XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sasuke shorts [part 1]]

Entertaining

Well this was entertaining the "CHARACTERS" could be better designed but maybe that was your intent, all the little scenes and clips are cool and kind of funny.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More design on characters more detail.

~X~

KKING1 responds:

I made this years ago

[D2FX: Juicebox...]

Nice story

Some of the stuff we could see here looks pretty good, others where in need of some more effort There is some good Potential it all though, Some stuff cane have a Refined effort about it all though. This actually reminded me of the old "ESKIMO-BOB" stuff lol, Well I have to admit that this was actually cute and the "CHARACTERS" are smooth-lines the subtitles was a nice little touch here, and overall you had a cute little story so nice job all around. So I keep a phrase for a certain few and that is appetite for creativity and thats exactly what you have created with this flick right here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So think about some of the ideas suggested in the review. I like this production, hope to see some improvments soon. go with ideas may they be good or average ideas maybe one or two will help and improve on things. This was not short by any means but I can see it being longer with more of the fun story you already have.

~X~

StupidlyEPIC responds:

This story is 100% true. RayG did give me a juicebox and I loved it. Then he had to hunt the biggest juice box of them all. But bigger doesn't always mean better.

[Office Spider: Episode 6]

This was notbad

you have raised the bar dramatically with everything that has been going on in this flash entry, There could be some better stuff and the way you did stuff better Utilised with the way it was presented, But honestly with all Criticisms a-side This was acually pretty decent and i had some good fun with this, so I was pleased with how this cameout. This was a decent flash and I like the concept of a spider and whatnot the other office people are funny and some of the jokes are pretty good aswell. Now this was something kind of different but thats actually what I have enjoyed about it, Now ofcourse its the ending now, But I can really see you building onto this As this was a decent piece of work, but anyways best of luck to you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its always good to be Prepared and while you dont need a Makeover on this flash but as a Bonus there could be some slight improvments, No this is not perfect, but what it does have is some good potential you do have a few things you can improve on, and all it takes is a few more ideas to run with, so here are a few. Maybe adding some more sound/fx with the action scenes, more music that changes up when in action scenes aswell.

~X~

danomano65 responds:

Thanks! It's been a long time since I worked on an Office Spider. The character ended up on the Newgrounds banner at San Diego Comic Con! I met Tom Fulp and attended SDCC. It was awesome. Since then I've been making my graphic novel series, which you can read at http://www.verdacomb.com and I also have a second graphic novel series here: http://www.tofuzilla.com! One day I may make a longer Office Spider that covers most of these ideas, except with better animation of course- and original music. I appreciate your review! You can also check out music for my comic here: https://soundcloud.com/entergalacticdj

[Strawberry's Resign CDO8]

Interesting

Well I understand all the clock day stuff but this was silly, but maybe that was the idea, regardless it was interesting and I like the old design of strawbery clock better but still I got a laugh out of this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well ofcourse more content some animation and just more too it.

~X~

antigenalvin responds:

Thank you. I really enjoy your reviews

[Dark Knight Interrogation]

Fantastic

A decent presentation, one that I can empathise with and see that its on the road to better things, some things can be Refined more and with more detail, but i really liked all the effort and all the work here, there was some points that could be much better but for the mostpart this was pretty entertaining. haha this was funny and very amusing the characters are pretty impressive aswell, I think this could use some subtitles but other then that this was pretty decent work. And here we are once again at the end of a decent flash I like how you are going with this one and it does seem like you are going in the right direction.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so here in this little session of the review I like to get some ideas thrown your way, including some helpfull hints and tips, and they should help so here you are, go wild with them if you like. Maybe adding some subtitles with this one, I could also see this as a series of small flashes or something like that.

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just2pale responds:

I hope I've improved somewhat since I uploaded this movie in 2008. :p Subtitles are always a plus, I just never thought of putting them in any of my animations. I may look into this.

Thank you for the review!

[Broly The Legendary SS]

Interesting

Nice entry you have here, I realize you were aiming for a certain style with this, and thats cool and it has come out kind of unique, it was an interesting flash submission, and I was drawn to this, so I was not easily bored with this, would like to see more of this and see it go furhter and even deeper, while still keeping some quality to it. ok so this was interesting, the art on the characters was pretty impressive and the "EFFECTS" were even better, all around a good job here, this did seem kind of short more like a "TRAILER" of shorts. I really look forward to seeing more stuff like this, untill then keep working on great stuff. nothing else to say except keep up the effort in this one and future flash stuff you have planned.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I Encourage you on some of these ideas, it will ad more Exposure So there can be alot of different things you can do to improve on things But maybe all this really needs is some tweeks and some possible new situations but maybe you can try a few suggested things. I would ad a tad more bit of content to give more detail on whats going on or going to see, something to give the viewers something to be waiting for in any type of full version.

~X~

hrechkaness responds:

I feel like you tried your hardest to actually be NON descriptive lol. Still holding the title for number one newgrounds reviewer? I think you've done a couple of my animations in the past. Hope this wasn't just bot spam tho.....

[Flecko's Halloween]

cool

So as I sit here and get ready to write this review, I am already decided that you have put some decent effort and you gave some good Focus to alot of this and in trying to make it really good, inwich I think you have acomplished. so from start to finish I was amused and entertained, keep up the good effort and good style. You did put a scary mode and feel into this as soon as the opening scene starts up nice visuals and overall really came together, the vices are pretty good but there is some "STATIC" when you get some high pitched voices. You have an idea here and something decent here, I had fun with this one but it could use some more effort as suggested below and above and hope those ideas help to make it even better for all, but even as it is it was pretty decent if you ask me, keep up the decent efforts though. And hope to see more of your flash-works sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok here is some insight on a few positive ideas and some things I saw that could be looked into, So lets really jump start this flash with some new and old ideas, That can make for some positive changes. there was some static on high pitched sounds so maybe some sound quality work.

~X~

FleckoGold responds:

I figured as much about the sound, when I listened to it later on. I agree. I've thought about putting more hours into audio practices, I could probably get good at it, but as it stands, now, I'm mainly "visually oriented", creatively.

Thanks for the info. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've kept at it since this cartoon's release. I feel I've made a lot of headway in my style, and I'm looking forward to releasing a new cartoon as soon as I can get that remaining time into it.

Thanks!

[Power Star 4]

great film

Now Criticisms aside Before I get started on the details and such, I just wanted to say a few things in a more enlightening way of the flash, first off it was a refreshing flash entry and showed off some decent skills here and there and what not.
and here you have a great flick with a match up of mario vs luigi wich was fun and you had some really good "MUSIC" to match up well and the fight scenes were pretty impressive aswell, I like what you have done here. the "EFFECTS" are really good in this one, The Concept really had me here as it did Grasp the audiance aswell, There are only a few spots that could be cleaned up or Ironing out but the Conclusion here is that this was like Visionary idea and project and I had some good enjoyment out of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So maybe here we can modify a few things just have to be Prepared aswell as Visualize your ideas into new heights and beyond, So I have a few Proposed Changes and its as small as just a few Minor Details. This was really impressive i would say some subtitles but it was good as is.

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D-SuN responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it. I'd love to have another crack at a fan sprite film - one day indeed!

[Explaining Clock Day]

And here we have something for clock day yet its different, I did like the effort you are putting here but maybe more effort next time although it is clock day material so I understand it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content would be nice but again I understand it being clock day and all.

~X~

Haggard responds:

With some more time (and yes, more effort) I might actually be able to put up a half-decent flash. But since I'm so very untalented my motivation to put more effort into flashes isn't very high. So, that's why I can only submit flashes on Clock Day, heh.