XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Duck Day]

Cute

This was a pretty cute animation here you have added lots of good humor in this one and it being just black and white was kinda nifty aswell wouldnt hurt to have an ounce of color though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Dont get me wrong I like the whole black and white style, but im thinking with a touch of color here and there it might spice things up now its just an idea just thought with all the black and white style that a touch of color would have more focus on everything else, anyways good luck.

~X~

CameronMc responds:

Yeah, color is kind of intimidating honestly lol but It's something I'm working on more and more! I appreciate the review.

[Divided by Zero]

Awsome

Wow I must say this was pretty well done, great voices awsome view shots, very well done on the animation, and while this was just a trailer of sorts it was very impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The onlything I can really suggest here would be maybe some subtitles but not a needed option.

~X~

Lazymodecomics responds:

Thank you sir!

-Jake

[fishy eater]

Um ok

Well that was kind of short but I must say it was still somewhat entertaining and whatnot, good for a laugh or two. and it does show some effort on your part.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer, and more content for sure.

~X~

joshboy101 responds:

yeah i would of, i just wanted to finish this thing before i go back to school

[Happy Birthday Dom!]

Very short

Haha dont get me wrong this was very funny and a good flick of a submission if you ask me great art and you pulled off the joke well, but In my opinion this could be better with either more content or other short clips along with this short one, just an idea to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice film here, But I should comment that the things that are of a small concern would be that they are too short and they could use some extras a few more atleast and that would give the whole flash entry more depth, so adding a few more episodes per flash entry would be a good effort on your part. anyways nice effort.

~X~

DJaxsNG responds:

This is pretty old, dude. And it was a birthday gift from DomFera.. back then, short videos seemed to be fine. It's 2016 now :)
The improvement was already achieved. But since my stuff isn't short anymore. It's taking me a lot of time to finish a long animation, that's for sure.

But again.. it wasn't an episode. Just a short animation gift. But I thank you for the critique. :)

[HOT SANTA HENTAI]

um ok

So this one was very random, lots of random jpegs, and some below average artwork, but it was funny and amusing, kind of short though, other then that it was alright for a laugh or two.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I did think you over-used the images like there was tomany of them, and might have been better with some of your own drawings and art, even if it takes some time to do them would show more effort in the end. Also making it longer with more original content would be a plus.

~X~

the-starwolf responds:

hey xwayne nice to get some reviews from you on my old work, the mass using of picture was actually what i wanted to do hmmm

[Animation tests]

Nice concept

Enticing is what this was and you have a nact for this sort of stuff and allthough there are some things that could be improved but I will get to that later in this review, but Quite Frankly this was a great start to what I hope will be a fantastic idea turned into flash adventure. You have a nice concept here, I really love the black and white on this, but most of all really like the spots of color and such, I do wish you had more of a story here but you really made a nice idea here, and I can see it propelling into something even more. Also the "RANDOM" you presented here was really awsome though. And once again I must say that was a pretty good entry something differant but I liked it for what it is, Wish there was more like this, but for what it is, its pretty interesting and entertaining ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was a certainly good flash if you ask me, but it could be better with a few suggestions and ideas, Theres a number of things and ways you could go about it Great concept with this one, but needs more of a story base you have the animations down and the detail just put it together in a great kind of story.

~X~

ganuganu responds:

Thank you for the detailed review. First i thought to rate my capabilities by posting the tests here and then planned to make a Zombie animation.

[Alfred Gets Fixed]

Funny

Well you have something interesting here, it was interesting and you added some nifty visuals, I really like the direction you took here and it all made for a decent little flash movie. You have all the Material, and you have presented it well, No I mean Wonderfully well done, This was a good find in the portal. Funny film here it was entertaining the animation was spot on and the music was just right aswell, you can "FIX" the "LOOPING" butother then that this was not half bad. Well here we are at the end here or almost to the end of the review, and What I got from this experience of the flash was that it was an interesting one and you know what you are doing and you have put those forward with ease, some other things could be discussed and so on for improvments. So in my Closing Remarks you have something good here keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So a good flash lots of great stuff, but still could use some extra efforts and details, so below are a few ideas that may help, hope to see them used, it would only help in making your flash much better. This flash needs a stop action code, it will stop the looping that it does, adding a replay at the end of the movie will help aswell, just a good idea that should bring abit more quality to the flash. that was the onlything I found.

~X~

emily-youcis responds:

Lol dude I made this 10 years ago when I was 16.
Check out my new shit, I think I improved. : ]

[The Neverhood]

Interesting stuff

Well I guess this is more like a slide show then anything else but it does give you an idea of what the game is about, I wouldnt mind if you added more "INFORMATION" on what the game is about though not just visuals, but nice clay slips here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more information on how the game is played and whatnot, not just visuals.

~X~

Ratcaller responds:

Oh boy! I honestly DID NOT expect anyone to still watch my stuff anymore xD
Thanks for the review anyways, despite being it almost historical now.