XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elf Comic]

nice comic

~~REVIEW~~
Well now here is a differant kinda comic, i love that its not "UNIFORM" as just "BOXES" but yet its in other odd shapes and really just looks differant and unique if you ask me you should keep that style, the comic is actually pretty good nice drawings and good dialog

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
have more close ups like the eye shot

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Sangasan responds:

As I do with all art that's not mine, I have to refer you to ActionSquid, he drew it and I colored it, I personally find the dialog lame, but thanks. I think I colored it to the best of my abilities, and I agree, the eye-shot was my favorite to color.

[Red Baron]

Very impressive i like

~~REVIEW~~
Very impressive with the main character i even like what you did with another guy in the backround, this shows a good battle about to take place, and the main character has shown alot of effort on your part, so i really do look forward to more of your work, keep making great stuff for us

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Show some blood on the main guys weapon,

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beastkid7 responds:

Thanx a lot for the review! Will do sir!

[Berserker Rage]

love this sketch

~~REVIEW~~
Pretty nifty sketch you have here its very detailed in the sketchness hehe, but really good stuff now all you need is some colors shades aswell as some backdrop, good luck on your next stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some shades of color and a backdrop

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TheManofSteal13 responds:

Thanks, I never thought of doing color shading before. I'll have to get photoshop to do one since I really need one anyrate. :-/

I plan to..wait. You just reminded me of a painting I did with this guy. I'll put that one up next. Thanks alot there, man! Hopefully I'll get the time to do more of these in color.

[The Hunt]

nice work here

~~REVIEW~~
Nice robot thingie here looks like he is on the hunt as the title says, the actualy image looks abit blurry though, i like how you made this in an action scenes, the ray he is shooting could have more of a glow to it though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the beam have more of a glow effect

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Walkingpalmtree responds:

Will do!

[Kevinezation]

LOL interesting

~~REVIEW~~
here was another kevin bacon inage notbad actually, i like the banner style of it all, it could use more variaty of images, maybe more tank guys with other type of kevin images and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more tankmen with more pics of KB

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duplex2 responds:

Next year more tankmen and more Kevins. I take note of it.
Thanks

[KEVIN BACON]

Reminds me of tremors

~~REVIEW~~
This one was not half bad, i like the light colors used, and the bacon as a prop, this whole scene reminds me of one of Kevin bacons movies "TREMORS" anyways really neat contibution to the "KEVIN BACON DAY"

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more pieces of bacon here and there just for that extra measure

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XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

The piece of bacon is Kevin Bakon. If there was more than one, it wouldn't be THE Kevin Bakon.

& It's supposed to be tremors.

[clairvoyant]

Artistic

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice this pretty artistic work it kinda seems like you used alot of the filters like from paintshop or something but regardless its pretty neat how long did it take you to put all this together?

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some frames all around the whole image or something

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radiodark responds:

Thanks: I did indeed play around with my photo references in various editing programs before I started painting. I'm still debating whether it's actually finished (I can't stand the lower left section but I'm not sure how to fix it and don't know that I care to) but the bulk of the work was completed in two months.

As to frames, the painting is actually nine 6"x9" smaller paintings which I scanned separately and stitched together digitally because I was not content with how it looked the first time I mounted it (also, it wouldn't fit in my scanner). I've been considering stretching thin panes of black matte board across the junctions of the nine when I do mount it, to cover my sloppy trim job and keep the corners down without resorting to glue.

[Self Portrait]

Its cute

~~REVIEW~~
I thought it was cute, the text with the name could be a better font i thought though, maybe some fancy text? as for the character its cute and had all the right colors

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change the font to something more fancy

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PixelCake responds:

It's not a FONT, it's a brush I made for myself from scratch.

[Yet Another Robot Doodle]

nice robot

~~REVIEW~~
A cute and silly robot, really nice backrounds aswell allthough it seems like its missing something the backrounds are somewhat bland but still like them, maybe add some "PINS" or "TACS" in the corners of the art so it seems like its somewhat of a poster of some kind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said add some tacs or pins to make it seem like its a poster of some kind

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TemplarOfBacon responds:

Well, I'm sure tacs or pins could make it look interesting, but making it a poster was never the intention. It could make a neat propaganda-esque poster though :P

Thanks for the feedback