XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Siamese Octopus Gentlemen]

Crazy

Heh well this one was crazy and abit bothersome on the eyes, but regardless of that you did use some good imagination on this, it must have been hard to put that together though, besides that maybe add some colors i would like to see some reds and oranges to bright this up

Colors could brighten this up and be looking more colorfull

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thies responds:

Hey, that's not a bad idea. Some red and/or orange might make it look a little better :D

Thanks for the review

[Raintacular]

Could be larger

This was notbad and i really enjoyed the reds and purples but it seemed too small and the lettering was ok but seemed blurred at times, unless you did that on purpose well if anything can be improved on this it would be the "SIZE" of the whole art piece

Make the art piece much larger and add something more then just the text, well good luck on other art stuff

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Flash-Gamers responds:

Thanks for the review!

Oh, I smudge my sig on purpose like I've done before in my other pieces.

Will see what I can do; Note to self MORE DETAILS!

But it's hard to do that, cuz sometimes it'll turn pic into a VERY BUSY illustration which would look bad to some, and confuse ppl on the concept of the illustration.

[The Colour Of Water]

Artistic

Hmmm now this was differant it has some artistic style with all the colors and brush like stuff, i do like that there is a number of colors to really give that abstract type of feel, it shows lots of effort, i would really like to see where you can go further with this style

Maybe to improve add some borders so its like a true piece

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thies responds:

Yeah I might make more drawings with this style, not sure.
I don't know about adding borders, don't know if it will really add something to the piece.

Thanks for reviewing!

[upsideDown Town]

I like it

I do like this one, the purple egg like shaped creature is differant, the backrounds could use some work as its kinda plain but it also works because you dont really want to take away from the alien atleast thats what i think it is. as i explained before you need to give more darker tones and shades to give it the darker fell. anyways good luck in future stuffs

Improve on darker shades and colors aswell as something with the backrounds

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up-a-notch responds:

ok sure

[Not lucy in the sky...]

Needs something

This was an ok alien but it needs abit more for one i think the aliens shape was abit off you should put abit more effort there and give it a more scary look, that would also mean make the backrounds darker and creeoier aswell

Anyways hope thhose tips will help you to improve

~X~

up-a-notch responds:

thanks man

[Killer Teddy]

Notbad

Well this was notbad, the color was an odd choice, the desigm was interesting even cute at times, this is kinda simple but its nifty aswell, it seems like its lacking something i would slap some borders on there somehow

As stated i would put some borders with the darker green tint

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thies responds:

Thanks. With borders you mean like thick outlines? yeah that could be nice :)

[Mini Mischief]

Nice dragon

I love dragons and this was one of my faves on here, love the texture and detail and you put some good focol points like the keys which was a nice touch, anyways keep up the awsome dragon making

This was brilliant hope to see more of your work soon

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EchoRun responds:

Thank you. :)

[Der Apfel]

Artistic

This one is artistic and has some good style to it all, and the color is great with it really love how the color blended into another one in this one, nice style and this piece really came alive with the color

Nice art piece, could have more characters or stuff in the backrop of the two main girls

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everydaycombat responds:

Thanks. I was originally intending to have a third girl in the background but I decided that would lessen the intimacy between the two in front.

[2113]

Nice job here

That was pretty nice work there, i love the red touces here and there it really made this abit more but i also have to commend you on a wicked style and imagination, allthough would love to see much more color

Add some more color and more to see

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everydaycombat responds:

Thanks a lot. I've really been wanting to add some grey-green shading or something!! But like I said, the original's lost and all I have is this crap quality edit. :( Maybe I'll redraw it someday.

[eddy]

WOW

The color on this was pretty amazing, and the backrounds were even better, the unique thing in this one was the, guitar, and axe one on this at that, love the detail you gave this.

If i were to give any advice on this, it would maybe make this whole piece like a poster so that means you would need to add some borders, maybe some anchient style ones

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dommi-fresh responds:

i would have done if the guy that asked me to do it payed money!