XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Portal Protectors]

Awsome once again.

~~REVIEW~~
These are all pretty awsome, i like them all and you really gave them some awsome detail, The {I-BOT} i though could stand to use the more improving though, seems like he needs more {SHINE} to him, and just more overall gadgets and things on him, he just seems abit lightweigt, the other two were pretty impressive with nice fresh colors and awsome detail all around, i think if anything could be improved it would be more effects on ibot and maybe something more standoutish in the backround, well its an idea anyways.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flare and standoutish on i-bot and maybe even abit on the backround somehow.

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

OK. I'll keep it on mind.

[Dad]

Brutal

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so when i first saw this i didnt think much of it, but i do have to say it is sorta brutal, that poor little guy is getting cut into, i thought it was sad in a way, but that was probably the idea i supose, but anyways i like the newgrounds logo thing, i thought it could be slightly better with a more thicker "BORDER" the one you have there is notbad but a more thicker one might bring it out more, and i thought there could be more blood around here and there, now a few more things is i thought the veins were abit much too much were on the upper arm, and might look more realistic if you lost a few from the upper arm area, while still keeping some of the lower ones, and while we are on the body, ad some of the blood there splattered on the upper chest. so that its more of a realistic feeling and such, Now while i really like this, i also thought this might comeout better with some backrounds, i know you have the small version back there, it just would be neat to see more, of a backround like maybe some dungeon or area from the game of the character, something along them lines that reflect the character more, anyways good piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some things like, more blood splatter, some backround scene, some less veins, and more focus on the newgrounds logo, just a few tips and ideas that i hope will help.

~X~

Sonucais responds:

It sure helps :) You need to realize this was made long time ago.

[Midnight]

Pretty awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Very nice and deep {BLUES} of color blues and whites seem to always comeout best like this i like the moon you have in view, now with the moon you could have it have a more {GLOW} effect maybe even some aura around it, but i think it would look much better if you gave it a much more whiter effect as it would look better especially with the blue backrounds, very nice job though, and with what looks like to be the {PLANTS} that was neat and giveing a more just sadow feel, I think you could give the whole art piece one more touch and that might be have someone walking in the sadow form, by the plants maybe on the bottom and such, it would seem fitting like someone walking across the plants with the moonlight in the backround, but anyways, make the moon more bright, and all, but other then that its a pretty good art piece, i look forward to seeing more from you. but anyways untill next time, good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some whiter moon lighting, maybe even some glow around it, also another shadow of a person or something.

~X~

Imacow responds:

Thanks a lot for the review.

[Fractals and Light]

Yeah you get a 9 from me

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one i give a big "WOW" it is truly awsome in color light and not just that but design so you really outdid youself there and presented something really awsome, now it does seem like you put lots of time and effort in this, from what seems like the "WINGS" and the black and grey design is something really neat, now those parts i really liked it has somee much great visuals, so props to you there its "FANTASTIC" Now you know me i tend to find stuff that doesnt seem so fitting, so like i said the top points i said was great, but the stuff at the very bottom kinda doesnt fit i dont know why it just seems off, i bet if you removed the bottom stuff and just had more of the grey and black design like you do at the very top it would be just "PERFECT" because to me everything else is amazing its just that bottom stuff thats doesnt fit, so if you ever do make another version that would be my suggestion of change and improving but for what it is, its pretty awsome stuff, keep up the awsome art making,.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The bottom half bugged me so that would be my main issue as i explained above some changes where its just the grey and black design would make it more fitting

~X~

Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review i would remove the bottom half next time i only added it cuz it couldnt be called fratals and light then.

[Something Different]

Awsome color.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm wow, now its been sometime since i have seen anything new from you but looks like you really went all out on this, to be honest i dont know if i see anything wrong with this at all, its pretty amazing and has some nice use of "COLOR" and the lighting effects are really presented well, now to me this looks like some sorta god or angel with his arms spreadout and is lokking over someone or people, you can kinda see his head at the way to which gives off this feel, but the beat feature of this one was the color so props on you for bringing out all that fantastic color, i just loved it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe if anything just add more texture of color in the lower left and right sides of the piece but really not needed just something that would really help abit.

~X~

Shikhs responds:

thanx for the review but as far as this ones concerned i do think its perfect

[Mushroom Kingdom Stand-Up 1]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
so comics are not my best of things to review, but i will do my best in this one, as for the "CHARACTER" luigi he looks pretty good and glad to see that luigi gets some love, now as for the "COMIC" style thats cool, but i am more of the old sunday comics fan so having it in the long way as you do is ok, but why not have it in "TWO" sections that way you could have more to the comic, but if it were me and this is just my opinion i would rather it go from left to right as in sunday comics and or just newspaper comics do, but enough on that, i would love to see luigis sloth, with more texture in theme so the color could really comeout and shine, and as for the "JOKE" itself, you should work on that, i was abit confused at first but i suppose it was funny, Now dont get me wrong i did get a laugh out of this, just could see it being more funnier, so anyways hope to see more comics like this in the future, for now good luck on your next art piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Made a few suggestions on some ways the window spaces are placed, making it more funny would be nice, and also mentioned some more texture use, other then that it was amusing.

~X~

Iplaygames responds:

thanks a ton. The two panel thing I completely agree on, and am actually considering doing. I realize it wasn't that funny, but it gave me an opportunity to draw Luigi... I probably should do shading too.

Thanks again.

[Land of the Walking Plants]

Awsome world

~~REVIEW~~
So here is another great piece by you, not my fave but still something pretty awsome, the reason i like this one, is because you have a full landscape with lots of imagination and once again some "CREATIVENESS" about it all, and thats what i like about your style, is the creativeness and you create these worls and color and so on, that really jumpout to me and i hope to others, so really some awsome work there, i would love to see you bring some stuff like this into a more computer art program and really make the colors "SHINE" and really just standout, and even with that you could really amke more detail show off on this, the colors you have now are notbad but, but would be much better and show more detail with photoshop detailing and effects, just something to think about, but i was really impressed with it all, now things to improve on, well i would love to see some people or some other type of civ in this scene living walking or even battling, again just another idea that could show off the world more, anyways good stuff once again i enjoyed it, keep up the good work, and hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some things like more effects on color with a computer art program, also some extra detail touces with the world you created like another civilsation of some sort.

~X~

Merol responds:

I know It would look more shiny and clean if I use photoshop, but I just don't enjoy doing this kind of stuff using a computer program as much as I do using paper (also, I'm a photoshop noob). But I will give it a shot sometime, I don't know, maybe making the sketch in paper and add color with photoshop or flash.
About the another type of civilization, yeah, maybe it would be pretty cool if there were another species wandering around... actually there already are, if you take a closer look at the river, you will see some fishes.

THANKS A LOT MAN!!!

[Spirals!]

Creative color

~~REVIEW~~
Love the color on this one, you have some pretty good work here as i was looking through your other stuff, this was pretty good, but im one about "COLOR" and here with this one you have put fourth lots of color, if i may ask what did you use to do this, the "TEXTURE" is pretty amazing and i really like this stuff, awsome stuff, and you have a good sense of "CREATIVITY" by creating something that is not exactly anything but it becomes something so awsome with the finished project so really awsome job here i enjoyed it, i would love to see more work from you like this piece its my fave piece of all your work, and you reall put all this color fourth with such creativeness, and thats my fave part of it all, Keep making stuff like this and you will do fine here on NG, but anyways if i can suggest anything on this delightful piece, i think i would say, make it larger ad even more twists and turns, but mostly ad even more color and creativity in designs, it truly is an awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it larger ad more color and more twists and designs, even brighten up the color aswell

~X~

Merol responds:

Hey! Thanks a lot!
I made it with flash, I used the brush, nothing special about it I think.
Actually, I don't use to make lots of draws with flash or another programs, but if I ever make something like this again I will take your recomendations.
THANK YOU!!! (Also, glad you like that thing so much)