XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[back to the undead]

A blast from the past

~~REVIEW~~
Haha now this was cool, really takes you back to the classic movie, i have come to love, you seem to really like {ZOMBIES} but i like this one you have some good dark colrs, and this is neat, how its back to the future, and zombie mixed in so nice job on that aspect of things. Now what happened to the car is sad, bbut it was a decent little piece with a blast from the past, you presented us with some nice art on a classic, with some great use of color and you even added some color into this piece, wish there was some more parts and such, maybe in another future art piece, but anyways i love it takes me back.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make it like a continuing piece with more understanding in each piece

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

we are doing the blues borthers next

[heaven. just a jump away]

Entertaining comic

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute like a {COMIC} and i could totally see this in the sunday comic strip, but anyways you really put some good humor into this now i was looking at this and thought is Jesus telling him to jump to the other side, to save him, or is jesus telling him to jump in because he is not worth saving? lol just thought it was funny because you never know, allthough that may not have been your intent, now to improve on this maybe put more dead in the hole, maybe to make it even funnier you can have some one hangin the jesus side but jesus has yet to help him just another silly idea i thought, infact i wouldnt mind seeing this in a more comic like feel, you could really tell a tale with this one hehe, anyways just another crazy thought, but it was funny and i enjoyed what you presented us with.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe take it to a new level and add a comic like feel, with {FRAMES} also suggested a few wacky ideas for more humor above in review.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

wacky

[could it be true love?]

Interesting lovers

~~REVIEW~~
Now here we go, i love zombies and this was another decent ones from you, the {BLER} was a nice touch i thought, and you can kinda see some thought bubbles in the backround, the color and shades is dim wich seems to fit well its a very grungy look, I like that fact that you put more then just one zombie and there seems to be others but very very faint, thats ok too, i think you could have done a little more with blood, maybe they just came from lunch and have some dripping fresh blood?? well its an idea anyways, but none the less this was another impressive piece by you, as improving i suggested a few ideas, that would show more of the details, with fresh blood and all, but other then that it was alright, anyways once again nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some fresh blood could be showing?

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

well its done now so no room for improvement

[fei lung (LEGEND!)]

Awsome

~~REVIEW~~
And here we have another great piece by you, as always great stuff, There is alot of line work in this one, cool and shows alot of the detail, and shows his action pose, would have liked to see the {PANTS} not all black but maybe lighter and with some shades in it or even some of that nice line-work in it, And with the white backrond kinda gives it a bland feel, so maybe some sorta backround would sufice, maybe some fighting place or even other fighters in the backround, you could even show some beat up fighters to really show he means busness, but really this was a nice pice and was very welldone, so awsome job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awsome linework here maybe with some backround you could show a more full piece,

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

thanks mate another awesome critique

[kermit the mob frog]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok this was amusing this looks abit bland though as this was the only part, would have really loved some {BACKROUND} to this art piece, it would tell more of the story, maybe you could have added a scene were there was one of the other puppets running away, might make for a more funnier part but thats just my opinion, have some colored backround would seem to work aswell, and i wouldnt mind some more standoutish colors , as for the drawing its actually very good and simple which is also a plus, I really like the gun on the ground making you guess the killer or even suicide, but once again you amaze us even with you older works, keep it up, i look forward to more of your drawings and art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work to give more to the story or adding some solid color would be a nice touch up

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

well bloody hell i never thought people would still be looking at the first one i ever did!

[200th DRAWING ON NG]

Newgrounds galore

~~REVIEW~~
Now this is is awsome, kinda like whats on the newgrounds, frontpage, but to see how you did your own style, here shades are not as deep as your other work, I like all the differant characters here and your own little style you put on them, the {BACKROUND} was sorta so-so, an idea might be to add some sorta maybe {CITY} since you see that in alot of ng stuff like the banner and stuff, but i thought something could go back there maybe even something just a tad light like that so that it doesnt take away from your main drawing of characters and such, and these are just a few ideas to think about to improve on something already awsomly done, anyways nice job on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work like a city drop, some blood or more gringy looking spots here and there wouldnt hurt.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

incase you haven't noticed backgrounds aren't usually my thing

[fakebook and twatter]

Very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
Now this one was very impressive, i like the awsome shades you have some deep texture in this one, and the {DRAWING} really seemed to comeout neat here, almost like a little story comic ext, the facebook Theres alot of stuff in the drawing, wouldnt mind if things were spaced out somewhatm also love the colors used seemed to really work off eachother with the greens and browns, An idea to give a more visual on the book maybe a glowing eye of sorts would be nice, just an idea though, and in the lower left and roght corners of the drawing could use something maybe something seems bland in that area. anyways decent drawing, and i look forward to seeing more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A good drawing here, maybe some spacingout of stuff, or if you like that style fill in the bland spots, and give the {BOOK} a more focus point as suggested the eyes or even some bloody teeth, anyways nice work.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

i wanted to keep the colour bold and bland like their crappy logos.