XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Les Paul]

Nice 3-d design

~~REVIEW~~
This was a good 3-d version i wouldnt mind seeimg some more pazaz, you had some shine on the base but wouldnt mind seeing that abit more, and the grey backround is ok but you should have done something more some crazy color or rainbow thing something to do with music would have really brought out the image alot better, nut what you have here is pretty good, very nice 3-d style just would have been alot neater with more flashy effects to it and all, just something that jumps out at you, so improving on this as suggested, but would be some more shine, more backround effect, more glitz and glamor, anyways nice job with what you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As to improve on this some more shine and more glitz like in the backround.

~X~

HermanThaGerman responds:

Thanks for the review man.

I just make these images for the 3D model in it so i dont spent much time on the background.

either way, thanks for the review and i hope you enjoyed my work

[Give me mah fish]

Nice Detail

~~REVIEW~~
Here was a nice drawing you have some good detail in there, allthough it is a drawing you should make it come alive with some {COLOR} and all, just abit anyways maybe have everything black and white and just the dragon in some color like a shart red, or even just the fish with will give more focus since there is alot of characters in this particular drawing and such, Now as for the drawing its pretty impressive i like the fine detail maybe also add a backround of some sorts to kinda give it a story of where they are and such. and as a nother detail point since the fish is dead and rotting maybe there a worm or two popping out somewhere, and maybe one of the birds has it, heh sorry but just though i would just throw in a few ideas that would really bringout the drawing more and make it more alive, but i like what you have sofar good stuff, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene would be a nice touch for improving the drawing as a whole, also adding some color or partial color to a focol point would be another great idea, and i suggested some worms coming out of the dead fish more little details like that really bring a drawing to life with a world of its own.

~X~

ShadowElite951 responds:

Sadly, color in my artwork never sees color. Like maybe 1 out of a hundred drawings. Seriously lol. I'm just a lowly pencil doodler person. Not skilled with color and I tend to ruin the works. Backgrounds are another thing I tend to avoid. Mine tend to draw the attention from the primary focus. But I see how a little background could help balance the foreground.

Thank you!

[Phuss Flier: New Years Eve]

Decent start here

~~REVIEW~~
Notbad on this one i like all the black and white style here and really seems like you cramped alot of stuff in here, i think you should spread it out abit more maybe even add a touch of color in there just a little bit give it that extra flare, you have some nice fine detail with differant stuff like the click on the ten and the differant fonts and stuff those i like but still seems all abit crowded so as said before spread it out again more so you can have a chance to see more of the fine detail, for the most part i really like it though, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i said you could spread out stuff abit more so it doesnt seem so cramped up

~~OVERALL~~
a good flyer thing but seems cramped.

~X~

Galneda responds:

I agree, it's AWFULLY cluttered, and I'll try to keep that in mind in the future. I really had no forethought with this. The first thing I drew was the spiral, then the starburst at the source, and I thought I was going to make the spiral into a road. With street lamps and people walking around pointing inward, dirt and exposed pipes outward...but I eventually refined it in the time-limit specified in my comments into what you see. The result? Clutter. lol

The explicit instructions, though, were to make it black and white so they could print it on colored fliers. We'll see how they look in physical form.

Thanks for the badass review! I really appreciate it :D

[3/3]

Like a forrest

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this is notbad at all, i saw a bit of the other artworks that were simular to this aswell, but it was neat it kinda has that dark forrest, maybe even some sorta burrning trees in the back so that in that aspect makes it pretty impressive, needs more {FOCAL} points maybe like a scared little animal somewhere but something like that to focus on aswell, it would be a nice touch there now if it is a burnning forrest highlight the fire a bit more aswell, so it standsout more aswell, just another idea or two. but anyways it was a rather dark and neat piece you have here, but still i could see it improving with more visuals and extra effects like animals and lighting effects, anyways good job sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things i suggested were more fire highlight in the backround if its a forrest, and maybe a scared little animal in front for a more focus point.

~X~

CptBeefcake responds:

well it doesn't actually stand on its own; it's part of a triptych. the focal point of the piece is in the second panel. btw it isn't necessarily fire, you might taking it too literally. Other than that I agree, the warm colours sit back instead of jumping forward, and this piece didn't incorporate the same obvious lighting the other two did

thanks for the review

[war]

Could be larger and indepth with some more detail.

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was something very impressive, you really gave the skin a nice texture giving it that real feel to it and all, would have liked to see more with the {EYES} maybe abit of red in there for that extra detail or something, and as for more improving on this, maybe some sorta fake {BLOOD} just an idea though, now i dont mean to complain or anything like that but you should give an even more fuller {VIEW} of the whole art piece, it would bring out the little details abit better, and just overall making it much better, now these are just one reviewers opinions and ideas, but really for the most part you have a really nice piece here and would love to see much more of your work in the coming future, anyways good job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe instead of just the white eyes add some red in there just for more detail to the picture as a whole, maybe even some fake blood out of the wounds.

~X~

ramymagdy responds:

thx man ...really appreciate your comment .... you have a point here ..

[Imperial Inquisitor.]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
Love all the reds you have on this, this was actually a pretty ood rendition of a character alot like starwars ones but seems to comeout very well, the blacked out ground area seems like it could have used more shading and stuff just to give the effect it was more dirty and dusty, just an idea that could show more of the detail, since you did present an awsome character here with lots of detail, the glow on the sabre was pretty impressive aswell, all around this was well done and i enjoyed reviewing it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained you could work on the ground area maybe some scratches here and there or something, something that shows more detail.

~X~

johngoldenwolf responds:

Thank you.

[M-Bot Reinterpretation]

Awsome as always

~~REVIEW~~
M-Bot is pretty cool, heh you should make X-Bot haha and he would be the ultimate reviewer, heh anyways but i like this one and love all the {BEAMS} here and you gave it that extra touch too which is also very nice indeed, the {STAR} could have more of a glaring shine to it though, its ok but just felt its the center peice and is kinda like his badge almost, you should make it really shine, As an extra touch on this poster i think you should ad in the backround some sirins or some sort maybe from a police car and or a police ship, it would ad abit to it i think anyways, but really for the mostpart you have a really good poster here, maybe not as impressive as p-bot but still really good, i love all the littel details you put in this, it really shows off the effort like the {M} on his arm and a few other things, its those little things that really bring the robot out, so props to you on an awsome job. but anyways keep up the awsome work on these posters and all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give the {STAR} some shine to it a sorta glaring shine, also suggested maybe a police car or ship passing in the backround with the red and blue lights that would be a nifty backround scene

~X~

Manuel-Dangelo responds:

I don't think I'm doing other M-Bot... yet who knows. If I do I'll keep this in mind

[Thumbs Up!]

creative

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so this was interesting, thought this was something differant like some character, but as i look at it, its pretty neat, the whole image is kinda {BLAND} but its still neat i do like the {SUBTLENESS} of it and all, the star eyes and happy smile also the happy {TEXT} was neat, but maybe you could add more of a fancy {FONT} somehow??? it would bring it out abit more and show more style to the art piece as a whole. I like the {SHADES} and fresh look you have going on and all, gives it that fresh feel that is pretty neat i like it very much, you shoould do more art stuff like that, maybe even ad more colors in the backround so that you could also take away that blandness, the bland stuff im talking about is not a big issue but could use abit of effort in taking it away, As for your idea here with the character being a {THUMB} i thought that was really creative so props to you on the creativeness of it, you get points there, but anyways keep up the awsome work, i enjoyed this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i wouldnt mind you making the text more fancy with a more louder {FONT} but also maybe much larger to fill in some of that blandness i see, Also another nice tip that may help would be adding some other shades of color to take away some of the blandness in the backround,

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad ya liked, thanks for the review! Also, everything is vectored here, there's no "font" used, but your right, the size could represent the degree of happiness in the picture, should be bigger.