XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Angry Bob : Monsters]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok now this one was amusing, seemed really {SHORT} the animation and art were very smooth and also liked the sound/fx you added along with this one, it all seemed to synk all together, now while this didnt really have any story line or anything as it was more random, thats what sorta made it funny and amusing, Still again i thought it was kinda short and i could actually see this run a bit better with more of a colab type so maybe you make 3 or more of these short flashes you could ad it as a flash with these shorts in it instead of just the one short flash, dont get me wrong its pretty funny and love the smoothness of it and the art of your blue character and monsters is funny and a neat idea, other then that its ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As above make it in a flash along with other shorts, or ad to it, its a good idea and you already have the animation to go with, go with that and it will be much better imroved

~~OVERALL~~
Short but was randomly funny

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ZoVies responds:

haha htnx i will work on it :3

ps.
WOOOOOOOOW THE MAKED OF GHOST MOTEL SAW MY CRAPPY MOVIE!! yaha xd
i feel important already ghehehe :D

[Cigarettes Life (extended]

Can be better with practice

~~REVIEW~~
This was not a bad start, the animation was a bit {CHOPPY} the music was good and seemed more like a music video, the {ANIMATION} seemed kinda slow and choppy as said before, but these things can be improved easily, and you asked about some tutorials, all you have to do is do a search in the forums, or even go the the flash forums, there are alot of tips there to help improve on stuff, with your animation just needs some smoother animation, more use of the backround and more stuff going on, you have it right with the idea, and characters but you may want to fine tune those, also i noticed the {CONTINUE-BUTTON} didnt seem to want to work, thats another issue you may want to look into, and while we are on buttons you may want to make a more bigger and standoutish buttion, and more color use, anyways hope this helps you in making improved creations, anyways good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things that could be improved on would be better working buttons, improved animation and a smoother feel, i suggested some help tips and how to find them on the forums.

~~OVERALL~~
Cute but still needs improvments

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AmeatureFilms responds:

thx, but i found out why the btn doesnt work, in my action script i said to go to and play "scene1" but i had changed the scene name to killed, that is y.

Thx for the useful help

[Gypsie Short]

Decent but could be better

~~REVIEW~~
lol ok this was amusing, it was rather short though, but for the content that you did put in there it was amusing and short, but i think you had the idea right, just needs to be somewhat longer and you could introduce some new and differant characters give it more of a {STORYLINE} the {CARDS} seemed abit fuzzy aswell, but with some small fixes and more details like the graphics, making it longer, and introducing alot more to really just make it a more fuller flash that you have presented here, but like i said i liked it, oh and some {SUBTITLES} wouldnt hurt but anyways good stuff i look forward to seeing more from you this was pleasent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles, ad more scenes and characters and ad abit more detail in the graphics like on the cards, and just making it longer with more characters,

~~OVERALL~~
Decent but still could use some improving

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Bluealex999 responds:

Thanks for the advice!

[Taco Bell Stories Ep. 1]

Decent idea

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was funny and i got a good laugh from this now its not the best but you do have a good {IDEA} with this one basicly because its simple and you have some voices in there, now you can take this flash and improve on it i can see alot of stories coming from it and making it shine, some things of improving would be, so some ideas would be some added color, and ofcourse some better synking so the sound and animation match up better, , and make them abit longer so it looks better all together, better fonts aswell wouldnt hurt either, but all and all it would be a good idea to make more and just really go with it, and if they are too short, you could put a number of em in one flash just another idea that would make for a good series and such, anyways it was a pleasure to see and review this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as suggested above a few ideas , better sound synking is a plus though, and more orginized.

~~OVERALL~~
amusing idea can work if better orginized

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Senmetsu responds:

I'm seein' a trend in what needs fixing and its all the things I thought needed some fixing.

A) Its too short.
B) It's too rushed.
C) I need someone who knows flash better, or to practice more.
D) I need some real voice actors to help me possibly.
E) Keep up with the IDEA of telling funny stories from work, but improve the flash quality :)

Thanks for the thought out idea, I really thought this flash would get blammed so to see such support really helps. Thanks :) Maybe I CAN do this if I just put some actual care into learning what I'm doing.

[Sky High Misheard]

Could be better

~~REVIEW~~
Ok well this was differant but it was funny as hello, i like the variation of text and sound allthough the font you used was really large but still it was amusing, the music tends to get repetitive so you may want to change that up abit, The {ANIMATION} was notbad, kinda neat but it needs more images and differant variation of animations not just the same over and over, but really it was pretty good and somewhat entertaining so i did enjoy it but still needs more, so nice job for the mostpart, add abit more next time though anyways keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as said, make it have new animations maybe not so repetitive, for the most part it was ok.

~~OVERALL~~
entertaining but needs a few changes as stated above

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anunfittingname responds:

Its repetitive because its on a loop. The song doesn't have anymore lyrics so blame the song. Thanks for the review though!

[SAR Story Trailer]

That was notbad

~~REVIEW~~
Too start off i must admit i do like this flash, you have presented a good rounded out story allthough the flash itself seemed to run abit slow maybe it was the intense effects and detail i did notice alot of detail in the character design, you have an idea here needs more story depth, and while there was lots of detail in the character, i thought the backrounds and backdrops could have used more as they seemed bland, all the characters looked pretty good and you really have something here, but im thinking tone down abit on the detail on the characters and possibly more effort on the story so that it balances out abit more, and maybe the film wont lag as much, anyways good flash here hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as explained less detail on the characters and more depth in the story. also abit more detail in the backround itself

~~OVERALL~~
A good flash with some awsome characters but still needs abit more

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SiloZen responds:

Thank you for the Review, i am as of now working on the start of the series, due to several mishaps that keep happening im having to keep postponing but i am working to focus alot more on everything and balance the detail out. The story will be explained soon :P

[NeoPikachu AFD Collection]

Good lil pika

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was notbad at all i actually like it, I like the fact that pikachu is fighting and all and fighting the clock crew was a good idea but im thinking you could go one step better and have pikachu fight other characters not just the clock crew but robots and all sorts of stuff that would give it much more variaty, Theres not really much to say on this one but the fact it is a good idea, but also i think as stated that more variaty of villians and stuff just an idea or two there, anyways nice idea keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I posted an idea or two about pika fighting more variaty of vilians and enemies, just a suggestion though.

~~OVERALL~~
a good idea here with the fighting but needs more variaty

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RazorHawk responds:

Yeah, that's probably all true. Variety would definitely help next time.

I've been in a bit of a rut when it comes to making new flashes... not sure whether to start a new series or what, but I'll figure something out eventually.

Thanks again for checking this out.