XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yet Another Robot Doodle]

nice robot

~~REVIEW~~
A cute and silly robot, really nice backrounds aswell allthough it seems like its missing something the backrounds are somewhat bland but still like them, maybe add some "PINS" or "TACS" in the corners of the art so it seems like its somewhat of a poster of some kind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said add some tacs or pins to make it seem like its a poster of some kind

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TemplarOfBacon responds:

Well, I'm sure tacs or pins could make it look interesting, but making it a poster was never the intention. It could make a neat propaganda-esque poster though :P

Thanks for the feedback

[Finger]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
The style on this is kinda neat, kinda like a thumb character the very bald head needs something though just seems so bland up there maybe some ear muffs? or even some sorta afro? something like that

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs something on the head i gave a few tips above, hope it sparks some sorta idea

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thies responds:

Thanks for reviewing. You're right, maybe a hat or something will make it better..

[Omniverse Reverie]

nice

~~REVIEW~~
reminds me of something that might be in outerspace or something, it has alot to see some shines here and there, i think it could use some more lighting effects thoough but thats just me, anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more lighting effect

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gleegleep responds:

Thank you! I will remember your suggestion next time I do a fractal. :D :D

[Kris]

close up

~~REVIEW~~
Well not a bad portrait, its really close up but maybe thats what you were going for, i would have liked to see more of some color in there especially with the close up, maybe something to work on in the future, anyways nice art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more skin texture maybe some color would help with this

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itsKris responds:

Thanks, I agree, colour would help. This was done for art class though so I wasn't allowed to have any :P I think I might do another self portrait though and that one will have colour.

Thanks for the review :)

[BumbleBee Music]

looks like obhama

~~REVIEW~~
Really nice sketch here, it has a very likeness to obama you know that guy in office hehe, its really good though, i think with some added color maybe even just have the musical notes colored and add a few more floating in the air

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More musical notes and some colored ones, just even one colored note would set this more aprt from the rest

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Rooshie responds:

This was done literally in 2 minutes. I was about to sleep and someone wanted to see a drawing, so i made it and didnt care if it was colored in or not

[Rockin the Suburbs]

Differant

~~REVIEW~~
Now here was a differant kind of art, it had some faded color style, so it didnt really stand out no but maybe with abit more color depth it could come out, he kinda reminds me of david letterman for some odd reason, anyways it was notbad keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More deeper colors some that really bring your point out and abit more focus on the color would be an idea

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SPace responds:

haha theres only 2 colors and b&w so i don't think i could have gone any deeper. the lighter pink pops a bit more when you see it in person. if i could scan this instead of taking a picture of it i think that would translate better.
i think i see what you mean about the focus, the keyboard is brighter so you don't see his face as well. thanks for the review!

[In for life]

Very nice

~~REVIEW~~
wow now this is very impressive with some very deep colors and the drawing itself looks pretty good, you went over the top on this one and thats a good thing, very well done, i will have to check more of your stuff out soon, anyways great job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some borders it might make it look more refined

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Eighth responds:

thanks for the review... and yeah sure, I'll try the whole border thing, thanks for that tip too...

[G-Lu Animated Gif]

animated heh

~~REVIEW~~
well thats the first animated art piece i seen sofar in the art portal, its not a bad thing, i thought you could have had more art in the backround to give it that more artistic feel, but for what it is its pretty ok with me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More art style besides the black bland backround

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M-Shack responds:

It's more about the character moving than an actual painting or scenario. The gifs only allow a certain size and if there is too much in the image, the quality really drops and might be too big to upload. I used the black cuz it allowed me to use white outlines for the character since he is white. Thanks for taking the time to review, some of my other art has backgrounds and what not.