XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Klodia (OC)]

Very nice work

Now here was some very nice work love this style everything was crisp and sharp even the background was pretty solid I think the only thing here should be a light from behind her that glares out nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beaming light from behind her would be a nice effect

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nakatan-the-seer responds:

Thank you for a good advice! :)

[Somewhere Other Chapter 12-13]

A good series

A good series here I love how these characters are just lovble characters and they have some funny moments and just good comic all the way around this is a series I will check out more in the future very entertaining stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe as a small colored border

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cecameron responds:

Hey, thanks so much!

[Pumpkin Juice]

Nice work

And here this comic series I really like not because of the color even though I like color lol but you just know how to bring together a comic and even some humore to make it all work so nice job there I will look forward to more stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love for these to go a lil longer like more frames but it's just an idea

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ChazDude responds:

These comics are already pretty long for something that comes out 3 times a week in case you didn't realise.

[Some broad]

Decent

Well this was decent but could use some work on it. Like the shades and lightning effects need to be more better and adding some texture in props and backrounds would be a plus as well just a few ideas to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I just stated a few things can be improved for a better outcome

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twobyfour responds:

Yeah... I'm not fuckin Picasso, I know :|
Thanks for coming!

[Inktober Day 25]

Notbad

So here was another nice piece in the bunch would have loved much more color and more use of the backround but you had a goal I understand so that was cool anyways nice job here keep up the good efforts and good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail ofcourse and more color all around

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ChazDude responds:

It's a sketch. It isn't SUPPOSSED to have colour.

[Reaper OW fanwork]

Wow

I love this piece love what you did with this the darkness and the "EYES" I do think you should have added more glare and shine to the eyes but you have some nice work here very well designed and created. great shades and depth all the way around, This style was pretty interesting, it could be better with a few more details and effort, just take your time and keep at it, and dont take light to the improvment points suggested. because they will help of course and bring some better resluts all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more glare and glow on the eyes would be nice but maybe not your direction.

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JessxJess responds:

Thank you so much for the thoughtful response! Good eye too, near an end of a personal piece I always think about another and want to move onto the next xD Criticism is always welcome!

[Are you determined to give us candy?]

Nice job here

And here was a nice work of little tid bits of characters and they look pretty good very fresh looking and something that would be nice if newgrounds pushed them forward so nice efforts all the way around love them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more color additions but they are pretty good as is

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ScepterDPinoy responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Each sprite only has one color in vein of Undertale fyi. I've seen some people attempt to color the battle sprites for their fan game.

[Jilted Sunrise]

Nice

Very nice work here seems like you could have had more of a reflection and shine on the ocean it seems it would bring more to light but you have a nice piece here the paint shows off well just needs some more lighting effects and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some lighting effects needed

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PrettyGeek responds:

I agree! If I were to repaint, I'd add more glimmer and transparency to the water.

[Ak Torsafru]

Love this

I especially love what you have done with the orange hair and how it shines off so well that has been a really focal point of detail the female girl is already well drawn and love the little extra details that you really put forward here and it shows off well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really couldn't find anything here to really improve on here it's a fantastic piece with no major changes needed

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Trebuxet responds:

Thanks for your comment :)

[Maid portrait]

Nice

This was notbad kind of nice love the eyes on this it really glares off well and the whole blue theme you have here it really seemed to work well she needs more emotion in the face. But it seems kind of flat maybe working on that will improve on things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It looks a little flat maybe adding some emotion in the face will change that up a bit

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Twinkiesama responds:

Sorry for the late response. Yes, I agree with your critique. It is challenging to add emotion to "moe" characters since they tend to have the same face and expressions. However, I have been working on that lately and hopefully I'll get better with it in the future.