XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[VentureBros FanFiction]

Very amusing, and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting flash you have here and these interesting {BEE} like characters, are pretty funny the dialog was very interesting, and funny at times, this film shows lots of effort on your part very welldone all around, i did think you could have added some subtitles for that extra touch, but the voices were pretty good, it was not too short and not too long and gave off some good laughs for me, so all and all i enjoyed it very much and cant wait to see some more from you soon, as for improving on stuff, as mention some subtitles, but not really needed, but anyways great stuff, looking forward to anything else you may have for us on the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny movie interesting characters and amusing dialog.

~X~

smirkstudios responds:

What an extremely thoughtful review! I hope you understand that these are not my characters, and I am glad you found the writing fun! Thanks again, I'll try to get you some subtitles in the Flash to come.

[When Romba Attacks]

Pretty entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
A decent flash you have here, kind of funny, its random at least, you really put some effor into this especially with the {BACKROUNDS} lots of detail like with the {BATHROOM} from the tile to the walls so nice job on the detail there, as for the toon it was funny kinda {SHORT} maybe you should add abit more to it, but for the mostpart it was pretty entertaining, the ending credits part was funny too only cause there really was no credits and such haha, but anyways the toon was random and short not a bad thing but could use some more to it maybe more scenes since your scenes were pretty funny, and the toon itself was giving me a few chuckles so i guess it did its job, anyways nice job keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it abit longer, add some more scenes maybe even add them credits lol.

~~OVERALL~~
a short and wacky toon

~X~

Rubbertje responds:

Thank you, XwaynecoltX, master of reviews!

[TRUE Super Mario world]

Very cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad on this one, the loading time took awhile to get there but once started it was alright, this was actually very {CUTE} and i love all the sound/fx that really made it work well not to mention all the good looking characters that are just like the related characters, one tip could be that you add some {SUBTITLES} not that you cant hear anything but it would make it more better, anyways good humor you presented in this good animation it was not short at all maybe thats why the loading took awhile, but still i had fun with it, its a great little toon and i would love to see more of this stuff, one other thing great job on the voices it was perfect and really love how you made it very mario related, anyways great cute flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
funny and cute mario themed flash loved it

~X~

HexMe responds:

Thank you so much for your comment, we actually were going to add subbies but the time went short, i might do a update to this one with subtitles added though, well see what shows up in the future.

[OMG: Preasent]

Very entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
notbad of a little flash you have here i thought your {MENU} screen could have looked better the one with the present and the play button a few things you could work on here would be adding some {COLOR} atleast to the present and the play buton you should give it more of a button like box or something, LOL the toon is short and very funny, the {AUDIO} is very scratchy, you may want to ad some {SUBTITLES} so you can better understand the dialog, but other then that it was still very funny, and since the toon was very short, maybe you should add a number of short tunes in one flash so that you have more {VARIATY} in there, just another idea that could improve on this cute flash, by the way great short toon, maybe abit more color next time.. anyways great stuff good luck on any other new stuff you got going on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
on the menue screen ad a touch of color like the present and make the {PLAY} more of a button just an idea though, more color all around would be nice, I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see, also adding some subtitles would help as the audio was scratchy.

~~OVERALL~~
Short and cute flash, could have abit more and some few changes as stated above.

~X~

VenturaTV responds:

Why did you go so out of your way to tell me that it needs color and better sound i made this damn flash in under a day thanks for loving it but im sure you could of done somthing else than type this review the present is a play buttion by the way not being rude but tell this to someone who gives a fuck