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Needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well i thouoght this was way too "SHORT" the music was really nice and pleasent and it seemed to fit what was going on with the visuals, but again i felt it was just too short and seems like you could have put the effort fourth and really made this into something awsome more then what it is, dont get me wrong its pretty impressive even as short as it may be, by adding more content and more of a story with "BLANK" in mind you started it off great with these odd characters and such, but again just short lived and too short, now as it is black and white thats pretty cool, i think you could have added abit of "COLOR" even if just a touch, so with all that said, things that could make this better are ofcourse more "CONTENT" more of a story, abit longer if you will, and then some color not alot as to take away from the Black and white style but something that has just a touch of color, so all and all i did enjoy this, it was just too short, and needed abit more ump to it, good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so adding more content and more of a story is a plus, but also Black and white flashes are notbad, but while its black and white, you Should add some color even if just a drop of red or blue here and there, like say a blood drop so that the Black and White reflects more it would be a nice, and would standout abit better, and improving on your Black and White animation, anyways good luck

~~OVERALL~~
A very short flash, could have been much better, but it is decent for what it is.

~X~

Surn responds:

I guess the main thing was that I was itching to choreograph the song. It goes without saying that if you choreograph a short song your production will be short. Even so it's still a good point that I should try to look on (nobody would rather eat a fun size chocolate bar). As for the content and color: content/plot would have been difficult (but not impossible) add yet the color would indeed make it look better but it would have needed more than "just a touch".

So to recap I need to:
- Make it longer
- Use color
- Use plot (though I might be able to get away without it [see:ANIMUTATION])
- Overall try harder

Thanks for your help, I appreciate it.

[Neji Vs Orochimaru(demo)]

Too sgort but was notbad.

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off this is notbad at all, i really like it, and while it didnt "SCORE" very well it was a good start and better that its your first works, As for the "PLAY" screen you had the play button there with no real logo so if anything is suggested you should present a logo of your flash, also the "VIEW-SCREEN" seemed abit small, make it larger with some more platforms so they are like jumping and fighting all around, will have more visuals of alot of stuff going on, just an idea to work on. Ad More "EFFECTS" like with the backround scene, you could ad some running water for the waterfall or something, and when they are fighting you could have some more "BLASTS" that jump out making really fancy making the whole flash dazzle, just another idea that will improve on this, try it out, The flas seemed "SHORT" so make it longer with more characters maybe even more scenes not just the same one, just really go all out on this battle and have them go differant scenes, So i enjoyed this little flash of yours but it could use some improving as explained above, anyways good job, hope to see improved versions sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a logo at the play menu screen would be a start, a larger viewscreen, more scenes and most of all more widespread effects.

~~OVERALL~~
A good battle seemed too short though.

~X~

Shikhs responds:

i made a mightier version of this flash about 2 mins long and with a lot of special effects v-cam and all but i lost the pen drive which contained it.if i can find it i will give all the newgrounders a visual treat.Anyways thanks for the review

[Hirby the snake]

Good but needs improving

~~REVIEW~~
Ok first off, good job on your first try at this, you do have some skills so welcome to the portal, now as for the art work its notbad, and not sure which program you are using but i do think that there is lacking some quality in the artwork, it alsmost looks like its from ms paint, a more better program might be paintshop pro to edot your artwork then back into the flash program now you have put the effort and the animation is ok but at times it seems too slow, so speed up the animation abit, and again ad those subtitles it will greatly help to flow along with your story here, the whole animation was pretty cute, but i thought, it was way too short and more material and content should be added, you do have something with the story but you need to vring all these elements together to make it all flow well together, so i stated a few tips here and there and i hope to see more of your work improved ofcourse, so hope your next entry is much better good luck on your future stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The prom you use for editing art can make a big differance something to think about there, also some "SUBTITLES" could be used,

~~OVERALL~~
Cute but abit on the short side.

~X~

blackriversidewolf responds:

Thank you very much i did spend alot of time on this flash and yes i know it is alot shorter then i would have liked but i value your opinion LOL the art work was orgianally drawn on a peice of paper then scanned and then painted usind ms paint ....... i will have to exsperiment with photo shop more ... and as for sub title i fully agree in using them next time thank you very very much for your review and your critism is greatly appreciated and i will most def take what you have said into effect and exspirement around much more

[Theatre Tool]

Brilliant all the way to the end

~~REVIEW~~
LOL Ok first off great "PLAY" button and its after effects haha that was brilliant so props to you there for an awsome idea, and second you get more props because the characters were very welldone and you gave them there own personality and humor, the whole flash was pretty funny i thought, allthough it seemed too short, except for the "END" damn that was not expected at all but ill give you props for even that lil end aswell heh now i will have a differant view of any movie experience :( hah j/k it was a welldone flash with lots of laughter, very entertaining scnes, but again it should be longer with more content and such, Now if i could suggest a few things, maybe you could ad more content, some more differant scenes, the ending was a blast heh, anyways nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more content, more differant scenes and try and make it longer if you can.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short but good entertainment.

~X~

JunkYardAnimations responds:

haha awesome thanks dude! i definitely have some longer flashes in store!

[Clucky Ep9: The Sassin]

Very cute and funny

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is probablt my first episode to see on this why i have not seen the others not sure, but anyways, Great "MENU" screen i really like all the color and nifty looking designs and the character is somewhat cute, i still think the bland white backround spots should also be filled just an idea or two, Ok so as i get into this you have some nice characters fresh and funny, and i like that you have a "RECAP" especially goes well for people like me who start on episode 9 heh, also some props to you for giving this some randomness to it, the characters and funny humor make this very amusing and cute so keep up that part of it, another thing to improve on this might be adding some "SUBTITLES" it would help also improving on the "AUDIO" aswell, This whole series kinda reminds me of the Eskimo bob series here on newgrounds, not sure if ya seen them but i love your style and love this series, i think i will check the others out soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some subtitles to start, some filling in of bland spots on the menu screen, and some more random humor would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall a funny and entertaining series i like it very much.

~X~

Brewster responds:

Hmmm... Subtitles. I never thought of that before. I'll definiteley add those in the next episode. Thanks!

[Let Me In]

Nice graphics.

~~REVIEW~~
Well the preloader took abit but after it got started, he play screen was rather "BLAND" you had some fancy text button, but the black backround just seemed abit too bland, maybe you could spice it up with colors and backrounds and other stuff thats related to you flash, just something that could improve on this even if its kust a little change, It might have even been nice to have the button change color when you roll over it, I like this flash you have here because it has some nice and smooth graphics, and even abit of nice effects like some blurrs here and there, so the story of this was ok but just seemed unfinished guess one should know more of the other story this may come from, but for the mostpart i liked it, just seems way too short, but hope to see more of your work with some good improving. Maybe next time we will see a much longer one and more content, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some menu button and menu upgrades, make the story longer and less confusing, and maybe a little compressing aswell

~~OVERALL~~
A good but short flash nice graphics.

~X~

UnderlingX responds:

Thanks a lot ill try and work on all those points. I'm not really sure this story would make any more sense what ever i tell you. It was just me practicing. I havent animated in like a year so i thought it practice graphics n stuff.