XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Phuss Flier: New Years Eve]

Decent start here

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one i like all the black and white style here and really seems like you cramped alot of stuff in here, i think you should spread it out abit more maybe even add a touch of color in there just a little bit give it that extra flare, you have some nice fine detail with differant stuff like the click on the ten and the differant fonts and stuff those i like but still seems all abit crowded so as said before spread it out again more so you can have a chance to see more of the fine detail, for the most part i really like it though, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i said you could spread out stuff abit more so it doesnt seem so cramped up

~~OVERALL~~
a good flyer thing but seems cramped.

~X~

Galneda responds:

I agree, it's AWFULLY cluttered, and I'll try to keep that in mind in the future. I really had no forethought with this. The first thing I drew was the spiral, then the starburst at the source, and I thought I was going to make the spiral into a road. With street lamps and people walking around pointing inward, dirt and exposed pipes outward...but I eventually refined it in the time-limit specified in my comments into what you see. The result? Clutter. lol

The explicit instructions, though, were to make it black and white so they could print it on colored fliers. We'll see how they look in physical form.

Thanks for the badass review! I really appreciate it :D

[3/3]

Like a forrest

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is notbad at all, i saw a bit of the other artworks that were simular to this aswell, but it was neat it kinda has that dark forrest, maybe even some sorta burrning trees in the back so that in that aspect makes it pretty impressive, needs more {FOCAL} points maybe like a scared little animal somewhere but something like that to focus on aswell, it would be a nice touch there now if it is a burnning forrest highlight the fire a bit more aswell, so it standsout more aswell, just another idea or two. but anyways it was a rather dark and neat piece you have here, but still i could see it improving with more visuals and extra effects like animals and lighting effects, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things i suggested were more fire highlight in the backround if its a forrest, and maybe a scared little animal in front for a more focus point.

~X~

CptBeefcake responds:

well it doesn't actually stand on its own; it's part of a triptych. the focal point of the piece is in the second panel. btw it isn't necessarily fire, you might taking it too literally. Other than that I agree, the warm colours sit back instead of jumping forward, and this piece didn't incorporate the same obvious lighting the other two did

thanks for the review

[war]

Could be larger and indepth with some more detail.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was something very impressive, you really gave the skin a nice texture giving it that real feel to it and all, would have liked to see more with the {EYES} maybe abit of red in there for that extra detail or something, and as for more improving on this, maybe some sorta fake {BLOOD} just an idea though, now i dont mean to complain or anything like that but you should give an even more fuller {VIEW} of the whole art piece, it would bring out the little details abit better, and just overall making it much better, now these are just one reviewers opinions and ideas, but really for the most part you have a really nice piece here and would love to see much more of your work in the coming future, anyways good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe instead of just the white eyes add some red in there just for more detail to the picture as a whole, maybe even some fake blood out of the wounds.

~X~

ramymagdy responds:

thx man ...really appreciate your comment .... you have a point here ..

[Imperial Inquisitor.]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Love all the reds you have on this, this was actually a pretty ood rendition of a character alot like starwars ones but seems to comeout very well, the blacked out ground area seems like it could have used more shading and stuff just to give the effect it was more dirty and dusty, just an idea that could show more of the detail, since you did present an awsome character here with lots of detail, the glow on the sabre was pretty impressive aswell, all around this was well done and i enjoyed reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained you could work on the ground area maybe some scratches here and there or something, something that shows more detail.

~X~

johngoldenwolf responds:

Thank you.

[M-Bot Reinterpretation]

Awsome as always

~~REVIEW~~
M-Bot is pretty cool, heh you should make X-Bot haha and he would be the ultimate reviewer, heh anyways but i like this one and love all the {BEAMS} here and you gave it that extra touch too which is also very nice indeed, the {STAR} could have more of a glaring shine to it though, its ok but just felt its the center peice and is kinda like his badge almost, you should make it really shine, As an extra touch on this poster i think you should ad in the backround some sirins or some sort maybe from a police car and or a police ship, it would ad abit to it i think anyways, but really for the mostpart you have a really good poster here, maybe not as impressive as p-bot but still really good, i love all the littel details you put in this, it really shows off the effort like the {M} on his arm and a few other things, its those little things that really bring the robot out, so props to you on an awsome job. but anyways keep up the awsome work on these posters and all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give the {STAR} some shine to it a sorta glaring shine, also suggested maybe a police car or ship passing in the backround with the red and blue lights that would be a nifty backround scene

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

I don't think I'm doing other M-Bot... yet who knows. If I do I'll keep this in mind

[Thumbs Up!]

creative

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was interesting, thought this was something differant like some character, but as i look at it, its pretty neat, the whole image is kinda {BLAND} but its still neat i do like the {SUBTLENESS} of it and all, the star eyes and happy smile also the happy {TEXT} was neat, but maybe you could add more of a fancy {FONT} somehow??? it would bring it out abit more and show more style to the art piece as a whole. I like the {SHADES} and fresh look you have going on and all, gives it that fresh feel that is pretty neat i like it very much, you shoould do more art stuff like that, maybe even ad more colors in the backround so that you could also take away that blandness, the bland stuff im talking about is not a big issue but could use abit of effort in taking it away, As for your idea here with the character being a {THUMB} i thought that was really creative so props to you on the creativeness of it, you get points there, but anyways keep up the awsome work, i enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i wouldnt mind you making the text more fancy with a more louder {FONT} but also maybe much larger to fill in some of that blandness i see, Also another nice tip that may help would be adding some other shades of color to take away some of the blandness in the backround,

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad ya liked, thanks for the review! Also, everything is vectored here, there's no "font" used, but your right, the size could represent the degree of happiness in the picture, should be bigger.

[Portal Protectors]

Awsome once again.

~~REVIEW~~
These are all pretty awsome, i like them all and you really gave them some awsome detail, The {I-BOT} i though could stand to use the more improving though, seems like he needs more {SHINE} to him, and just more overall gadgets and things on him, he just seems abit lightweigt, the other two were pretty impressive with nice fresh colors and awsome detail all around, i think if anything could be improved it would be more effects on ibot and maybe something more standoutish in the backround, well its an idea anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flare and standoutish on i-bot and maybe even abit on the backround somehow.

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

OK. I'll keep it on mind.

[Dad]

Brutal

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so when i first saw this i didnt think much of it, but i do have to say it is sorta brutal, that poor little guy is getting cut into, i thought it was sad in a way, but that was probably the idea i supose, but anyways i like the newgrounds logo thing, i thought it could be slightly better with a more thicker "BORDER" the one you have there is notbad but a more thicker one might bring it out more, and i thought there could be more blood around here and there, now a few more things is i thought the veins were abit much too much were on the upper arm, and might look more realistic if you lost a few from the upper arm area, while still keeping some of the lower ones, and while we are on the body, ad some of the blood there splattered on the upper chest. so that its more of a realistic feeling and such, Now while i really like this, i also thought this might comeout better with some backrounds, i know you have the small version back there, it just would be neat to see more, of a backround like maybe some dungeon or area from the game of the character, something along them lines that reflect the character more, anyways good piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some things like, more blood splatter, some backround scene, some less veins, and more focus on the newgrounds logo, just a few tips and ideas that i hope will help.

~X~

Sonucais responds:

It sure helps :) You need to realize this was made long time ago.