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[Lost on halloween]

Awsome festive flash

~~REVIEW~~
Wow first off i love the {PRELOADER} and the menu page the {MUSIC} was awsome, fit very well, and not only did you give the menu page music and a nice logo, but you gave it some nice graphical work so very nice job there, The graphics in the flash itself was not perfect but it has its moment its simple with a sorta cutness to them, the backrounds were nice and you gave it some, the animation is cute kinda just ended shortly, Now overall i really enjoyed this little festive flash animation you are a good animator and bringing the art and animation together cameout well so props to you on a fantastic piece, i look forward to more flash from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well i wouldnt mind it abit longer, maybe even start a halloween series but thats just me

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and scary kinda

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CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[Oscars]

Amusing characters

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok i had fun with this one, why is the {SCREEN} so small though?? anyways this was pretty funny you hhad some nice characters with some good detail there bodies were {STIFF} so for some more improving there you could make some more animated bodies limbs and arms, Now you did have some good {HUMOR} funny and the story was ok even as short as it was, I would also suggest on improving by adding some {SUBTITLES} the characters talked so fast it was hard to understand at times, atleast with subtitles you can catch some of that, again just an idea that may help on making the flash more enjoyble for all, Now i suggested a few ideas on improving a funny little flash here, but i do think you have something here and you should make more as in a series cause you have the humor down and you have some funny characters, you just need to touch up on them, anyways funny flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more animated bodies limbs and arms, have them move there arms and legs and even head from time to time, make the characters not so {STIFF} Make the screen size much larger,

~~OVERALL~~
Funny short and amusing, nice humor with these characters.

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MigitMadness responds:

Thank you for the detailed review. The video size has been fixed since you watched it. These videos are old, but were just put on Newgrounds and we had a little trouble getting them uploaded. We use a higher quality microphone now, so the videos we have made recently and will be making should be more understandable. The animation is a slow progression for us, but they will be getting better. These videos are actually a series already, all these characters are in most of our other videos.

[Blueys adventure]

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually pretty cute, the animation was smooth running not too short and not too long kinda just right if you ask me, but it was cute and entertaining, and allthough the character was very {SIMPLE} just a ball you actually made it work, even with some funny face expressions, the {MUSIC} was simple as well but felt it was fitting for the feel you gave it, not the best flash in the world but for sure a decent piece of work, now how can we improve on this? in my oppinion i think you could make a small series of shorts like this, with other ball episodes of deaths and mishaps, maybe other ball heads are introduced and such, try it out and see what happens, anyways i enjoyed the flash it was decent work and a good effort. And i look forward to reviewing more of your work soon, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more small episodes like this, with new adventures and new ball heads but keep it simple as this one

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and short

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CyanSandwich responds:

Thanks for the review. I was actually thinking of remaking this, with a slightly better storyline and far more polished look.

[Afro_Stud's Birthday!]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this is amusing, and the animation was funny very amusing infact, I know this is somewhat old, and stuff but i must say it still gives me a good laugh today so nice job there, now i could see this still being improved on such as it was very short, and just in the one scene or two. There should be abit more interaction with other characters so the story goes on abit longer just an idea, maybe even ad some darker color tones besides just the bright ones, now thats just an idea that could improve on, anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could use more content maybe other characters but for sure more scened are needed,

~~OVERALL~~
Short short but still amusing and funny

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harryjarry responds:

I'm still proud of this animation! My first flash on NG. I'm glad you were able to enjoy it! I would've loved to make it longer, but I was trying to get it done on Afro's birthday, so I didn't have much time. I've never been very great with color-I should look into working on that!

If I start getting back into flash (which I'd love to), I might do another flash like this for fun. I will see what I can do!

Thanks for the review! <3

[A Signal]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
well first off, the intro was pretty intense, love the visuals and sound/fx so prop to you there, now as i saw the other one it was good i like this one, the song at the start of the flash was very good one, but then you tottally change it, that kinda confuesed me, i thought that you should let it play like a {MOVIE} especially with the song at the begenning, but when you change it up it really throws you off and kinda doesnt make sense at times, might seem better if it was played as a movie, and maybe not so much cut scene were it changes so fast, i really love the art and animation was very neat and differant, nice 3d effects with them art scenes, So it was a good flash but was confusing with the changing of scenes and music changes, but anyways good flash, hope to see more work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Let it flow like a music video, and less cut scenes, let it flow into each one there aswell

~~OVERALL~~
Good series so far.

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CaKeS1 responds:

Thank you, glad you came by to watch the second. I'm not sure but I was thinking of remaking this installment, because like you said it kinda confuses people and changes way to much. I would've loved to keep this a mystery series rather then a random killing sequence of animations that don't fit together. Thanks for the tips and support, I might remake this one, or if I feel comfortable after thinking about it a lot, I might just make a third.

[Snowballs]

Awsome and funny

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was great, very funny right from the start and made me laugh a few times, so i really enjoyed this, you really played off the joke very well, and the animation which was welldone was just right, even the voices was great, a welldone animation great joke awsome humor, i really enjoyed what you have presented here, so props to you on an awsome animation, and i will for sure checkout more of your work, As to improve on this, i wouldnt mind see the joke go abit further with more blood and stuff anyways great stuff i enjoyed this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more stuff so its abit longer and so the guy shows throwing more stuff at him

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining

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psychicpebbles responds:

thanks for that awesome review :D