XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let Me In]

Nice graphics.

~~REVIEW~~
Well the preloader took abit but after it got started, he play screen was rather "BLAND" you had some fancy text button, but the black backround just seemed abit too bland, maybe you could spice it up with colors and backrounds and other stuff thats related to you flash, just something that could improve on this even if its kust a little change, It might have even been nice to have the button change color when you roll over it, I like this flash you have here because it has some nice and smooth graphics, and even abit of nice effects like some blurrs here and there, so the story of this was ok but just seemed unfinished guess one should know more of the other story this may come from, but for the mostpart i liked it, just seems way too short, but hope to see more of your work with some good improving. Maybe next time we will see a much longer one and more content, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some menu button and menu upgrades, make the story longer and less confusing, and maybe a little compressing aswell

~~OVERALL~~
A good but short flash nice graphics.

~X~

UnderlingX responds:

Thanks a lot ill try and work on all those points. I'm not really sure this story would make any more sense what ever i tell you. It was just me practicing. I havent animated in like a year so i thought it practice graphics n stuff.

[This Town Episode 4]

Awsome blue movie

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok well This seemes to be a good Flash here, i will know more by the end of the flash and review, the one thing that did throw me off somewhat was the "SIZe" just seemed abit much to me but again i will see by the end of the flash to see if it was worth the wait, second thing i noticed was that the Flash just started right off, that notbad but i wish you would have added a "PLAY" button so that i could click play, say like im waiting for it to load and ran to get a soda or something not a big thing just would be nice to the viewer, Now the flash was pretty good if you ask me a funny story a hot blue-ish babe, allthough another little helpful tip might be some "SUBTITLES" not needed but a nice feature for the viewers, now you had a very nice flash some humor, some nice scenes good looking characters and decent animation, so i did enjoy it but wouldnt mind if it had some other option for a more viewer friendly based flash, anyways nice work, and in the end i was worth the big file size, so nice effort there,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have a play button at the start before it starts playing, some subtitles would help,

~~OVERALL~~
A long bovie with lots of action and a cute blue babe

~X~

rbinturong responds:

The play button is a good idea. We'll definitely have one for the next episode. We also plan to upgrade our audio equipment so we'll have much better sound too. Glad you liked our movie (for the most part) and thanks for the great review!

[The Love I'm Searching 4]

Fantastic

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so first off i will comment on the 19 mb flash its not often i do review flash thats that huge but i suppose it cant hurt, only issue with that for me anyways is it does tend to take a much longer time to load up especially on much slower machines and such, now while you do have alot to get all in there, i would hope you thought that people might enjoy your flash if they could get past the load time much faster, And i do only say this because it did take awhile to load, and my machine is not all that slow either, maybe it could be done in maybe two parts? or maybe some of the high detail and effect parts could be toned down? them are just a few ideas, Now on more positive matters i liked your menu page very smooth looking animation with the yellow strips and such, i liked it, And now as for the flash itself.

Ok so as it finnally starts, it was well worth the wait i must say, really smooth animation some of the best "QUALITY" of visuals and wow again for some awsome camera agles. really made for an awsome flash, everything ran smooth i did however think it ran too fast though, you have some brilliant characters and everything all seemed to work around eachother, also some nice effects like backround lights and shadows, this truly was like a realistic movie with very unique and wild characters i was so pleased to see this even with the size that it was so very welldone, maybe not so large if size next time though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lowering the file size would be first on my list, i went into detail above, but the main point is longer files take longer for people to get to your presentation, so make it easier for people to view it with less of a file size that would sufice,

~~OVERALL~~
One hell of a movie as it was more like a movie then any flash i seen so awsome job i really enjoyed this

~X~

Skaijo responds:

I really appreciate the indepth review. I'm going to continue working on compressing the images that I move into the animation, which will increase their pixelation just a bit but greatly reduce the overall filesize of the animation. I guess I just took for granted that everyone was on a high connection to the internet, but trying to watch my animations from my work computer and comments like this has really opened my eyes that I should be a bit more fair when it comes to size. I'll certainly put the effort forward. <3

[CT - Crisis of Time]

Pretty amazing

~~REVIEW~~
The size was abit much, that was the first thing i noticed, but have given it my all even at the size it is, Now as for the "INTRO" its pretty neat it was quick and fast not to take away from the actual film at hand but yet it had some good animation and nice graphics, now on the "MENU" page it was pretty impressive with some nifty looking buttons and even fast animation on the character just sitting on the ledge i thought that part of the animation was too fast though, maybe slow it down just abit, So as i watch the actual flash you have some pretty good art skills with good looking characters nice effects and decent animation, so for 14 mb's it was much better then i thought and well worth it i would say,this was really put together very well seems like all the parts and scenes with so much animation took lots of effort so ill give you much credit there, this was all a very welldone animation i was pleased with it from start to finish, the best of this whole flash was the story and how it played out with the characters, so really good stuff, i was entertained and loved the effects, anyways welldone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
On the menus screen right before the actual movie the animation of the characters hair and flapping cloths i thought was too fast maybe slow it down just abit, other then that it was pretty awsome, i would also suggest cutting down in filesize but dont want to take away from the film either

~~OVERALL~~
A long download but still very good flash from start to finish

~X~

Tyrant-D responds:

Seen that you've viewed most submissions out of anyone here on NG, this review surely put a big smile on my face. XwanecoltX your my God!

:)

[Toilet Paper Man]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
First of great job on making this a small size flash and still getting a good amount of conent in there i was impressed with that, aww now this cartoon was abit creative with the differant styles of toilet dispensers and such, the animation mixed with reall images was the creative part, as for the "AUDIO" and as you said was probably not the best, so im thinking go the next best thing? Ad some "SUBTITLES" its always helpful to have some and even if the audio is not great the subtitles are a 2ndary feature that helps for that, now this was funny and gave me a couple of laughs and chuckles, so no problems with humor, and while earlier i did say the animation was nice, i thought you could have had the toilet paper animated not in just the mouth, but have him roll around town and stuff and talking aswell that might make for an even more funnier story, something to think about for future episodes if you decide to go that rout, So it was an entertaining little flash with a cute idea as a character, seemed abit on the short side and could use some subtitles, but all and all when its all done and said its a pretty cute flash idea and i hope you continue it on abit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have the toilet paper man roll around throught the city instead of just the one scene, also some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
cute character funny idea, keep up the good work

~X~

zacoranim8or responds:

Thank you so much

[Captain Beast]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Lol ok i must admit it was funny and entertaining, and gave me a laugh or two, the differant langauge kinda through me off and was confusing atfirst but i did watch it a few times to understand it by animation only, but even with all that i think some subtitles would make it better for the english only speaking audiance, second you had some amazing animating and some fantastic art, that really worked well together, but in the end this was just too short and i felt it could have had more to the end more content and characters and just a tad longer even if it was just a small short, the subtitles might have helped me to understand it abit better aswell, but anyways good luck on your next entry

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some subtitles, make the ending abit longer and more depth to the humor aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short, hard to understand at first

~X~

DunderAxel responds:

I s'pose you're right, thanks.

[Adolf Hitler: ATIO80W 03]

lol ok

~~REVIEW~~
Lol i thought i had reviewed this one already, but anyways yeah its a pain with all them rules and such, the same as the retrogade but that was also funny, notbad, i like the slow animation and all, wouldnt mind abit more, this i s kinda funny cause its like hitler is making the rules hehe

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more bright stuff more color maybe some flashing stuff in the corners but not too flashing

~~OVERALL~~
hitler reads rules

~X~

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

The 2nd ATIO80W was the review guidelines, whereas this one was the whistle rules. I'm guessing you got the two confused due to their similarity. ;)