XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meiya Mitsurugi]

Notbad at all

So this was pretty good, I like the purplish hair here I do believe some added shine with some sparkle on her hair would be a plus well even more shine then you have just an idea, the character is a great design here, love the smile on the face, you should really make more stuff like this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do believe some added shine with some sparkle on her hair would be a plus well even more shine then you have just an idea

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SquizofrenicCat responds:

I could have added some blending to make it shine more, yeah! Not sure how'd I'd make it otherwise though.

Thank you for the review! Doing more character shots like these sounds like a fun idea. The smile is actually an inside joke between me and the requester so I'm glad you liked it.

[Gina Shaking It (GIF)]

Nice bounce

Wow this was a really good bounce you have here some nice elements to the bounce you have that bounce flowing like the real thing also like the animation on the background stars rally some nice work here hope to see more

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Not sure I would change stuff but if I had to maybe some color in the background stars

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PaddleTone responds:

Thanks! I'll definitely be posting more in the future!

[Huntress]

Greatness

Now this was pretty intense here some nice "REALISTIC" view here I like the form of the character and the expression was just intense, Maybe some added shine and sparkle on the weapon she is holding, Very Impressive art style you have here this was a pretty solid piece you have covered alot of stuff and pushed the limits on this piece. This brings us close to the ending of the review so While this was notbad at all I wouldnt mind seeing more to it, it was generally a good and decent art piece and the effort does show, I like how you presented this and it was just pretty decent so nice job indeed.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
shine and sparkle on the weapon she is holding

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clayscence responds:

thank you very much for your input!! I really appreciate it :)

[Ragnarok Online Fanart]

Beautiful pieve

Wow I am amazed with your talent on this "PIECE" and just love that "HAT" that is a nifty and unique style and you made it work, The blank backround could be touched up with some added backround or distance scene and props, the whole character was amazing with all of its beauty.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
The blank backround could be touched up with some added backround or distance scene and props

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cracker2eat responds:

Thank you so much for your comment :) I've taken your advice and my latest piece now at least have background :v

[K. Round]

Very cute

I love the very large "CHIP" this was a cool piece here, This is a work of progress a progress that takes some unique style, This here was a nice piece of work and seemed to come alive as I dwell deeper into the visual here, the deep stylish of it all really spoke volumes. aswell as some Explosive ideas here. And well thats my Extended review and I hope I have added some Polish here, And there it is a nice piece of art with some nice detail you certainly know what you are doing and you bring the talent aboard so nice job But you seemed to be Accustomed to nice work like this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe more shine on the chip

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iAbokai responds:

Thanks a lot for your incredible review! i really appreciate it. ^u^

[Mr. Felis Shirt!]

Really nice design

So you have a nice design for the "SHIRT" its really good quality I almost feel like you should put a border on this maybe the leaves could form some border like boxed in area, but as this shirt is complete its pretty impressive, you could make lots of these and sell them but anyways nice work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I almost feel like you should put a border on this maybe the leaves could form some border like boxed in area, but as this shirt is complete its pretty impressive

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ChutneyGlaze responds:

I cannot get enough of your reviews thank you so much! Yes I actually agree a border might be real nice...

[Eye practice.]

Nice eyes

So the "EYES" are pretty nice here, very good pencil work and the shadings come out pretty well too, I dont have any suggestions of improvments because this was your practice work, but you do some amazing work here and hope you make even more soon it would be an honor to review more from you.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I dont have any suggestions of improvments because this was your practice work

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Rashuko responds:

Thank you!

[Skinny Dipping Abigail]

Nice

So here was a nice charchter in the water a well designed charchter the water was nice but I believe more energy needs to be put into the matter like bubbles more sparkly effects that water gives off and more wave like feel of the water but everything else is pretty good here with some nice visual effects here and I for sure want to see what else you have next in store for your next project

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A few water additional effects would be nice

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PaddleTone responds:

Yea, I've definitely improved on my design of water since this artwork.

[Follow the Leader: RemnantComic (GIF)]

Love the flow

I love the flow of animation here everything flowed so fluidly and just looked realistic like the flow of the sandles and the skirt bounced as the lift of the pull ups worked it's way through so very nice animation on this as for any improvements maybe more animation from the standing two charchters but you have some nice work here and some nice skills here so keep up the good work on this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some small added animation

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PaddleTone responds:

I didn't want the two girls overshadowing the girl doing pull ups, but I'll remember this for next time!

[Cyberdarklord Comission, Starfire and Raven]

Well this was different

So this was pretty different but I like it and I like the scene here you have tons of props and details to make up the room and the spanking scene is really nice and a red bottom was convincing enough with this one so nice art nice detail and good energy in this art piece here really nice color too I would for sure ad more shiny points and lighting effects but besides that this was amazing work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Some lighting effects and shiny points added

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PaddleTone responds:

The environment was really well lit. Where would you suggest adding more shiny points?