XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fantastic Easter Special]

Haha cute

~~REVIEW~~
heh this was cute, and kinda late on easter but guess you were still working on it, the actuall tune on this was pretty entertaining allthough i thought it could have used some "SUBTITLES" it was not that bad but could be a nice feature and stuff, the "ART" was good, as for the "ANIMATION" i thought could use more effort like when the bunny was bobbing his head up and down, could have flowed abit better, and as for the ending credits that was another good part i thought, not many people put much effort into the "CREDIT" but i like that you did, so props to you for an entertaining flash

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The animation could look abit smoother, and Subtitles wouldnt hurt? This was ok but it wouldnt hurt to add some subtitles, not because anything was hard to hear or anything but because its just something extra that would make this abit better to understand and its like a nice little feature for your flash here

~~OVERALL~~
a cute belated easter flash

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TheSpicanator responds:

hahaha sure thing man!

Thanks for your input. I enjoy reading peoples reviews where they explain what.
thanks again and happy easter =3

[Designer Hero]

I like it

~~REVIEW~~
Now first off the "SMALL" play button i was not too fond of that cause im thinking that it would be more pleasent if the button was somewhat larger and easier for people to access it and sooner to see your flashworks, Haha the design of him as he went down the convaer belt was cute, and funny, i liked it when the machine kept X'ing him out and with the end result he was this neat and crazy character, you did very well and you presented some creative ideas in this flash, it could have been abit longer like take him through a few more changes maybe like a "CLOWN" maybe even a "ROBOT" one anyways good idea here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more ideas like i said a clown and a robot are just starters

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash with a creative style

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SirHappy666 responds:

I was going to make it longer but I thought people would get bored. If I make anything else It will be full of Clowns and Robots!!

[Worlds End Umbrella]

Interesting story

~~REVIEW~~
I really like how you gave this story some good depth to it the animation seemed to be alright the character cats were notbad either allthough you could have gave the cats abit more effort like more facial design and more shots based on them like some close up sand such, really for the most part of this flash it was about the story, and thats what i really liked about it, more effort on the characters next time though, in the end this was a very captivating story right into the end aswell, some improving would be like in the scene when the cats are running and you have the sunset in the backround the "TAILS" didnt move there you should make it so they are since they are running and all, anyways nice story here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more animation to the cats like arms tails and such

~~OVERALL~~
A cute story very pleasent to have seen

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k3ltr0n responds:

THANKS!

[Hook Line and Sinker]

colorfull and cute

~~REVIEW~~
Another good animation you have here, lots of great colors, and some smooth aniamtion from all the fish, the "MUSIC" was perfect i thought for all this, it just worked very well on this whole flash, once again this flash was "LOOPING" so once again ill say add a stop action code, ill explain that down below, you have a very smooth and inlightening flash here, there was alot of great use of colors and smooth animating i was pleased with this even with the looping and all, just work on the looping and all will be just fine, a slight file reduction wouldnt hurt either, anyways untill next time keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and fix that loop, this is an easy provess with some simple action script code, its called a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Another cute animation with nice use of color

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billyblob responds:

Hello XwaynecoltX,
First off, thank you for the nice comments. And also thank you for pointing out the looping problem. I uploaded a new version which stops and added a button to play. It should be approved soon. Thanks again!

[Dance, Snake Man, Dance!]

needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
This little flash did enlighten me, the repetitive-ness didnt though, the backrounds were better then nothing but however all that said i do believe it could have used more effort along the side such as images and differant designs in the backrounds and maybe other dancers aswell along with the main one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more dancers, and add some other backround designs besides just the changing colors

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing dance

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auriplane responds:

Thanks for the review!! I'll try a lot harder on my next music video--I didn't really know what I was doign on this first one. Well, I still don't, but I'll try to learn before the next one :-) Or I'll collaborate with someone.