XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Audio Mix 004]

I like these

~~REVIEW~~
I like what you have done here you have a good idea, it just needs to be presented more, like i have stated that the larger view screen is needed, and the faster animations aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like in all the other ones faster and smoother animations, and a more larger "VIEW SCREEN"

~~OVERALL~~
A good attempt at a flash music player

~X~

LadyJava responds:

Thanks...

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 16]

entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
lol now here you have thrown on alot more props and such which is notbad, but now all you need is some more animated ones, nice effort on the multiple props though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some animated eyes on the spynx

~~OVERALL~~
Another trip around the world

~X~

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Ancient Egypt is one of the best periods of history.

[The first attempt]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Seems like its too short, and this was lacking some color, you should add more to it more characters more scenes but most of all add some color from backrounds to the characters, it was just lacking in those areas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well color for one, and the loop was so short so add much more stuff going on scenes more story, and color

~~OVERALL~~
Too short

~X~

Alakamame responds:

I'm working on it

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 14]

he is kind to his pets

~~REVIEW~~
haha well notbad, he is atleast kind to his pets now i would normally say add some animation in these but i think this one is perfect with him holding the monkey another ok episode here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think i would leave this one be

~~OVERALL~~
another in the fantastic world trip

~X~

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Wow I wonder why you thought this didn't need animation. :O

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 12]

love that bridge

~~REVIEW~~
well this was an interesting trip that hitler is taking, and maybe hitler will play a little song for un maybe in a future episode but anyways another so-so episode but i was still entertained by it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have some music notes coming out of the instrament

~~OVERALL~~
Another goofy yet entertaining trip around the world

~X~

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

The only time there's different music in this series is in the final episode.

[Uzbekistan]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad the characters are decent the story is actually notbad and it has some decent humor fro did a good job i thought lol, but from what you have here i thought it was a decently made and mildly entertaining, so nice job all around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more

~~OVERALL~~
A decent story and somewhat funny but needs more

~X~

MonoFlauta responds:

"Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more"

Yeah at the beggining is not good, but later is awesome :P you need to accept that lol

Thanks for reviewing!

[MonKKey Chapter 2]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all i thought the "STORY" was the best part you really put time in it and the effects also really showed very well like the blood scenes, i had a funtime watching this you should make more of it maybe like a continuing story of some sort

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more glitter and glowing effects in the backround effects it might give it that special edge

~~OVERALL~~
Good story nice effects

~X~

AM-Frasier responds:

Thx I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will indeed be making more. Pass it on !!!

[frozen banana]

Frozen

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was amusing the frozen idea was a pretty good one, now im thinking you should make other themes such as "FIRE" "POOR" "RICH" or something like that but you had a funny idea here and gave me much laughter so thanks for that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well like i just said make more themes like this a fire theme, a poor bananna theme and so on, you get the idea

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and new twist on the dancing bananna

~X~

Icandraw responds:

thanks for the review

[How to Catch a Hippo]

Haha cute

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was a cute flash along with a neat idea seemed to work hand and hand, the backround was abit "BLAND" something to fix later, and i thought the entire flash could use some subtitles, but with all that said i was pleased with the entertaining outcome, nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color or backdrops to the backrounds, and some subtitles would be a nice add on for this film

~~OVERALL~~
Good funny flash here

~X~

Matija27 responds:

I thought that it would look better without background. Maybe next time, hehe.
I was thinking about subtitles too. Maybe I will add them later.

Thanks for the constructive review :)

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D SE2]

world cup yay

~~REVIEW~~
and in this one we arrive at the world cup, i find it to be another entertaining flash, not much going on really, i think some adjustments could be made ill explain below

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well forst off you should make the hitlers hand not be in the sunlight cause you can barly see it, then secondly you shoould make the ball a bright orange or neon green to standout more

~~OVERALL~~
Good music in this one could use a few fixes

~X~

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I used the ball which was the official ball for that world cup, which I feel is a better choice than going for one which would look better against the background.