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[1 Take 1 Loop]

Random and amusing

Well so its not all the time you see flash works like this especially in a movie form so i was actually suprised with how you presented this and how you let it flow from start to the end, So in that aspect of things it actually does get off to a decent start, Ok so not fond of the loop but guess thats the "IDEA" of it all and such, Frame by frame is tricky and odd its good animation just not always succesfull, but for the most part this was still ok. There is actually alot going on here and the animation seems to flow with every next scene so nice effort there. So The "MUSIC" was in good taste and as for a looping type of flash it seemed to work, The music also seems to fit the FBF style. I was really impressed with the "STORY" really looks like you put the time in on it, showing that a little effort can go along ways, so the story was greatand had some nice depth to it. but it also has some randomness to it and thats was notbad either. The Artwork was ok, but the animation seemed more of a strong point in this, maybe if you can smooth out some of your linework on the drawings it might come together abit better. This was a nice Flash submission had some artistic value and some sense of humor, and keeps youinterested aswell as entertained, there were some areas that could use some more clever ideas and tips, but that also comes with most flash submissions, so maybe below i will have a few ideas for you, but regardless of this all, this was actually notbad of a flash entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a good animation it has a smooth side of things and the style and direction was ok, but i believe that there needs to be an even smooth effort on things, the flash was decent, but i must say there are still some clever ways you can make this better, such as using varias ideas and advice that will in the endmake this more quality then it is, just something to think about, So as for some improvment changes maybe some better drawings and line-work, but besides that it was alright.

Carr77 responds:

Thanks for the long comment (I love those), and you had many good points and ideas :)
I will think of those in the future :D

[Adrellia Village #1]

So I thought i would checkout this little series of yours seems like you have alot of episodes here wich is notbad at all, I like the fact that these are not real big in file size so thats a good start sofar, Graphics was lacking in some areas, mainly in the characters they were more on the "SIMPLE" side of things, but still coulduse for some greaphic enhancments like more shades, more small details and more personality to the characters. Voice acting is always a touchy one, the ones you had were so-so, and could use more depth and quality in them, more emotion and more sharper sound quality in the voices it may have been the lip syncing aswell, but thats something to look into, The plot was simple and seems like it could use more depth more stuff going on more things to keep the viewer really interested in your movie, Give more info on characters, places, and when, these are something that could have more depth to them. The "JOKES" and humor to this movie was notbad but also seems like you can put some more effort there in bringing more humor and really just bringing some laughter out from the film itself, So i understand this is just the first episode in along series of episodes i do look forward to seeing more of them, this particular episode just needed some more excitment something to really set the tone for the rest of the series.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was a pretty nifty flash movie here there were some tweaks and changes that can be addressed, as mentioned throughout the review aswell as here, you can put that extra improving for an overall better outcome with some more quality added, so here are some things i found lacking and or needeing some changes. so First off the voices as mentioned need some work The characters could use some "DETAIL" aswell, It was abit short, maybe later episodes have more detail, depth and much more plot to the "STORY" Then there was the jokes wich could have been executed much better,

MistyE responds:

thanks for your review. this flash is pretty old, episode 39 is a pretty good example of the type of thing i'll make now. it was based on a novel i wrote, and at the time, my main focus was a serious story-driven series rather than a humorous one.

thanks again.

[A Goomba's Life Ep 5 (S2)]

Notbad at all

That was very nicely done. There was alot of great value to this Movie, but there were some weaker points that could be addressed aswell, that will be explained later but as for a start to this, this was pretty impressive to start. So as for a sprite flash this was actually notbad, and its nice to see some sprite flashworks now and then so glad i had a chance to see some of this, Backrounds looked pretty nifty and that goes along with the graphics as the detail did show up somewhat in this, Voices were notbad, actually better then i expected, so there was some good quality there, and really made it more enjoyble throughout the movie, Story was notbad either, I found it to be interesting but again could use more depth and even more understanding to it all as some parts were just too off the wall, Overall I found this to be a pretty good movie had some areas where it can be worked on, more explainedbelow, but for the mostpart it was pretty good i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are some improvments that could be made, here are a few suggestions, some effort on your side will only make this even better. So give these options a try. But i would suggest some ideas of improvment i would start with the story seemed kinda crazy at times and didnt know what was going on, You may even want to add some "SUBTITLES" making it better to understand on that aspect of things aswell,

DemonicDragon93 responds:

Thank you for review. The movie does have subtitles but i made it a option for someone to drag there mouse over it. if they wanted it. I'll identify that more closely in the next episode

[Skyrim - CotN]

This was amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was kinda interesting, it has its amusing points, now i must say it did have some racisim "JOKES" and while that always gets a good humor value sometimes it doesnt but must say you did present some good "HUMOR" with this one, and ill have to checkout the rest of the series but i must also add that this one was pretty amusing, Also nice to see that others liked it alot as it did win an daily award so congrats there, The ending of this was pretty neat and probably the best part leading from everything else. so there you presented all the areas of humor, story and cliffhangar wich all seemed to come together in a good random yet somewhatof a story for some good humor all around, anyways nice job all around, So in the end this was a pretty good piece if you ask me, i got a few good laughs out of it, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here is where i suggest some improving points, well to be honest it was pretty good as it was, and had all the elements of a great flash, maybe making it a tad longer wouldnt hurt, but for the most of it, it was right on.

~~OVERALL~~
And overall this was funny with a bit of racisim. but still amusing.

cyotecody555 responds:

Thanks for the review bud

[Psychadelic Sludge Tunnel]

Interesting

Well i must say this was pretty interesting, it is somewhat repettitive though and could use more variaty and changes in the turning , its trippy and neat though just too repettitive maybe if you had it go into differant scenes and what not it mght have more depth to it, but i suppose for the most of it it was pretty trippy and guess thats what you were goingfor, the music was pretty cool, could have been louder though, so all and all this was a pretty good flash and i liked it, just a tadmore variaty and new things to see next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more variaty, more differant scenes and more differant animation dances.

~~OVERALL~~
Notbad of a flash kinda like a music player, its abit reppetitive though.

TheBoogley responds:

it's a loop, dude. When you get bored of it you turn it off... :)

[Walking the Walk]

Its decent

~~REVIEW~~
I must say this was very "ARTISTIC" and i love how it just starts off right away and all the walking is great, it has all sorts of differant characters walking back and forth, the music reall fits the animation of walkers, this was just an overall artistic piece and the music was very flowing of the visuals, so really awsome job on this awsome piece, now if i could offer any advice, it might be to change up the backround scenes so that it changes every once in awhile, even throwing in some clickble easter eggs or something maybe on unque characters or something, other then that this was pretty good, great stuff, keep up the creative wheels.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was pretty good, very artistic, it does lack multiple backround scenes, and even unique characters, possble making some easter egg options wouldnt hurt either.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall a good creative flash needs more backround scenes though.

TheBoogley responds:

thanks! You're decent! :D

[Evil Dead Ejaculation]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe so this was amusing especially the little "INTRO" i love how from the intro it gets right into stuff, as for the evil dead theme that was neat, so the whole, "DARKNESS" scene was cool, but maybe instead of all dark have a dim light somehow, would give another perspective on things and such, the voices and sound/FX was pretty good and made for an amusing story here, was notbad at all and i got a few laughs from this, you should have had more scene stuff from the movie though, maybe even a window with some scenes or something, other then that this was pretty good, very entertaining if you ask me, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As suggested above some other scenes like from the evildead movie, and some more light in the darkness just a little as to not take away from the whole darkness idea.

~~OVERALL~~
Kinda short but was still pretty good and amusing, it was cute.

Psychopath responds:

Yeah, the animation is bad and the darkness scene could use the most amount of work. Fixing all the problems with this is comparable to trying to repair a condemned house, just when you had one big problem fixed, you have to face another series of big problem.

One at a time I guess.

[OBO2]

Randomly funny

~~REVIEW~~
So first off this was "INTERESTING" to say the least, had some nice portion at the start with the colored parts with the fox coming out of the guys mouth, so there it started to get random, and then it really got bazarr from there on, i like thw whole idea of being a silent film and all but seems like you went a whole nother rout wishc was ok since random tends to be pretty funny, as for improving on other stuff, maybe some more color added throughout the flash, and possibly even more random moments, other then that this was pretty good and i got a good amount of humor from it so nice work and somewhat good effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more use of color, and even more use of the random factor could make this even more amusing.

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and random, got a few chuckles from this one.

Joelasticot responds:

~~REVIEW~~
Lots of spelling and typing errors make this review difficult to read. Also, just describing what is going on in the Flash isn't particularly helpful to the author(s).

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try using splitting your review into sentences next time so that reading it isn't such a chore.

~~OVERALL~~
Poor review, will not read again. 3/10

[[RD11] ROBOT Dancin']

Amusing robot

~~REVIEW~~
haha ok this was pretty cute, the dancing robot dancing to what i think is "MADONNA" but i could be wrong what was even better about this was that you filmed it with a camera and added all the frames into a movie, now this was pretty neat, a few issues might be the view screen is not large enogh, maybe have a few robots dancing and interacting with eachother, so its a simplistic flash with video but i found it to be amusing and entertaining, so notbad work, just wish there was more then just the loop, anyways good idea here i enjoyed it. hope to see more of this sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
could have a larger view screen, and more stuff for the robot to do with walking and interacting with differant backround scenes

~~OVERALL~~
cute little robot dancing to madonna

Punisher responds:

While you may be "Like a Virgin" that was def not Madge.