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[Shapes - Episode 19 - The Campfire]

Different

Well this one was pretty different but I like all the changes and congrats on the daily award that's always a plus but anyways nifty flash you have here and seems like you like making these with all the episodes this one was kind of nifty I like all the changes in this one and different styles of course hope to see much more from you soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as this was kinda good already

~X~

sadakab responds:

Thanks for taking the time to share so many thoughts on my work man! Glad you enjoyed it and had so much to say

[Vignettes]

Really nice work

This was some really nice work. I love the dark feel of this on some of them anyways, your art style is unique and different, your character design is also very different and artistic, this was all a strange element but I liked it, I will also ad this as one of my faves, so nice work here, and keep it up. I really enjoyed this flash and all that you have presented here, there was alot to see and it was overall fun so great job all around below I have left a few ideas that may help to improve on this flash, so keep up the good work and I look forward to more. from you and more of this type and style you did here, more effort never hurt either. Nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Bring on music alot more faster and more deeper.

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sadtape responds:

I appreciate this very much!

[Ode to Cigarette]

Nice flick

This was cool the "CHARACTERS" were pretty cool I use to play gaia online many years ago this is one of those kinds of flash works you could ad some subtitles the voices were small yet you can hardly hear them at times but i would ad some subtitles regardless.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some subtitles would be a plus here.

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Cycon responds:

SUBTITLES? I can't read so why should you. Best I can do yas for'd be subtitties in russian cause they bouda be had on the cheap

also yes im petty and have a sensitive mental state so i replied to a 3 year old comment because you had critical feedback and didn't even look ahead to see that, in fact, i addressed your issue with the subtitles by posting it on youtube where they do it for me kinda so i dunno, my feedback would be you should work on that feedback like maybe i could improve the fuckin audio you're complaining about with solutions to other problems okay kid, maybe then I'll put in some subtitles and get the deaf audience but right now they're the only ones safe from how shitty my work is and for real, im playin dont get facebook on me about it i just wanna say thanks and give you something to read since i didn't the first time and i wanna include deaf kids like yourself for reals. Good suggestion, kinda, but work on it you amateur and thanks, fuck im tired

also im flagging this as spam tho jk

[Limbo-Wave]

Wow beautiful.

This is something special and this was just no random find for today but something unique and you really push the limits with this one. This was very impressive, you use alot of effects and thats ok cause it really pushes the movie to more limits and your characters are "SIMPLE" but you still push it to new heights and thats what I really liked here, the "MUSIC" wasa big part of the drive aswell, so very nice work here I like this it was different and unique. I do hope you make more stuff like this. So from start to finish I was really impressed and you have shown us some amazing skills and talents and that takes a special kind of effort, not something you see every day.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
push more of the effects even some really flashy effects with lighting and explosions really push that element.

~X~

javiSkerss responds:

Thanks for your support and advice you do not know how good it feels when you appreciate your work and effort thanks !!!

[Episode 1 - Don't mess with Tomato]

Wow lol

So here was some good enjoyment and you made it so it was a good entry here and nice find on the portal here so nice submission. Haha this really went a different way then I was expecting but you pulled it off just right so great job on the joke the animation was good, your little characters that made this all up was notbad either, as for what can make this better im sure a lil more adventure but maybe that can be done in future episodes, but you do have an idea here and hope the series does work out well. You did what a lot cant do and bring fourth a nice flash entry with all the right elements, So a really good find of a flash submission.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more adventure and maybe more interactivity with the other characters.

~X~

carlitozg responds:

Hey man, thanks a lot. I'm really glad that you liked it and yes in future episodes will be more characters. Here I just wanted to introduce main character of the cartoon in this short animation. :D

[John and Loonof - Christmas Special 2017]

Lovely Movie

And here was something really special of a movie really great use of color and you gave this some great humor, I think you can ad some subtitles, but anyways nice animation smooth and the "VOICES" were pretty cool the story itself was pretty entertaining and you put some effort in here so nice job there. You have something good here, allthough it does need abit more, but really overall it was pretty balanced just needed abit more stuff, as stated already, so great work here keep making more flash as these are pretty good and lots of fun. Ienjoyed this for alot of differant stuff and in the end it was pretty decent, so nice effort here keep up the fantastoc work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe, some subtitles, voices were clear and sharp but subtitles are a nice option for viewers.

~X~

TylerBasham responds:

Thank you very much for the compliments and what I should improve on! I'll take both into consideration! Thank you very much

[MurderLands - HistoruOne; BEETS]

Entertaining

I like this with the animation and the music and meshed them well together with a nice style here the animation was very nice wish there was more backrounds but the music really made up for that overall a nice piece indeed. So while I liked this flash there are some good and bad about it, I went over it abit but have suggested some more ideas below hope it helps, its not major but could use more of the effort on little stuff here and there, Nice efforts here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some more detail in the backrounds.

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MRat responds:

Thank you for the thoughtful and thorough review. I will be incorporating more backgrounds as the series progresses. The line art will likely become cleaner as well. I do intend to maintain the rough animatic aesthetic, though, with few inbetweens and colour-coded line art.

- Ryan

[War!]

Fun stick Battle

A fun stick battle, I did think this was kind of "SHORT" but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations. but it was notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was rather short, but you can always stretch that out with more content and or adding other short flicks along with this one to make it like a multiple of short animations.

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wallpaperman responds:

Wow, Wayne Colt still out here smashing the reviews. Crazy you're still going dude, peace.