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[MurderLands - HistoruOne; BEETS]

Entertaining

I like this with the animation and the music and meshed them well together with a nice style here the animation was very nice wish there was more backrounds but the music really made up for that overall a nice piece indeed. So while I liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, I went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, Nice efforts here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some more detail in the backrounds.

~X~

MRat responds:

Thank you for the thoughtful and thorough review. I will be incorporating more backgrounds as the series progresses. The line art will likely become cleaner as well. I do intend to maintain the rough animatic aesthetic, though, with few inbetweens and colour-coded line art.

- Ryan

[War!]

Fun stick Battle

A fun stick battle, I did think this was kind of "SHORT" but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations. but it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was rather short, but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations.

~X~

wallpaperman responds:

Wow, Wayne Colt still out here smashing the reviews. Crazy you're still going dude, peace.

[Taco and Burrito New Years Reaolution RUBBEROIONBATTLE JAN2017]

Notbad

This was cool, I like this series you have going on, some funny "CHARACTERS" good voices and some slight humor in there but you should really think about making these much longer, or adding more shorts along with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above needs more content or other shorts along with it.

~X~

ericpolley responds:

For sure :) Thank you again. This is a rubberonionbattle, which has a limit of 15 seconds. But the next video I post will have a bit more meat to it.

[Taco Hut Hot Dogs]

Notbad

Ok so lets get this movie started here, sofar you have some good visuals, and something of pretty good interest, here, And I really like how this starts off. Allthough this did seem a tad bit short you still presented a good and funny joke about tacos ofcourse. And now that we have come to the ending to this entertaining yet amusing movie I was well taken back with how this was presented so nice job on this piece indeed, and look forward to more from you.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything I might suggest would be adding some more "SCENES" more content stretch it out just a tad.

~X~

ericpolley responds:

Thank you! I am currently writing some new material for these characters. I created this short as a bit of a test for up and coming shorts to come, hopefully episodes. lol, we will see :)

[Tha Cliff Reborn]

This was interesting

Well I have to say this was interesting the animation was vute and the music was very good and flowed well with what was going on in the actuall animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe take it into other scenes other cliffs and such.

~X~

Blueprint4 responds:

Thanks, the cliff in the next "Tha Cliff Reborn" animation will defiantly be different.

[dugtrio alola form]

Lol cute

Well this one was pretty cute if you ask me even the music was cute, backround and effects were not half bad, and overall it was just randomly funny, so nice effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer with some extra added scenes.

~X~

thesecondplayer responds:

thank you very much

[It´s Just a Prank, Bro!]

Great stuff bro

Lol ok this was pretty good it was "FAST-PACED" and kind of short but still very entertaining art and animation are top notch, and sound and voices are great and to top it off it was funny and entertaining, so good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good little short here maybe I have just one little suggestion. since it is a short film maybe you can ad more short ones with it or something like that.

~X~

drainzerhg responds:

luv u <3, bro

[Steam Train + Game Grumps]

Funny stuff

This was actually pretty funny and amusing, I did however feel that adding some "SUBTITLES" would have been great, not that its needed but would have been nice for the flash entry here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So I have suggested some subtitles options it would be a real plus on your part. and I think the fans would appreceate it, and doesnt have to be anything fancy, just something simple text and all, try it out, it cant hurt.

~X~

TMJBtv responds:

Thanks for watching!