XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Some broad]

Decent

Well this was decent but could use some work on it. Like the shades and lightning effects need to be more better and adding some texture in props and backrounds would be a plus as well just a few ideas to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I just stated a few things can be improved for a better outcome

~X~

twobyfour responds:

Yeah... I'm not fuckin Picasso, I know :|
Thanks for coming!

[Inktober Day 25]

Notbad

So here was another nice piece in the bunch would have loved much more color and more use of the backround but you had a goal I understand so that was cool anyways nice job here keep up the good efforts and good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail ofcourse and more color all around

~X~

ChazDude responds:

It's a sketch. It isn't SUPPOSSED to have colour.

[Reaper OW fanwork]

Wow

I love this piece love what you did with this the darkness and the "EYES" I do think you should have added more glare and shine to the eyes but you have some nice work here very well designed and created. great shades and depth all the way around, This style was pretty interesting, it could be better with a few more details and effort, just take your time and keep at it, and dont take light to the improvment points suggested. because they will help of course and bring some better resluts all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more glare and glow on the eyes would be nice but maybe not your direction.

~X~

JessxJess responds:

Thank you so much for the thoughtful response! Good eye too, near an end of a personal piece I always think about another and want to move onto the next xD Criticism is always welcome!

[Are you determined to give us candy?]

Nice job here

And here was a nice work of little tid bits of characters and they look pretty good very fresh looking and something that would be nice if newgrounds pushed them forward so nice efforts all the way around love them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more color additions but they are pretty good as is

~X~

ScepterDPinoy responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Each sprite only has one color in vein of Undertale fyi. I've seen some people attempt to color the battle sprites for their fan game.

[Jilted Sunrise]

Nice

Very nice work here seems like you could have had more of a reflection and shine on the ocean it seems it would bring more to light but you have a nice piece here the paint shows off well just needs some more lighting effects and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some lighting effects needed

~X~

PrettyGeek responds:

I agree! If I were to repaint, I'd add more glimmer and transparency to the water.

[Ak Torsafru]

Love this

I especially love what you have done with the orange hair and how it shines off so well that has been a really focal point of detail the female girl is already well drawn and love the little extra details that you really put forward here and it shows off well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really couldn't find anything here to really improve on here it's a fantastic piece with no major changes needed

~X~

Trebuxet responds:

Thanks for your comment :)

[Maid portrait]

Nice

This was notbad kind of nice love the eyes on this it really glares off well and the whole blue theme you have here it really seemed to work well she needs more emotion in the face. But it seems kind of flat maybe working on that will improve on things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It looks a little flat maybe adding some emotion in the face will change that up a bit

~X~

Twinkiesama responds:

Sorry for the late response. Yes, I agree with your critique. It is challenging to add emotion to "moe" characters since they tend to have the same face and expressions. However, I have been working on that lately and hopefully I'll get better with it in the future.

[One Piece - Brook ( Colored )]

Notbad at all

Now here was something interesting I like the style. I love the sparkle in the eye and think you should make it sparkle even more I would even go as far to put more shine on the sword as well give it that sparkle touch about it all very nice job indeed try it out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle and shine on the sowrd and eye

~X~

TheDeathMeister responds:

Sai went bad on me saying "The Memory is full" ( Something like that )
The Sword was supposed to have soul faces on it though
shame I kinda facked it up

Thanks for the review bro!

[Andy; The one who made it home]

Very nice

I really like this some nice efforts and love the window shot and speaking of that I could see you bringing more light in from the window and reflect on the different areas in the room would be a nice touch indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more light would be nice from the window

~X~

PrettyGeek responds:

Good idea! I think adding in light may brighten it too much, so it'd need quite a bit of shadow to remain bleak. It'd lose it's flat quality, though.

[Happy (late) Halloween!!]

Notbad

Well I must say this was interesting the characters are cute and stylish a nice design here and I guess there was an amusing joke behind it all. A pretty good outcome some backround work would be a plus here but that's just me anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work of course

~X~

viqqah responds:

Thanks for the feedback <3