XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pixel Cake]

Teh cake is a lie

Ok so this one here is ok here and not bad but a bit small. I know pixel art can be small due to the theme and size of it all, but I feel you could have added more to this in terms of size and maybe a setting. Maybe have people around the cake have their hands in the air or just animating the candles of the cake would have been a nice addition to this piece. I do like it tho and it is good for something new in your pixel artwork. I think keep it up, but maybe try the suggestions for the next one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe add more characters to this or animate it next time you do a pixel piece

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

XD Was wondering when someone would say that! This is true cake though. The cake is the truth.

I agree, would've liked to make something bigger too, but in lack of time I uploaded a game resource I had already made, and so... this was it this time. Do hope to do more next year!

[Merry Christmas!]

Nice

I think you have a great ability to make text into art. You should be creating fonts for sites as I do love the way your font looks in all of your art. You can tell you didnt just type it out but gave it real character. I love the textures inside everything and even the textures and patterns inside each background piece is nice to look at. I would add a border tho that fits the text and fix a small black error I see in the top left corner. Other then those bits of critique I do think you have a good talent and I hope to see more like this in the future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just add a border and fix a small black error

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I have been considering that actually. :) Found myself a service to make your own through a scanned set of letters. Just gotta start testing it out. Solid advice, and glad you liked this one too, thank you!

[Because we are "TEAM FORTRESS"]

Brilliant group

And here was a"BRILLIANT" put together group of characters here I am loving the "GLOW" in the backround, so in my opinion you dont need to change anything on this piece as you have trully outdone yourself on this art piece and its fine as is, Let this Bloom and shine thats what I saw here today, While some parts could be better on this you seem to be dedicated to other areas which made this to be a refreshing piece of art. This was a Satisfying and even somewhat Mythical piece I hope this Feedback helps to improve on future stuff, So as my eyes lay out the visual here, It reminds me that its a pleasure to see stuff like this, especially this particular piece it brings something different and unique to the end product.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
so in my opinion you dont need to change anything on this piece as you have trully outdone yourself on this art piece and its fine as is

~X~

ThatOneMotherfucker responds:

Not gonna lie, I woke up this morning and saw this. This has made my morning. Thank you!

[Happy Birthday Nick]

Interesting

I do find this one to be not bad and interesting. I do think your use of white space here is a bit bad, but nothing terrible. I would add more background features or textures and maybe even some designs to draw it all together. I understand with portraits that you need a focus on the main character but I feel based on your other work you could add so much more to the background here. I love the parot thing on the shoulder the most, it does have a top hat afterall, and the general teeth expression this man has as a character. I think that your cartoon art style is very unique and I hope more comes from this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would add some more details to the background and limit the white space being unused.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmmm that white background's really not the main focus you know. XD But you're right there is a bit much of it. Character could've been closer instead. And better centered. Might actually crop this one a bit... good noticing.

[Digitalart]

Beautiful

wow I love this especially the "FLAME" red like hair it throws a viusal idea maybe making a border on the edges here with the red flame like hair, A fantastic piece you have here, there are some points i may get to later that you could improve on but for the mostpart it was pretty nifty I thought, I did find this to be Delightful and just an overall piece, allthough some areascould be improved and I will get into that. Alright so I will throw some props at you as this was a pleasure of an art piece and these types of piece is what really gets me inspired to review things like this, so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
a viusal idea maybe making a border on the edges here with the red flame like hair

~X~

DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thanks XwaynecoltX for your suggestions I will keep you in mind.

[Screen Smooching]

Cute

So here was something cute and "SIMPLE" now with this piece I could see you adding some backround detail here on this one, it has some decent potential, but the backround needs something maybe even a little design or added color on the backround, you made an amusing art piece though.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I could see you adding some backround detail here on this one, it has some decent potential

~X~

MrUnder responds:

Thanks for the ideas dude ^^

[Void]

Notbad

So this one was pretty good, the "PIXEL" was pretty nifty and it is some amazing pixel you can see the fine details, as for that backround it doesnt match all that well with the pryamid, but I do like the work you are doing here and your pixel art style is really great.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would change the backround for something more darker.

~X~

SiccRicc responds:

I will keep that in mind with my next piece thank you :)

[Lisa Loud]

Simple and fresh

This was some simple and "FRESH" art it also reminded me of the old classic cartoons of the past, the "COLORS" are fresh and this has a nice sleek look about it with some really nice visual point here, maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them, a good art piece you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them

~X~

LuchoVolke responds:

Thank you very much! I'm very glad you liked it. It's kinda oldie, but since then I've been polishing this UPA-ish style, adding some texture (in this piece the brushes carry all the texture) and contrast and such.
Again, thankies! :D

[Once in a dream...]

Beautiful

A very beautiful here the girl is adorble the character work is fantastic and the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer, Well thats just a suggestion anyways you do some good work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer

~X~

Ryouhiko-Ankuu responds:

Thanks for your review! Definitely too late to edit this exact work since it's way too old, but your suggestion will come in handy in some future works.)