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[Cyberdevil 2013]

Okay

Ok this one here is okay but I wish there was more. I do love your smiley face and character design on this one. I think the "RED" horns were a nice touch and it overall had a good design theme but there needs to be more work done on the body. I found the depth you used in the body to be okay, but you need to keep that consistent with the rest of the work. The body and head don't match up in depth. I do love the head tho, the smile type demonic devil face worked and you added some nice glow to the face. I wish you added a background to this one. I do think it would have really made it feel more completed and helped with the depth issues. Overall it was okay and I would hope to see this again with changes.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More work as stated above, more depth all over.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah the body was... pretty basic! It was for a credits section though, so no background, just the character.

[Inktober #31 Monsters InKolor]

Good improvement

This one here is another re-imaging of your last work, but this time you took some time to get it done and I think that paid off very well. The color additions to this was much needed and very well executed. I did like how erie and sinister this one was in the past, and even in black and white that worked out well, but the color really makes it come alive and have more details. You understand what is what, where which monster is, and how it all works together. Before it all seems a bit lost inside each other with a flow of black to black lines and no ending or starting point. With the color you really bring out where things beginning and end in a detailed and exciting environment.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really love the end results here

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad you like it. :)

[Inktober #24]

Wow

Ok now this one here your work here is wow, the two faces, the detail, this is all really good stuf for inktober ink work. The use of lines into other lines to create shading and texture detail was really nice and the spot and splashes of color when needed really made this pop out and create a flow from face to face. I think you have something good here, and I was just saying "WOW" when I saw this one. I do think you have too much white space tho, and if you crop this, you'll see the faces more and the character alltogether more in detail and sizing. That is really up to you but it is something I'd consider for the next round of ink work, but your inktober work is always a blast to view.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I liked this one as it is but you could crop the white space out more and make the main character a bit bitter in sizing.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I'm pretty wowed by the wow factor of your review here! XD I felt like this one came across just a bit... off, but there is an improved version later on. Think you might've reviewed that one already. Glad you liked this too though, and solid advice (already used)!

[Inktober #22 Wacom Issue #98]

Notbad

Sounds like you've got a lot of issues with your computer based on what you've written here. I mean, wow, this isn't a good thing to have such lag on a computer and maybe that is why you focused solely on the text of this art and then dressed it up with colors and effects? I do like your ability to create textures and effects with just lines and not using some other program to fancy it up. You have raw talent in that ability and I do enjoy the creative types of text you come up with using your free-hand. I wouldn't really change anything here but the last line, it is a bit small and harder to read then the other lines, so work on at a bit I think.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more size and stability to the last sentence of your image here

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well I did, but it's mostly exaggerated in favor of the message. :) It's not as noticeable outside of Flash, and heavier (on detailed) drawings like this. The more lines you add the slower it gets, so my style does require some extra resources. I did get an upgrade on RAM this same year I think. Still bit limited GPU though (no GPU at all actually, just integrated).

As for the last line it's meant to trail away and become nigh unreadable though, like the problems never end. Thanks for the review!

[TopOfTheWorld]

WOW

Ok this one here is really neat and a good addtion to Robot day submissions. I see it is an older one and that is fine. nothing wrong with some older works being added in. So this was cool I like the robot climbing up here, but there should be more shine on the robot parts or textures to show shine and some sparkle on the electricity. Those changes could work and maybe something with the background color cause the sky should be dark but other then that this was pretty cool so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine on the robot and sparkle in electricity

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Definitely something I'd have worked more on today. :) My gradients and successive shadowing were like my shine back in the day. Thanks for reviewing!

[SmileyMassacre]

Another good full image

Here was another cool one you have here, this one here well, I really like the character you have, kind of like a pacman type standing in front of a wall but looking like he went through the wall like the Kool-Aid man. That was a nice job the character work is fantastic and it really made me laugh. The coloring was great and the background was nice to see something fully completed and not a sketch type with all the additons and props and settings. so nice job indeed on this nice piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe more blood off the pacman

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Interesting similarities. XD I can see them too now... always looked at this one more like just a twisted smiley. Like the title. And yes, the lack of blood is kinda mystifying! Glad you got a laugh out of it though! Old things seem good for such things.

[SymbolSmiley]

Funny

This was kind of amazing and interesting in the simplistic style, Funny stuff here and nice style of art work here, its these kinds of pieces that really make me laugh and think about how something simple can be so many things. This was a good art piece, these types can be hard to review and the only thing you really need to change here, like some of your other works, is a background. I do like his one, it looks like a clown face or something you can put over a pumpkin. But anyway nice way to make me smile, keep up what you do because its pretty good stuff, And Enjoy reviewing stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
not sure with this one I would normally say backround lol, but sometimes not everything needs a backround :)

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Less is more sometimes huh. :) It does get me thinking of clowns too, for some strange reason! And the backgrounds, yupp, got it. XD Thanks for reviewing all this old stuff too.

[Underpass]

A beautiful piece

And once again some beautiful pixel art and again no need for any changes to this piece, I like the concept of this pixel piece right from the start some nice work on this one indeed, You have some good skills when it comes to some pixel design and the talent shines very well, and makes for a "BEAUTIFULL" piece indeed, so nice work on this one all the way around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And once again some beautiful pixel art and again no need for any changes to this piece

~X~

Kldpxl responds:

Thank you very much for your helpful comments.

[My Queen]

Really nice

So this was some really nice work here, the shine is nice but maybe if it was more of a sparkle might look better, Always nice to see the progress behind a piece, though in this case not that case lol, but you have established some good interest here and bring out a nice progression. I have come to enjoy a lot of things about this piece, but mostly is that it probably took a lot of time and effort to put this together. But anyways very nice work here and was pleased to be able to review your work here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the shine is nice but maybe if it was more of a sparkle might look better

~X~

FrankenToon responds:

Thanks so much for the feedback and compliments! You're right, I could totally see more sparkles around the eyes and other areas. I don't usually get helpful critiques so this means a lot, thanks again!!

[I, Robot]

Happy

Nice work. I think the use of big squares for eyes was a nice touch and gave this character a personality of its own and depth to something we see as an ordinary robot. I love the use of a background light on this and how much you kept this piece of work unique to the work you've been doing and not a basic robot vector artwork. The outline of your robot match well to the color theme you've got going on and you've allow a nice flow of the piece by thinking about consistentcy. I do love this and I think this is your first submission so good job for a first time.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My only crtique here is maybe add a border with some deep reds in there or yellows.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm first submission...? Had to check, but no, I think this one came later. :) Glad you liked it though! I'm not as big a fan of borders I think, but might be worth experimenting with yeah. Thanks again!