XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Maid portrait]

Nice

This was notbad kind of nice love the eyes on this it really glares off well and the whole blue theme you have here it really seemed to work well she needs more emotion in the face. But it seems kind of flat maybe working on that will improve on things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It looks a little flat maybe adding some emotion in the face will change that up a bit

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Twinkiesama responds:

Sorry for the late response. Yes, I agree with your critique. It is challenging to add emotion to "moe" characters since they tend to have the same face and expressions. However, I have been working on that lately and hopefully I'll get better with it in the future.

[One Piece - Brook ( Colored )]

Notbad at all

Now here was something interesting I like the style. I love the sparkle in the eye and think you should make it sparkle even more I would even go as far to put more shine on the sword as well give it that sparkle touch about it all very nice job indeed try it out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle and shine on the sowrd and eye

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TheDeathMeister responds:

Sai went bad on me saying "The Memory is full" ( Something like that )
The Sword was supposed to have soul faces on it though
shame I kinda facked it up

Thanks for the review bro!

[Andy; The one who made it home]

Very nice

I really like this some nice efforts and love the window shot and speaking of that I could see you bringing more light in from the window and reflect on the different areas in the room would be a nice touch indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light would be nice from the window

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PrettyGeek responds:

Good idea! I think adding in light may brighten it too much, so it'd need quite a bit of shadow to remain bleak. It'd lose it's flat quality, though.

[Happy (late) Halloween!!]

Notbad

Well I must say this was interesting the characters are cute and stylish a nice design here and I guess there was an amusing joke behind it all. A pretty good outcome some backround work would be a plus here but that's just me anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work of course

~X~

viqqah responds:

Thanks for the feedback <3

[Wacky Glasses]

Cool

And another in the comic series this has been a delightful series and fun comic style I love all the color used in here you did bring a lot of color and that was a nice touch so good effort there and nice overall work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like it as is so no changes

~X~

ChazDude responds:

If no changes needed then why three stars.

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[Silver Fox]

Very nice work

This was nice work very elegant and sexy ofcourse you have the skills to really push the lines, I like the "SHINE" but would love to see more shine on the hair and body ofcourse, very nice work here indeed. And once again its pieces like this that trully amaze me, all theskill level and detail and so much effortput into this so that was very welldone and cant wait to see more, keep at it, this is top notch work. and i will be on the lookout for more of your work so keep up all the brilliant stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
would love to see more shine on the hair and body ofcourse.

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Precipitation24 responds:

Thank you!!

[Mary with child]

Love it

A very peaceful piece you have here very subtle and pleasent so I would normally suggest some changes and or improvments but if anything I would just say add some slight color of some sort maybe even in the backround

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color theme would be a plus

~X~

XantyLeger responds:

Thank you for the idea, I'm gonna try it next time ^-^

[AjitPsi]

Fresh and flashy

This here was fresh and flashy I like your style I like the sprite mode about this all and the flashy whirly circle behind it. I would love to see some lighting effects really come alive in this from that flashy circle thing. Just an idea to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects as mentioned

~X~

SuperPhil64 responds:

Thanks for the review! I didn't go too crazy with it and give it lighting effects because I was trying to emulate the EarthBound sprite style but I always appreciate constructive criticism. Cheers!

[Raven]

Fine work

A fine piece of work here with some amazing shine texture and detail just overall great designs here with a realistic design it's a plus on all fronts with this one love the deep colors and textures I would not suggest any improvments at this time as this is great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just a backround scene

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OddmireAsh responds:

Thank you! I agree that I do need to work on designing backgrounds, most often I just draw the character and have a simple colored background.

[First painting attempt]

Very nice work

You have some very nice work here, the sketch and style seems to have come out very well, and It is very life like so you did something realistic and it shows, so nice work there ofcourse. This was a good art piece, these types can be hard to review and stuff but have suggested a few ideas to improve on it, and if not just keep trying new stuff and see what works, but with that said this was pretty good I thought. so just keep what you do.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything I would change was add some pattern in the backround or something.

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NavrcL responds:

Thanks a lot.
Yeah, some background might actually help. I'll try something next time.
Thanks