XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Uzbekistan]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad the characters are decent the story is actually notbad and it has some decent humor fro did a good job i thought lol, but from what you have here i thought it was a decently made and mildly entertaining, so nice job all around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more

~~OVERALL~~
A decent story and somewhat funny but needs more

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MonoFlauta responds:

"Add abit more humor in there it was ok but could use some more"

Yeah at the beggining is not good, but later is awesome :P you need to accept that lol

Thanks for reviewing!

[MonKKey Chapter 2]

notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad at all i thought the "STORY" was the best part you really put time in it and the effects also really showed very well like the blood scenes, i had a funtime watching this you should make more of it maybe like a continuing story of some sort

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add abit more glitter and glowing effects in the backround effects it might give it that special edge

~~OVERALL~~
Good story nice effects

~X~

AM-Frasier responds:

Thx I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will indeed be making more. Pass it on !!!

[How to Catch a Hippo]

Haha cute

~~REVIEW~~
haha this was a cute flash along with a neat idea seemed to work hand and hand, the backround was abit "BLAND" something to fix later, and i thought the entire flash could use some subtitles, but with all that said i was pleased with the entertaining outcome, nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color or backdrops to the backrounds, and some subtitles would be a nice add on for this film

~~OVERALL~~
Good funny flash here

~X~

Matija27 responds:

I thought that it would look better without background. Maybe next time, hehe.
I was thinking about subtitles too. Maybe I will add them later.

Thanks for the constructive review :)

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D SE2]

world cup yay

~~REVIEW~~
and in this one we arrive at the world cup, i find it to be another entertaining flash, not much going on really, i think some adjustments could be made ill explain below

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well forst off you should make the hitlers hand not be in the sunlight cause you can barly see it, then secondly you shoould make the ball a bright orange or neon green to standout more

~~OVERALL~~
Good music in this one could use a few fixes

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I used the ball which was the official ball for that world cup, which I feel is a better choice than going for one which would look better against the background.

[You can !]

Free falling

~~REVIEW~~
aww now this was interesting, i like your style of characters and art aswell as the "STORY" on this one, at the end i thought it was way too slow though you should have sped up the animation just a tad at the end scene

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained slow down the animation at the end

~~OVERALL~~
a good flash here very good on the story you all should watch it

~X~

Icandraw responds:

thanks

[The Scary Day]

Cute short

~~REVIEW~~
Haha that was a little cute animation, i was actually not expecting the end there but it made sense now hehe, i could really see this as a series maybe the guy does that to alot of people, maybe with other masks or something? well something to think about for future ideas

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it a tad longer maybe the guy chases him down and kills him or some strange thing like that

~~OVERALL~~
An entertaining clown story we will all love

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CondenadosProducoes responds:

Oh man, Good Idea!!!