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[Dance, Snake Man, Dance!]

needs more content

~~REVIEW~~
This little flash did enlighten me, the repetitive-ness didnt though, the backrounds were better then nothing but however all that said i do believe it could have used more effort along the side such as images and differant designs in the backrounds and maybe other dancers aswell along with the main one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more dancers, and add some other backround designs besides just the changing colors

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing dance

~X~

auriplane responds:

Thanks for the review!! I'll try a lot harder on my next music video--I didn't really know what I was doign on this first one. Well, I still don't, but I'll try to learn before the next one :-) Or I'll collaborate with someone.

[Kyubichan Sings! (TNF)]

ok notbad

~~REVIEW~~
ok well first off i thought it was just the text but then came the art, so maybe you should shorten the starting point just abit so you can get to the art part faster, as soon as i got to that portion it was more pleasent all and all it was an ok flash you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
cut out the start just abit

~~OVERALL~~
Abit long but still a good entertaining laugh from this one

~X~

Redtaurus23 responds:

Thanks for reviewing my flash animation. :D. I knew I should have cut down the build up a bit.

[SWAP! ch.1]

awsome animation

~~REVIEW~~
wow im impressed with this, mainly the animation the character work was very impressive aswell, it could use some sorta subtitles though, this was an all around great flash with lots of effort shown on animation and great fight scenes, good character designs aswell

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles if even that

~~OVERALL~~
Awsome flash great effort all around

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grey-cap responds:

we figured it may be better if we just spoke on our native tongue and have subtitles instead as well, we tried to dissimulate our accent but as you can see it was a no go, lol
thank you for your words

[OSAI Act2 p20]

Brilliant

~~REVIEW~~
This was a brilliant idea and i really like the orb and all after it dropped it tottally went random which was ok but just wish i could understand the story part of it abit more, work more on a streamline story

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More story would be nice but not as randome as you have here

~~OVERALL~~
Nice flash abit on the random side

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UntoldEdman01 responds:

thanks, i know i have raploads to work on, yeah it was a segment for the thing, and i put a lotta work on it, gah i was tired, more story next time got it