XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[could it be true love?]

Interesting lovers

~~REVIEW~~
Now here we go, i love zombies and this was another decent ones from you, the {BLER} was a nice touch i thought, and you can kinda see some thought bubbles in the backround, the color and shades is dim wich seems to fit well its a very grungy look, I like that fact that you put more then just one zombie and there seems to be others but very very faint, thats ok too, i think you could have done a little more with blood, maybe they just came from lunch and have some dripping fresh blood?? well its an idea anyways, but none the less this was another impressive piece by you, as improving i suggested a few ideas, that would show more of the details, with fresh blood and all, but other then that it was alright, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fresh blood could be showing?

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

well its done now so no room for improvement

[fei lung (LEGEND!)]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
And here we have another great piece by you, as always great stuff, There is alot of line work in this one, cool and shows alot of the detail, and shows his action pose, would have liked to see the {PANTS} not all black but maybe lighter and with some shades in it or even some of that nice line-work in it, And with the white backrond kinda gives it a bland feel, so maybe some sorta backround would sufice, maybe some fighting place or even other fighters in the backround, you could even show some beat up fighters to really show he means busness, but really this was a nice pice and was very welldone, so awsome job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awsome linework here maybe with some backround you could show a more full piece,

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

thanks mate another awesome critique

[kermit the mob frog]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was amusing this looks abit bland though as this was the only part, would have really loved some {BACKROUND} to this art piece, it would tell more of the story, maybe you could have added a scene were there was one of the other puppets running away, might make for a more funnier part but thats just my opinion, have some colored backround would seem to work aswell, and i wouldnt mind some more standoutish colors , as for the drawing its actually very good and simple which is also a plus, I really like the gun on the ground making you guess the killer or even suicide, but once again you amaze us even with you older works, keep it up, i look forward to more of your drawings and art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work to give more to the story or adding some solid color would be a nice touch up

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

well bloody hell i never thought people would still be looking at the first one i ever did!

[200th DRAWING ON NG]

Newgrounds galore

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is is awsome, kinda like whats on the newgrounds, frontpage, but to see how you did your own style, here shades are not as deep as your other work, I like all the differant characters here and your own little style you put on them, the {BACKROUND} was sorta so-so, an idea might be to add some sorta maybe {CITY} since you see that in alot of ng stuff like the banner and stuff, but i thought something could go back there maybe even something just a tad light like that so that it doesnt take away from your main drawing of characters and such, and these are just a few ideas to think about to improve on something already awsomly done, anyways nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work like a city drop, some blood or more gringy looking spots here and there wouldnt hurt.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

incase you haven't noticed backgrounds aren't usually my thing

[fakebook and twatter]

Very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one was very impressive, i like the awsome shades you have some deep texture in this one, and the {DRAWING} really seemed to comeout neat here, almost like a little story comic ext, the facebook Theres alot of stuff in the drawing, wouldnt mind if things were spaced out somewhatm also love the colors used seemed to really work off eachother with the greens and browns, An idea to give a more visual on the book maybe a glowing eye of sorts would be nice, just an idea though, and in the lower left and roght corners of the drawing could use something maybe something seems bland in that area. anyways decent drawing, and i look forward to seeing more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A good drawing here, maybe some spacingout of stuff, or if you like that style fill in the bland spots, and give the {BOOK} a more focus point as suggested the eyes or even some bloody teeth, anyways nice work.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

i wanted to keep the colour bold and bland like their crappy logos.

[Les Paul]

Nice 3-d design

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good 3-d version i wouldnt mind seeimg some more pazaz, you had some shine on the base but wouldnt mind seeing that abit more, and the grey backround is ok but you should have done something more some crazy color or rainbow thing something to do with music would have really brought out the image alot better, nut what you have here is pretty good, very nice 3-d style just would have been alot neater with more flashy effects to it and all, just something that jumps out at you, so improving on this as suggested, but would be some more shine, more backround effect, more glitz and glamor, anyways nice job with what you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As to improve on this some more shine and more glitz like in the backround.

~X~

HermanThaGerman responds:

Thanks for the review man.

I just make these images for the 3D model in it so i dont spent much time on the background.

either way, thanks for the review and i hope you enjoyed my work

[Give me mah fish]

Nice Detail

~~REVIEW~~
Here was a nice drawing you have some good detail in there, allthough it is a drawing you should make it come alive with some {COLOR} and all, just abit anyways maybe have everything black and white and just the dragon in some color like a shart red, or even just the fish with will give more focus since there is alot of characters in this particular drawing and such, Now as for the drawing its pretty impressive i like the fine detail maybe also add a backround of some sorts to kinda give it a story of where they are and such. and as a nother detail point since the fish is dead and rotting maybe there a worm or two popping out somewhere, and maybe one of the birds has it, heh sorry but just though i would just throw in a few ideas that would really bringout the drawing more and make it more alive, but i like what you have sofar good stuff, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene would be a nice touch for improving the drawing as a whole, also adding some color or partial color to a focol point would be another great idea, and i suggested some worms coming out of the dead fish more little details like that really bring a drawing to life with a world of its own.

~X~

ShadowElite951 responds:

Sadly, color in my artwork never sees color. Like maybe 1 out of a hundred drawings. Seriously lol. I'm just a lowly pencil doodler person. Not skilled with color and I tend to ruin the works. Backgrounds are another thing I tend to avoid. Mine tend to draw the attention from the primary focus. But I see how a little background could help balance the foreground.

Thank you!