XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pico in Wonderland]

Entertaining for pico day

~~REVIEW~~
This was very pleasent and very colorfull it had a very {DREAMY} feel to it, the only bad part was that it ended so quickly, i like the music but maybe something more smoother would have flowed better with this?? This was more like a {MUSIC-VIDEO} but for some reason the music didnt fit, the animation flowed very well though and i rather enjoyed it, it was very pleasent and entertaining just abit on the {SHORT-SIDE} so as i said before and for a helpfull tip on improving would give it a more smoother music tune something that flows better other then that it was very good, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A differant choice of music would have been nice, something to flow more better,

~~OVERALL~~
Decent flash for pico day very pleasent

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coughing-dog responds:

thanks, unfortunately I didnt get much time to spend on the music so I chose a track Tyson made and tried to 'fit' the animation as best I could to the track. I thought it worked pretty well but yeah it was a rushed effort, exactly the same reason why it wasnt very long.

[VentureBros FanFiction]

Very amusing, and entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting flash you have here and these interesting {BEE} like characters, are pretty funny the dialog was very interesting, and funny at times, this film shows lots of effort on your part very welldone all around, i did think you could have added some subtitles for that extra touch, but the voices were pretty good, it was not too short and not too long and gave off some good laughs for me, so all and all i enjoyed it very much and cant wait to see some more from you soon, as for improving on stuff, as mention some subtitles, but not really needed, but anyways great stuff, looking forward to anything else you may have for us on the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some subtitles would be nice.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny movie interesting characters and amusing dialog.

~X~

smirkstudios responds:

What an extremely thoughtful review! I hope you understand that these are not my characters, and I am glad you found the writing fun! Thanks again, I'll try to get you some subtitles in the Flash to come.

[When Romba Attacks]

Pretty entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
A decent flash you have here, kind of funny, its random at least, you really put some effor into this especially with the {BACKROUNDS} lots of detail like with the {BATHROOM} from the tile to the walls so nice job on the detail there, as for the toon it was funny kinda {SHORT} maybe you should add abit more to it, but for the mostpart it was pretty entertaining, the ending credits part was funny too only cause there really was no credits and such haha, but anyways the toon was random and short not a bad thing but could use some more to it maybe more scenes since your scenes were pretty funny, and the toon itself was giving me a few chuckles so i guess it did its job, anyways nice job keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it abit longer, add some more scenes maybe even add them credits lol.

~~OVERALL~~
a short and wacky toon

~X~

Rubbertje responds:

Thank you, XwaynecoltX, master of reviews!

[TRUE Super Mario world]

Very cute flash

~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad on this one, the loading time took awhile to get there but once started it was alright, this was actually very {CUTE} and i love all the sound/fx that really made it work well not to mention all the good looking characters that are just like the related characters, one tip could be that you add some {SUBTITLES} not that you cant hear anything but it would make it more better, anyways good humor you presented in this good animation it was not short at all maybe thats why the loading took awhile, but still i had fun with it, its a great little toon and i would love to see more of this stuff, one other thing great job on the voices it was perfect and really love how you made it very mario related, anyways great cute flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some subtitles would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
funny and cute mario themed flash loved it

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HexMe responds:

Thank you so much for your comment, we actually were going to add subbies but the time went short, i might do a update to this one with subtitles added though, well see what shows up in the future.