XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sanctuary]

oh wow awsome

~~REVIEW~~
oh wow that was really awsome, seems perfect in somany ways, has the perfect shine off the moon and there a lil story there aswell has a very cool relaxed feel i really like this and enjoy it a ton

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some frames around the whole picture make more like a window looking into another persons world

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ArticWolf811 responds:

Thanx Im always open to good critisism

["On Guard"]

Pretty impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty impressive kinda reminds me something outa starwars or something, you gave the metal a real good shine and had a realistic feel, the sword was neat i think the sword itself could use abit more glow to it thought, anyways good art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more glow to the sword so it feels like its really an element of power

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johngoldenwolf responds:

"kinda reminds me something outa starwars"
Yep, she is an Iron Knight.
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Iron_Knight
And the sword is a Lightsaber.
Thank you for the idea, and the kind words. :)

[Dark Cavern]

needs some effects

~~REVIEW~~
The "DOOR WAY" needs more of a lighting effects maybe something really bright to give off the feeling that there is alot of mystery, in that room, also making the red room area more darker will also highlight the light effect, anyways hope that helps abit

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lighting and darkening effects as stated above

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Fro responds:

I agree

[Nick]

Hmmm interesting

~~REVIEW~~
and once again we have another intersting piece from fro, its a good sketching of someone, the eyes look neat and you did very well on the entire piece, you seemed to have capture a piece of art here, the eyes are the best part i thought

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think i would work more on some shades for this art pice especially in the face tones

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Fro responds:

Thanks :P

[Owen Morrison]

This is decent

~~REVIEW~~
now here is something differant from you, the blood is notbad, i think there should be more of it though, and also some more texture in the skin, aswell as something in the backround maybe some results of some battle in which the guy now has blood from, anyways another good piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more blood, some more skin texture and some backround scene aswell

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Fro responds:

Yeah, I don't have a tablet anymore so I won't be doing things like this in the future :P

[Italian Paper Mola]

Creative

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one i give a higher score because of the creativness of it all, i like the colors most of all even if it was just paper but you went and made something differant and unique, kinda reminds me of an old egyption mask of some sort, anyways keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this might have been better maybe with some horns and feathers to really give it that wild feel

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Fro responds:

I love the detail idea. After I get it back from my professor!

[Good Grief]

Nice work

~~REVIEW~~
I like this one aswell, the coloring is alright but might look better in some photoshop maybe if you added some effects with photoshop it would have a nice mixture of the two, anyways another good piece here i really liked

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Like i explained above, some photoshop or paintshop pro effects would really help on this mainly for some effects

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Fro responds:

Yeah, I did this for an assignment and I would like to revisit it sometime and really improve it.

[My only 12 inch]

norbad

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one, its actually a pretty good drawing / sketch, this might look nicer if it had some color maybe the "S" would be a red or something kinda makes it standout abit more but i believe this may be your best drawing yet i do like it so hope you make more for us soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color like the s, anyways keep up the good work

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Fro responds:

I was thinking about adding a background, color, and a leg to it in the future. I'll update it sometime. Thanks!

[Capture the Moment]

I like it

~~REVIEW~~
this does look like it took some time, but also shows some good effort on your part, i like the design on the desk and the camera is pretty neat itself i like the light effect you have there, the wall seemed abit bland seems like there should be more stuff on there, anyways good stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more stuff on the wall, and maybe give the desk a more roundish design style kinda thing

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Fro responds:

Ok, it should be busier. I agree.

[Dark Entry]

could be darker

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty good for what it was, it could be abit more on the darker side, with some sunlight or lighting effects it will give it that i think, maybe even make it look like there was some stains on the walls and dorrs for the creepy feel, but anyways its a good piece you have here i liked it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well more darkness around the door and some blood stains wouldnt hurt either

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Fro responds:

Great ideas! Maybe I'll update this soon!