XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drunk Russian Guy]

notbad bad at all

~~REVIEW~~
So this was ok, i kinda liked it if you ask me though, it was a good {SKETCH} nothing too fancy but still had it moments you did show us effort with some details and emotion in the character with eyes and such, now some {COLOR} would really spice this up though, so i wouldnt mind seeing some color presented, so for a better outcome maybe a larger scale and some added color.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color maybe even a larger {SCALE} drawing

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thies responds:

Thanks for the review :)

[Self Portrait]

This was decent

~~REVIEW~~
Wow this was pretty interesting i thought the holding up of the actaual pictures was a nifty and creative idea, the {BACKROUNDS} looked very realistic or could have been a {3d-RENDER} of some type?? anyways glad to see this got an honorble mention for frontpaged very nice job there, now this was pretty neat with the odd but neat looking eyes, you gave it that unique and odd style that i love so i was glad to have seen this, as for improvments i would suggest throw in a little puppy or rabbit in the backround just for extra measure haha, anyways nice job here hope to see more of your work soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As an extra idea throw in a little puppy or rabbit in the backround. other then that i thought it was ok.

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NeonMonster responds:

duly noted.

[Poisson Apple]

Creative and nifty

~~REVIEW~~
I love this one, i actually have a simular tattoo, i think the painting cameout well, more blood could be there like one idea might be the blood dripping out the table like thing but this was a pretty good piece and ill add this one as my faves, another thing would be to bring out more shine like on the apple, the backround was interesting maybe a more darker feel in the backround, i guess that wouldnt work too well with the dark table just an idea though, but anyways great painting and i look forward to seeing and reviewing more of your stuff. anyways good luck

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few shines and darker issues

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afiboy69 responds:

First i just want to thank u for adding the painting to ur favorites and leaving a very nice helpful review =) i find it interesting that u have a tattoo that has a similar depiction or atmosphere, sounds badass =D so im glad this had given u some sort of meaningful connection, which I think is very important when it comes to art. Anyways once again thank u for the feed back =)

[Earth Dragon]

Nice mix dragon

~~REVIEW~~
Wow i love dragons and this was pretty impressive, i think the tittle should have ran something like this {SNAKE-DRAGON} Seems more fitting to what the drawing and your comments go with, i love the mixture of the snake and dragon allthough would have been nice to show more of the body so i could see how it all forms out, but great backround very fitting and great color and texture with the snake its all perfect in element, so awsome job on this one, but like i said a more body shot would have been even better, anyways nice job i look forward to more of your fantastic designs.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a full body shot would have been great.

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Louise-Goalby responds:

The commission was only of a headshot.

[Woods]

Nifty

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow this was very neat i thought and i am really loving the {BLACK-WHITE} style with this one, love all the great line-work with the trees and how this goes off into the {DISTANCS} very nice detail and great effort on your side there, very impressive indeed, now as a possible tip, maybe you should have a sorta {FOCUS-POINT} or something and to go over the edge, have it some {COLOR} but only that one focus point would be color, but other then that this was very good i thought and i rather liked it, so keep up the awsome drawings and paintings.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe as mentioned ad a focus point or prop

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itsKris responds:

Thanks for the advice :)

[Smurfette]

Nice style could use more though

~~REVIEW~~
oh wow this was pretty interesting the {COLORS} were pretty good the one thing that bothered me about this piece was that it was much smaller then expected, maybe if you made it larger you could show off more of the color {DETAIL} just a helpfull tip there for either this or other new stuff you may be making, also maybe some {BACKROUNDS} would also be nice, maybe a fantastic world of where this character comes from, and maybe even abit more {SHINE} on the characters body, these are just some tips they may or may not help but regardless of all that i thought it was pretty good drawing and character just wish it had abit more of the details, anyways nice job i like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things like more shine, some backround, and a larger scale model

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JinnPixel responds:

You know it is pixel art, right? Make it larger would be a pain in the ass.

[get it checked]

Nice drawing

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute, the large eye was a great idea, and i do like the black and white style, but you should think about adding some {COLOR} but i do like what you have here, with getting this checked out and all haha that was cute so nice job on that aspect of things, i mentioned some color would be nice, like, you could leave the drawing itself black and what then have the back scene colored somehow it would still leave focus for the drawing, so other then that i thought it was pretty good, on a last note you maybe even want to make the larger eye colored, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and back distance ideas were suggested.

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CloseToGhost responds:

Fair comments! I usually stay away from colour but wish I could use it sometimes, perhaps I will upgrade some of these old drawings.

[Scribble Art]

Needs some color

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this was intersting, i think you said something about adding color to your works or even newer stuff, this drawing or sketch could use some of that color, maybe not {FILL-IN} but probably just adding differant colors with with the sketch lines and such, it wouldnt over kill on color but at the sametime give some color to the linework,just an idea there that would make this somewhat even better then it already is, something you should think about trying, so some extra color would be nice key, other then that i thought it was alright, so untill next time, good luck on anything new you may be working on.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color {LINE-WORK} would be a start

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saramary3 responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback!It's much appreciated. Yeah, I think with this one some color would be very nice as well. I'm not sure if this is a style that I'm going to pursue further, though.

[Teapunk]

Unique

~~REVIEW~~
ok so here is something {DIFFERANT} every once in awhile we will get stuff like this on the portal and this one was pretty {UNIQIE} glad you got a good grade on it, and this is art you see alot of this type of stuff in art shows and stuff, so this was interesting, now i think this would have been better if you had a differrant backround the one you had there kinda didnt allow for the picture to be focused on it was more of hard to see with the {PATTERN} backround it should have been probably just a white sheet or something, so ther then the backing it was alright and i thought it was pretty nifty

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just the backing should be a more {SOLID} not a patteren.

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Araelyn responds:

Hahahahaha. It's my wallpaper.