XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dark pass caravan]

Its differant

~~REVIEW~~
This is differant for sure, i like the black and white style and there alot of stuff to see here, maybe with some reds and oranges it might spice up the image up just a tad

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color maybe half of it is in red and the rest in black and white or maybe just a small portion is in color

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pingui responds:

first of all , thanx for commenting and raiting my work , my original intention was to create a black and white picture , i might add some colour in further projects , but for this , i'd like to keep it as it is , neatherless , thanx for your opinion , and have a nice whatever you may be having
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MementoMori

[On the Roof Tops]

hmmm notbad

~~REVIEW~~
the character was the main focus here which seems very welldone, but that building in the backround doesnt match to well, the main character has a 3d feel while the building is more of a "FLAT" feel to it and all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on making the building not look so flat it needs some sorta 3d portions so that it all matches with the character at hand

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BearPawMedia responds:

Thank ya very much ^_^

Yeah, I need to work on my backgrounds for sure. >_<

[{BT} The Musician]

I like this

~~REVIEW~~
This was neat like a silince of moment, this was bland in the backround but that might be for the best if anything you could add some audiance in the backround maybe just the heads

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like above add some shadowed people in the backround

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BenTibbetts responds:

Thanks for the review. I agree, people might make a nice addition to this scene.

[Red Crasher]

Hmmm notbad

Hmm this was notbad i like it cause it shows fire element and it looks like the guy has just been through a tremendous battle, i do however think there is too much reds and oranges you should mix the colours up just abit

As said abit ago you should tone down abit on some oranges and reds to focus more on your main character here, maybe put a glow behind him so he is more of the focus

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Icandraw responds:

thanks but i figured out that u always giving 7 :P lol u have a problem with them :D just kiddin thanks

[Starbarians]

Amazing

Wow i love what you did with this, the "GLOW" alone is pretty amazing and really shows off the sci-fi effect bringing everything to light really looks neat, i wouldnt mind seeing more characters around hell maybe even a phrase said by these two or something anyways nice job here

add a caption or phrase said by the two characters

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HappyHarry responds:

Thanks man. You'll see more of them for sure.

[Dodge viper SRT-10 coupe]

Wow nice

wow this was pretty impressive the "SHINE" on this is awsomely shiny and love the 2tone gold over the other blue like color its looking real wwish i could have a car that color anyways verywelldone piece here

Make some shiny points in the backround

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toshema responds:

Thanks for the suggestion ^_^ !!! I 'll see what I can add thats shiny !!!

[SPEED DRAWING]

love this

Especially the deep greens on this you made a little story out of this, the little fairy i think its a fairy is also a nice touch here, this art might lokk more impressive with some sorta borders? anyways this was something kinda nice.

Good piece here wish it had borders

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Syringes responds:

Whats funny is that originally in the description I wanted to put a story to it ^^ Thank you! And boreders actually may be a good idea Ill try it.

[Venom]

really nice piece here

Wow you really put something together that is not only sharp and brilliant looking g. But also love the smoothness of it all. Great focus poi t and a really nice view shot from the top

While I do like the smooth and clean look. It lacks battle and chaos. Something that any villain brings. So try and improve on that with some background blood or even dead bodies. Maybe even some war stains on venom himself

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JackSmack responds:

I was kinda going for an iconic simple yet detailed mix. I thought about putting in a background but I didn't have time to do it justice and I didn't want to detract from the work I did on Venom if it wasn't a great addition.