XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A flash made of B's:Part5]

Haha these are old yet still entertaining and give me some good laughs clock day goes way back and brings up fun times with clocks, the animation was not too bad, wish there was more to them though, but for the mostpart it is what it is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more depth and more backrounds but then again its clock day.

~X~

Haggard responds:

Funny to see your review here, I remember wanting to do at least SOMETHING for Clock Day and threw this together in like 10 minutes. Too bad the sound didn't work, though.

[SBC is hurt when you blam]

And another funny and amusing strawberry clock flash, I can never get enough of these as they entertain me but the problem is you cant improve on these as they are meant to be this way, but it was notbad.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to improve on in a SBC movie

~X~

ChandlerThompson responds:

Wow, thanks for the review man! I completely forgot about this flash but I'm stoked you're still reviewing. Keep up the great critiques man, it seriously brightens an animator's day!

[Once upon a time]

Notbad of an animation

Well you have something interesting here, it was interesting and you added some nifty visuals, i really like the direction you took here and it all made for a decent little flash movie. This was a strange one ofcourse, but i found the animation to be pretty interesting it was somewhat short but i guess you were going more for the humor of the joke and all, i thought this could have gone a little longer though, but anyways you have a good theme here, and i did get some laughs from it, but anyways good stuff here. And so an entertaining experience we have come up with here, there are some things that you could do to make it better but ill leave that for later, but for the mostpart i was entertained with your movie entry here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i may have an idea or two or just a suggestion that could help to improve on this, but you dont have to take my advice at all but i thought i would throw out some small ideas for your mind to ponder on, so here you are and hope it helps. So with this one you could probably make it longer, i could even see this going into a series like a number of things that happen to the pig but thats just one idea.

AskCrank responds:

Thanks for the long review i will take it on board

[Kinect Rage]

So this was entertaining

A decent opening scene you have here, a good start to a decent submission, allthough it could have some improved elements but for waht it is you have impressed this viewer, so keep up the decent work, and ill be an instant fan, OK so this was a nifty little toon you have here, good characters some nice animation, but really some real nice "CAMERA-SHOTS" too going from top and side shots that was a nifty thing you did there and is always nice to see that as not alot of flashes take that type of effort and such, so nice effort there, i did think it could have been abit longer though and maybe adding some "SUBTITLES" would be a great plus, but anyways nice job here and nice effort most of all nice animation. So i have enjoyed your work here today and hope to see more of it in the comming future, if you keep making stuff like this and keep improving on stuff i will ofcourse be right there to enjoy it aswell, so nice effort you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And this tends to be a good part of my review because this is where i get to help in some areas maybe not but maybe there will be some idea that can help to make this submission slighty better and if not atleast i tried. The one thing i thought could be better with this one, might be to add some sort of subtitles, its not needed in some cases but maybe in this one just so you can know everything thats going on in the dial-log and all, and it makes it a better overall upgrade. also make it a tad longer maybe more story aswell.

rambojoe responds:

Yeah, the flash was a little to short that's for sure, wish rambojoe had more time to have worked on it. But we had to do this project in less than a week(for lame reasons). So it left a lot of other ideas out to dry. SUBTITLES! well if people knew half the things I said in this flash I would be in deep trouble.JK.

thanks for the review :D

[Peace Out Love JoeCartoon]

Very vibrant

I really like these pieces, they may not be everyones faves, but i do like them, they bring a certain something to the table and thats what makes them differant from the rest so nice job on making this it is a decent submission and hope you make more like this one, Well i really liked this tune, first off the color was very colorfull and vibrant, and you really put the effort in with the color here, from backrounds to characters, and the animation came in handy aswell, with showing off that color, The "AUDIO" was really good aswell, great voices, anyways good stuff, I think if i was going to improve anything about this little flick, i would say maybe adding some subtitles just for the extra option, now with your tune here it really was not needed but it would be a nice option, and just some simple text would be fine. anyways good work here, i look forward to more of your work soon. You really did outdo yourself on this one, the effort does show, and you cant ask for any more then that, So keep up with these unique typs, and keep making stuff, as long as theres something to create then keep on making them,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here is the good part, this is the part where we can improve on stuff or just show off some new and inspiring ideas that could help make this or even future stuff better so hope you will atleast look into some of these suggestions, Why not add some subtitles it would be a nice lil feature, not needed in your flash but a nifty feature would be nice.

JoeCartoon responds:

Thank you! I might just add a subtitle to the next one! Thank you! Beers! Joe

[Parallel Memories: Ep 1-1]

Great design

The animation is nice but not awesome, Doesnt mean it cant be awsome its actually decent work and is in a pretty goos shape of quality, B utit still needs some Tweaking there and here and all around for some better outcomes It does have some interesting and entertaining things. all about it though and thats what drew me to this. I would like to say that just the menu alone and all the extras from scene selection to settings and so one was a very good idea and it gave this flash a more "FULLER" feel and touch so props to you on that aspect of things, Now as for the actual animation, The "AUDIO" to me was not the best of quality, there was some slight scratchy sounds with mic it seemed, maybe that can be looked into, The "VISUALS" are really good though, you showed some impressive results and the "SPRITE" and or "PIXLE" work was really good The "STORY" was ok could have had more depth and more story to the characters. And with this flash it was actually pretty good, iliked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, ihave posted a few ideas i hope they help to improve on this so good luck, and i hope to see improvments soon, or in the near future. But untill then this was a decent piece of flashworks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So while this was a pretty nifty flash movie here there were some tweaks and changes that can be addressed, as mentioned throughout the review aswell as here, you can put that extra improving for an overall better outcome with some more quality added, so here are some thing i found lacking and or needeing some changes. audio was abit low quality some scratchy sounds in the recordings it seemed, someting you can look into later i suppose.

Pienkaito responds:

Outstanding review right there.
I'll keep the things you mentioned in mind and correct those flaws as good as I can.

Thank you very much for your constructive review.

[Robotic]

This was an interesting video you had for us.

So i really like this as this starts off there are some interesting stuff that get going right away, so for one very possitive point you show the effort to get things started in the right direction, and thats always a plus. So with flash movies like this one, its always nice to see the effort such as you have done with this movie. So this was an interesting video you had for us the music seems to go great with all the visuals. This is one of those flash videos that i wouldnt mind some subtitles to go with, just it would give it a nice effect especially with how the robot voice sounded and all, But i must say this was still a pretty interesting and entertaining flash vid you had going so i was pretty pleased with the outcome, A good robotic video just add some subtitles next time would be anice option You a hve a decent flash here, but there there is still some room for improvments even a few little things here and there, but in the end it can only help you and make your flash much better and again in the end more enjoyble for all who see it such as myself. i did enjoy what you have here now just would like to see more effort all around, so good luck with all that.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And here we are once again in the improvment area, and before i do get to that, its a decent flash submission youhave, but could use some fixing and cleaning up on areas, Some of these ideas will do greatly on this whole piece, and i do look forward to seeing some upgrades and improved details, so give it a shot. Now I mention Subtitles only because its nice to have for viewers, cause sometimes something might be missed, just a little something extra that will make a better flash and such. and having some subtitels and it does have to be much just a little text at the bottom so its not distraction to the flash and or game, and it can go a long way, try it out you will notice it does go a long way with the viewers and fans

koit responds:

Great and all but you keep mentioning subtitles, yet in my description it tells you how to access the subtitles built into the movie.

Press the S top left corner !