XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[FGO: Tamamo Lancer]

Really nice

So this was filled with all "SORTS" of color and props the character "WORK" was amazing onlything I might suggest would be on the fruit drink ad some sparkles and glare of the glass and fruit of it, A very awsome entry if you ask me it shows off your talent pretty well and you bring out some nice visuals, and all the little details really come out, its stuff like this that really make me enjoy art even more you bring that consept alive and make it so vibrant and for that alone you have my praise, and I do have to say that this was just a fun piece to review, and I have become an instant fan based on this entry.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
onlything I might suggest would be on the fruit drink ad some sparkles and glare of the glass and fruit of it

~X~

Queenashi responds:

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
only thing I might suggest is that nowhere did I ask for a critique so this comment comes off as unnecessarily pretentious :)

~Ashi~

[She Happy]

Very cute

And here was a "REALLY-CUTE" art piece here, and for the life of me I dont have a single suggestion for this piece because you have created something beautifull full of character and color, You have a Stellar piece of art here and the Blending is very nice, the idea is simple but you added some depth to this and made it your own style and thats what I really like about this, do make more and present us with this lovely art style that brings many lots of joy including yourself, because at the end of the day if you enjoy it thats all that matters anyways nice work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
for the life of me I dont have a single suggestion for this piece because you have created something beautifull full of character and color

~X~

Ehmbe responds:

Aw your too nice,thank you so much for the kindness!

[Demon Chibi]

Beautiful piece

This was nice I love the "POSE" you have here on this one and the "COLOR" is pretty nice too, the backround was subtle seems like you could ad some more color themes back there, you have a nice character here with some nice use of color and I really enjoyed this piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the backround was subtle seems like you could ad some more color themes back there

~X~

KatieTheDragon responds:

Uh ok im still not used to getting critiques rather than just comments... I tend to not focus on backgrounds though unless i feel i need to..? I normally just throw some color or in less cases just plain white? Do you mean more color as in maybe some gradient or like shapes? Patterns such as checkers and so on?

[trapped knight]

Very good energy

Lots of nice color and good character here really nice work, My suggestion might be to have the eyes glow a pink form to relate to the pink ooz, Good energy in this one, You have some very nice efforts and ofcourse most impressive details some things could be touched up but thats not too much to be honest. This was pretty Grand and Mythical my Overview Appropriately shows that you have great talent that puts you in the Spotlight and you have an Energetic and creative style about this piece and all of your art pieces. So besides all that said it was a nice entry to have seen and review keep up the brilliant efforts.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
My suggestion might be to have the eyes glow a pink form to relate to the pink ooz

~X~

mogy64 responds:

thanks! while i did want to make the eyes glow, it ended being a bit too distracting because of how huge they are already lol. theyre white to remain consistent with the references provided so i couldnt do much in that case

[Fairy Ava]

Another delightful piece

So this was nice the reds really work well here, maybe adding some other colors or design in the backround would be a nice touch up to this piece, you have some nice character design though, love the eyes too, so nice work and look forward to more from you soon.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe adding some other colors or design in the backround would be a nice touch up to this piece

~X~

geleekinder responds:

Thanks again! And yee, I am probably going to redo this piece and I will keep what you've suggested in mind!

[Geisha Robot]

Really nice

So here with this beautiful "PIECE" this was some really nice work, that outter white facial sheild seems like it could have had a bit of shine and glare effect to it, but other then that this was really nice work here, other then that this was a fantastic piece of art here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like it could have had a bit of shine and glare effect to it

~X~

geleekinder responds:

Super late but thanks! I appreciate the critique and suggestion!

[Refusin' To Die]

Nice

So this was really nice I love the "BLACK-AND-WHITE" love the smoke effects even this was a great "CHARACTER" here you have some nice talent and it shows off well, I cant help it but think some added color could be added not all of it maybe just a frame or border maybe the backround or that smoke element, regardless this was pretty good stuff.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I cant help it but think some added color could be added not all of it maybe just a frame or border maybe the backround or that smoke element

~X~

Hakkwolf responds:

Thanks for the feedback :)

[Swamp Ravager]

Wow nice

Now this was something "UNIQUE" I love the creative design here very good detail and love the formation of this one, would love more sunlight or a light source comming down on this character, A Symbolic submission if I say so myself, you have Appropriately shown off some detail and a saying I say create a good foundation and maximize that passion and energy into more success, you have done just that, this was a Large Hearted and Dedicated piece, the art shows off well all on its own and the talent shines well, this was a very cool piece you have herem and I hope you keep making more like this, anyways untill next time keep up the awsome art work anyways untill next time.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would love more sunlight or a light source comming down on this character

~X~

Kilcra responds:

Thanks man! I totally agree with your critique, the light is a little too diffuse here and the monster would benefit from some more directed light. Now that you mention it, that would definitely make this more interesting and give the picture more contrast.

[DON'T GET COOKED]

Beautifull design

Well first off the animation was very nice very fluid, the artwork itself was amazing I like the pixel element here too some really nice work, So I can see based on this art piece, that it seems while the making of it you had an appetite for creativity and it shows some good detail in your work, I could still see a few changes and fix ups here and there but overall this was a pleasent piece, So I have to say before I end this review that this has been a pleasure to review this piece here today its amazing as you are an amazing artist.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
This one was fine as is.

~X~

Risenshiney responds:

Ahhhh, thanks a bunch once more!!!

Please tell me what could do with fixing! Its far from perfect, I may not tweek it, but I'd love to learn for future works!

[Shake Shake!! Marina!]

A cool piece

wow I have to say this was nice, and the small "ANIMATION" was cute, you should think about adding even more animation even with the character, You have Extended your ideas and concept into the art portal here with this piece, as its a brilliant and fantastic piece of art, your Desire is Knockout and with this entry your art is Sizzling hot, and I was glad to have seen this submission, So as this review ends here I have to say that you really did make something special here, the energy shines bright on this one, and after all that said I enjoyed this piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
you should think about adding even more animation even with the character

~X~

MincyMatsu responds:

Thank you for your words!
I may animate her, i can animate characters afterall, i am just very reluctant to share anything online, i may try this!