XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[silver scream]

Decent but could have more

~~REVIEW~~
Nice work on another Zombie something you really seem to enjoy and thats not a bad thing, i like this one cause you really gave it that {GRUNGE} look and you also aged him, kinda reminds me of zombies from the one and only George romero i think thats how his name is spelt, but anyways it is a poster as you seem, but the backround would look more poster like if you added some more to that backround besides just the wording, it just seems too {BLAND} back there and seems like you could spice it up with a number of things, maybe some blood, or brick wall or anything really but needs more to it and that would probably be the only points of improving i would think, its decent though just a tad bland.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So the backround was bland i suggested above some ideas maybe adding a brick wall, maybe some based color that works well with the wording or maybe even some other wording in there, so a number of things could be added to make it a little less bland and more poster like.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

posters are meant to be eye catching and a complex back takes away from that.

[bored at work]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
Now these four drawings or doodles are all pretty good and i can see why you scanned them they are abit more then just doodles they actually cameout pretty good, i think you should have gave them {ALL} funny quotes that related to them and there movies/shows, not sure what the first one was but it was great and you showed good detail in that one so nice job there, and you know me with color and backrounds i wont bring up backrounds but would have been nice with some color take the first one againthe spitting could have been {BLOOD-LIKE} something like that,I liked the woody and buzz in there being crude and rude in there old ways hehe i really like how you think and love some not all but some of your drawings, but besides that keep up the awsome drawings and in this case {DOODLES}..

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The first one could have had some color to reflect some blood spitting, and you should give them all funny quote bubbles,

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dommi-fresh responds:

jesus your piccy dude

[BULLSEYE]

Decent could use more though

~~REVIEW~~
Nice job on this, i actually think you could have turned this into a {COMIC} cover , with dc and all that comic galore, i like it with the black and white theme, it gives that old feeling to it, and the {DRAWING} is really welldone, also love the little details you gave it like the {SMOKE} and even added some {COLOR} on the back end, very nice eye for detail there, I do like the B/W style but would like to see more color even if its adding to the color in the backround, Now the comic feel is there so some changes and fixes might be as explained before adding it like a comic cover of sorts or even just some borders, but still a good piece you have here, keep up the nice artwork.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it like a comic cover ad the details you see on a cover like episode, quotes, and or the DC logo and all that good stuff, it will add to the detail of it already.

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dommi-fresh responds:

dc logo on a marvel character? i smell a suing

[300]

Awsome gore

~~REVIEW~~
Oh boy now this is something i really like to see, lots of {BLOOD} and very good gore here, now there is some differance is some of the blood some is just shooting out while others are just flying around, and i thought that really gave it a realistic feel to the whole art piece and really sets the tone when someone sees it for the first time as myself, I wouldnt mind have seeing more differant colors other then the oranges though, maybe if it was mixed up abit more it would show more of the {DETAIL} like armor and such but i guess these are the {300} type characters, but anyways you do show some nice detail regardless of the color, some ideas of improving would have some bones? maybe half bone with some meat on it? could show more gore and how bad the fight really got, anyways just an idea, it was a pleasure seeing this hope to see more of your awsome work real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have more body parts laying around even some showing some bone, also more texture in the blood would be another nice idea.

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dommi-fresh responds:

more body bits there is only so much i can fit on the page dude seriously WTF?

[geralt the witcher]

Awsome real expressions here

~~REVIEW~~
I really llike this one, you seemed to really go all out on this one, the colors shading and linework looks like alot of time was spent on this, the backround is not much to say much about but still you gave it something there, now you also gave this some decent {EMOTION} it looks like there is alot on the characters mind his facial expresions express this feeling and to get that down on a still art piece is awsome you see it now and then, and love how you had that here, it reall makes everything more of a story and all, so awsome job on that aspect of things, as to improve i wouldnt mind seeing more {BLOOD} detail on stuff and all, like the bag he is carring maybe have it dripping or something, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Wouldnt mind seeing more blood stains and such give it the resluts of more emotion as is on his face expressions.

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dommi-fresh responds:

again i disagree it not all about the blood stains. sometimes it is right to have a blood drenched character but not all the time.

[ANDY KILLS THE ENVIRONMENT!]

Amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Ok so i found this one to be pretty funny, the blue head character was amusing and love this little comic strip you really gave the characters emotion and made the setting what it was, the text font was ok but thought maybe a better {FONT} could be in place maybe something more stylish, So you gave this some funny humor ok writing and with your awsome art skills it all panned out perfectly so nice job on this from all fronts, i would love to see you continue this more as like in a series of comics that might be something to see, but anyways fanncy fonts for the text next time but other then that it was fantastic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said, maybe some improved text font?

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dommi-fresh responds:

fair point made can't really bitch about that.

[The Ozzman VS The Batman]

Love it

~~REVIEW~~
Now this has some nice texture here really nice texture, and really love how you added some {GLOW} around ozzy it allows us too see the seperation, so anyways nice touch there, this was a good depction of ozzy its more of a {YOUNG} ozzy though, maybe you could do a {NOW} ozzy hehe but anyways this was nice very good thinking with the {BAT} and all, not alot of people know that, maybe you should have showm more bats in the backround maybe with eaten {HEADS} might be someone bazaar but would fut the drawing niceley, but regardless it was awsome to see a drawing of ozzy, and you did an outstanding job, hope to see more of your work, now improving this would be hard but i noticed you presented alot of reds here maybe the backround itself should have been a differant tone?? anyways good job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Theres alot of reds i would suggest to change it up with colors that will reflect off eachother.

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Merol responds:

I used some pictures of a more {NOW} Ozzy as references, so I'm not sure why he looks that young.

Heh, I think many people know that. It has been parodied lots of times (even by Ozzy himself)!!

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!

[army chick 2: BAZOOKA JANE]

Love the detail

~~REVIEW~~
Oh this was nice, it has that pose and you gave here the sexy look even as tough as she looks, i remember bazooka joe so this kinda fits with that theme and all, and like that the backround was not exactly blank but still had a little something, Now the colors are pretty good i like that it has the dingy feel, and like all the {DETAIL} you gave here like some bruises and such, also nice touch in not giving her some bruises in her girls hehe, but anyways nice and sexy form here, now as for improving onto this one, Now me since i like backrounds i would work there but you are not too into it so i would leave it as is i suppose, but anyways great piece here you have i like it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more bruses here and there maybe a scratch on her lady to show she is really out battling the baddies.

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dommi-fresh responds:

thanks buddy

[OUTTA WORK]

Cool

~~REVIEW~~
Wow your art seems to get better the older it is, but i like this one, as i am a starwars fan, and while this is all drawing, i would have liked to see some color maybe even if just a little here and there maybe paint the {GUNS} only might allow more focus on the image and make it more of a uniqe style, but the storm trooper is neat and i really like how you take something already popular and add a little {HUMOR} to it with a line here or there allthough i thought you could have gone abit more with the humor on this one, maybe in the backround you could have put other starwars characters on strike or homeless even lol, would be another good little funny moment that would reflect more on this, but regardless its very good and funny, keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color maybe just a prop is colored, and more in the backround to add more to the humor plot.

~X~

dommi-fresh responds:

theres no pleasing some