XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Klide 02 (Pink Bunny)]

Awsome color

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i really love the color on this its very {BRIGHT} and blends into becomming brighter, but again its one of the smaller size of your works, needs to be {LARGER} like i mentioned before with some of your other ones now i know your newer ones have some larger screen saver sizes, but ayways its a pink bunny and you can deffinantly see the {HEADS} in that aspect of things, the one thing i thought was off color would be the {GREEN in the center somehow it didnt seem to match up with the purples and such, but other then that its another great piece i thought, and would love to see more from you real soon, untill then good luck and keep the art comming.}

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs to be larger maybe 1100x1400 or something around them dementions

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LadyJava responds:

thank you.

[Klide 03 (Rose Ocean)]

Nice color here

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this one just kind of jumps out at you, i love the little {DESIGN}in the middle and while i love color artpieces you seem to have added some nice {BLENDS} like the warping feel on some of the stuff, and i have noticed you have gotton better with each new art piece you do comeout with so nice job there, Im thinking this should be larger though, seems abit on the {SMALL} size make it more like a desktop backround size or something, but other then that it was pretty good, keep up the good work, i look forward to reviewing more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the size much larger, maybe have more of that design thats in the center broaden out more into the outer edges aswell.

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LadyJava responds:

thank you.

[Klide 01 (Flower Growth)]

Orb of color

~~REVIEW~~
I just love the color on this, and the texture seems to be its like a circle or like an orb of sorts, the differant colors seem to really balance out with everything else, the light from the {CENTER} could use abit more brightness to reflect more of a shine and more of a focus area, its all a pretty good piece of art the size should be bigger but i understand that this was one of your earlier works, but regardless its pretty nifty, so to improve on things you should possibly add more shine, make the size larger and add some deeper colors, anyways great first piece i thought.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as stated before add more shine, make the size larger and add some deeper colors.

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LadyJava responds:

thank you.

[Mr. Bernard Berkeley]

Very artistic

~~REVIEW~~
and so we have another decent piece here this one has some really good {TEXTURE} now the idea of the cat in a suit is pretty interesting, you seem to have this interesting style like hidden in the artwork with the flower like vines kinda makes it your own and you did this with this one wich was pretty decent, the backrounds were pretty neat, it all seemed to work together and made for some good artistic feel to it wich was a really nice touch and i liked it, Also nice touch on giving the backround a lighter feel to focus on the main parts of the character, so very nice job all around and i like your work and look forward to reviewing more of your stuff even your newer works anyways untill next time good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Im thinking some {BORDERS} or frames would make this even better almost like a painting on a wall or something

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Araelyn responds:

I thought about putting a border actually. This is such an old picture though, I doubt I'll revisit it. Thanks for the review!

[Purple Insides]

Decent and colorful

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty neat i love the differant colors used in this, allthough the {VOMIT} seemed abit on the blurry side? maybe that was the effect you were going for, but anyways back to the color theme like how everything had it own color, and still had the texture along with some great linework, and seemed to come all together, i think the only work of improving might be adding more texture and clarity to the vomit or if you like the blurr effect then blurr it even more, and maybe some differant texture in the pink backround, other then that its pretty impressive so nice work on this one, cant wait to see what you come up with next.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround texture and more clarity and change of texture in the vomit area

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Araelyn responds:

Thank you!

[Unwanted Child]

nice colors

~~REVIEW~~
Wow now this was something new and differant and i never reviewed your stuff it seems, but this was very nice, i really like the touch of {SHINE} and darkness like with the gloves and and such, as for the child it was great work aswell you gave it some good emotion like something really is going on, kinda like theres a story there and not just a painting, the {BACKROUND} is notbad, but i wouldnt mind seeing more color there or something more then what you had in this one, it seemed bland but that was notbad at all, now as for improving as suggested some more color in the backround, maybe even as an extra measure a {TEAR} from the child, eye or something could show more for that dramatic but thats just an idea or two, but anyways its a great piece nice color use could use abit more,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more color in the backround, some more emotion like a tear from the child would be a plus also.

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Letal responds:

Backgrounds were made by a friend who work with me sometimes, but I agree ,I should have done some goth city or something... The tear is a good idea too.

[Ugy]

Decent could have more detail though.

~~REVIEW~~
Interestings character you have here its differant and neat, the character itself is differant, so decent work there, good color tones, and shades, and creative ideas here, the downside to this would be you didnt add enough on the detail side, you should have detailed the character more, maybe some tattos, more scratches and scrapes here and there, and also more stuff in the backround like some other characters and stuff to show more is happening and stuff, just a few tips that could have gave this that much more, Also the {COLORS} were more basic then anything else, some more blending of the shades would be nice just something more then just the basic. other then that i thought it might be ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some blending of color and such, more going away from the basic, and more happening in the backround.

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Mosamabindrawin responds:

Thanks allot for the review/advice!
I would have added more detail but this is most likely going to end up as a background character- but if i choose to make it a main character ill definitely be adding more detail thanks!