toon, i thought it was pretty entertaining and even somewhat cute, the {BACKROUNDS} are ok but thought you could have done a little more with them, maybe have the backrounds more art style while keeping the sprites as the main characters, just an idea though and you never know people may just like the new style, and also wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, just as an added extra feature for the flash, but besides all that it was funny, and a cute little short. anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You can improve on this, with a few extras, one being have one flash with lots of small shorts in it besides just the one, saves room, and shows more effort on yourside, adding subtitles wouldnt hurt, and having a mixture of art and sprites would also be a plus.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amusing abit on the short side.

~X~

Mario8th responds:

Dude Thanks! I eventually will make what you were saying, 3-5 animations in one video, and it will be a new series I'm going to do. I've a actually already thought about it. About the subtitles, some will have them, others wont. I'm truthfully not very proud of this animation, but I am proud of qucky2. Also, the background sucked because the tile set I got was absolutely horrible.=(
Yes, it is supposed to be short.
Thanks for your review, and if you want to see a better one check out some previous ones.
thanks.

[Gaia Adventures 2.3]

Very good story-line

~~REVIEW~~
A funny game you have here, the animation was good, and i really like how you put a story in there along with the sprite like characters, i like that you have to click on the next button, but you should let it flow like a movie, seems anoying at times to always just click on the button, but still its an ok flash and good story with some decent art and graphics, and again the animation was pretty good, you really show effort in this and thats what we dont see alot of but i liked it regardless, Now as to improve on, i would lose the buttons, and let it flow like a movie, but other then that it was ok with me and i had a pleasure watching and reviewing this, anyways nice job keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
remove the buttons and let it flow like a movie.

~~OVERALL~~
nice flash good stpryline.

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Killit666 responds:

Thanks for the review. The reason why I added buttons was to make it more interactive because it's a flash movie. Otherwise I would have made it for youtube. This series has become somewhat exclusive to newgrounds even if people hate the series or not.