XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pivot: The chase]

good scenes

~~REVIEW~~
You have a decent little flash here with some good action, allthough i think it lacks in color i do like the differant views and stuff but also noticed it loops so these are things you may want to fix

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
first off the looping could be fixed with a simple stop-action code, 2nd add some more color to the flash

~~OVERALL~~
A decent stick flash here

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jamesbond942 responds:

It's not flash, it's pivot.

[Audio Mix 004]

I like these

~~REVIEW~~
I like what you have done here you have a good idea, it just needs to be presented more, like i have stated that the larger view screen is needed, and the faster animations aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like in all the other ones faster and smoother animations, and a more larger "VIEW SCREEN"

~~OVERALL~~
A good attempt at a flash music player

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LadyJava responds:

Thanks...

[The first attempt]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Seems like its too short, and this was lacking some color, you should add more to it more characters more scenes but most of all add some color from backrounds to the characters, it was just lacking in those areas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well color for one, and the loop was so short so add much more stuff going on scenes more story, and color

~~OVERALL~~
Too short

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Alakamame responds:

I'm working on it