XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober 2017 #12 - Spooky Selfie]

Very nice

So this was pretty good here, the black and white was nice the deep stare this one has is vert nice I like that you showed off your pens and such a very nice piece here and another art piece that does not need any changes here, so really nice work on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes needed.

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BoMToons responds:

Thanx!

[Dickneck Comic Page 1]

Cool comic

A newgrounds BBS comic that was cool, not sure why I have not seen this before but its pretty amazing work, the color and darkness of the bbs are just right this is a nifty idea and think you should continue on with this piece and make a whole series out of it and the bbs, anyways nice idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a nifty idea and think you should continue on with this piece and make a whole series out of it and the bbs

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Galneda responds:

You're in luck! This thing was continued in my flash animation Dick Neck: Origins.

https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/509631

With an extended story that kicked up in another thread, found here:

https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1330422/1

At this moment, there are no intentions to continue Dick Neck's saga. A few sequel ideas have been written, but none executed. I'd be willing to share what I've written, but given how my time is spent, there's nothing happening with it anytime soon. A perfect opportunity for some other artist to give their own crack at it, because at this point nothing is canonized and it's all open to interpretation by anyone. No one owns Dick Neck. So have at it!

Thanks again for the thorough review!

[Home Sweet Home]

Cool

so this was a subtle piece here you added some nice visuals here the canvus seemed small I think you could really improve on this one making a larger canvus for more visual and details to be shown, and two maybe more of a glowing light from the window to give off that mystery of whats going on, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
one making a larger canvus for more visual and details to be shown, and two maybe more of a glowing light from the window to give off that mystery of whats going on

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Galneda responds:

This is one of my earliest pieces as I was figuring out my Wacom Intuos 3 tablet (the first tablet I've ever had) and Photoshop. A far cry from MS Paint with a mouse or sketching on paper for me at that age. I agree, it is a bit small, and this is an aspect ratio I have since outgrown. This is demonstrated in my more recent submissions, and you're welcome to leave feedback on them as well.

I was still learning and experimenting with opacities at the time I made this. I'd like to think I'm more skillful about their execution nowadays.

Thanks again for the thorough review!

[Doom Faces]

Dark

So here was a cool and dark piece you have here, I like the faces this reminds me something out of a dark and scary movie I could see you adding some red glowing eyes on this piece to give it that even more scarier feel, but anyways really good texture and the faces came off well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you adding some red glowing eyes on this piece to give it that even more scarier feel

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Galneda responds:

I think red glowing eyes can be cliche sometimes.

This is actually from the end screen of the first Doom PC game, and you can compare and contrast to what I paid homage to and what I added to it. For the most part, I was trying to keep it close to the original piece this is based off of...so that's why there ain't LED's lodged into their eyeballs.

Thanks for the thorough review!

[Poke-Trainer]

Adorble

And this was an adorble piece Wow this was so cute I think some added detail and maybe other pokemon in the backround would have been nice too, Its things like this that I have come to really enjoy because they show the true energy and style that are within these kinds of art pieces. So these ideas make for some positive outcomes even if they are simple and or complex, But now I feel we will complete this review, but regardless nice effort awsome style and just a beautifull piece of art and great talent and awsome style, so once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think some added detail and maybe other pokemon in the backround would have been nice too

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ToxxyKiss responds:

O: An actual review~
Thanks for the solid critique. I always try to avoid having bland backgrounds, hopefully doing better at that lately.

[Ditched Teri]

Wow nice

Well Im unfamiluar of this "CHARACTER" but the sad face sadens me, as for improvment dont think it needs any but you have a nice piece of art here, And so with this one we start out with the little things that make this work, and its those little things that keep me interested. you have for sure Sinisterly caught my attention. So lets get this critique started. So I got some good pleasure from this piece, And its not everyday you get to see these kinds of talents so nice work to get this out there but still would like to see more of your work real soon.

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as for improvment dont think it needs any but you have a nice piece of art here

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Furboz responds:

Wow Thanks!! I never thought I would get such a good feedback... It's refreshing and encouraging..

To tell the truth I stopped doing this kinda works ever since in Deviantart and Tumblr never got any real praise for the extra effort... Now I feel all pumped up and eager to return to experimentation and development!

[Junk in the Trunk]

Nice

Well this was notbad, the insides outside was a nifty idea, the backround was ok I did think you could have done a little more with the backround maybe some design maybe some lighting effects maybe some more added detail, but you have some awsome talent the character was different but it was also cool.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you could have done a little more with the backround maybe some design maybe some lighting effects maybe some more added detail

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Bunbox responds:

Thank you very much for the thoughtful response! This piece was originally drawn in 2016, and so I absolutely agree with the background suggestion. Around this time in my artwork a lot of my backgrounds were so boring. Hopefully the future uploads in my gallery can reflect the journey I had to try and make them more interesting! : )

[Relaxing Kitty]

Nice character

And once again you have a nice character here, I was not too sure about the baackround the black is ok but it could have some texture maybe a design or even some backdrop scene something that would accent the character more, but regardless you do some amazing work here with all this detail.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I was not too sure about the baackround the black is ok but it could have some texture maybe a design or even some backdrop scene something that would accent the character

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VenusianCraft responds:

The commission was character art only, backgrounds are an additional $25, so I made it transparent.

[Atticus procrastinating]

This was interetsing

I like the "UNIQUE" design in this piece you have some nice paterns and ofcourse the main focus here was pretty good you have a nice style with this one and I look forward to even more, so nice work here hope to see more of this kind of stuff and more stylish elements so keep up the fabulus work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Make more like this.

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RazumiYazura responds:

I did have a lot of fun with this style. I do intend on making more like this in the future.

[NG VaultBoy: Level 3]

So these are cool

I have to say that you have done a nice job here on all these the character for one is welldone and love the shadow behind him, I think as a form of suggestion you could have some newground related stuff in the backround but I like the work, nice artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think as a form of suggestion you could have some newground related stuff in the backround

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Luis responds:

Yeah agree. I actually find them kinda ghetto looking now. Neat concept I suppose