XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gremblo]

Beautiful

She has a beautiful "SMILE" and that perfect pose too you have a good drawing skill here and it shows off well and I was glad to have reviewed this piece as its some top notch work, I might ad that maybe a sparkle on her hoop earings might be pretty good idea, anyways keep up the awsome art work.

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I might ad that maybe a sparkle on her hoop earings might be pretty good idea.

~X~

ndasfw responds:

Thanks a bunch, glad you like it! And I appreciate the crit!

Great suggestion- little lighting details like that are something I'm trying to improve on actually! But you gotta admit, the light hitting Gremblo's buttcrack is exquisite. ;)

[How the Brain Works]

Stylish drawing and or design

Wow this was "UNIQUE" like with the eye and such, Some added color would be nice but overall its cool, So here you have shown us that its ok not to use some color or any color at all, an awsome black and white drawing the lines are good the design of it is welldone and overall this was just some nice detai, this style with the line-work and good detail is a plus in my book.

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Some added color would be nice but overall its cool

~X~

Imacow responds:

I RESPOND TO EVERY REVIEW!

Haha sorry for the very late response dude! The linework in this could have been so much better! Haha take it easy.

[Chamber of Solitude]

Very nice

Immediately the "GLOW-OF-THE-SETTING" is noticeable. The predominant presence of a white color is fitting with additional cool colors such as beige and teal, In all of the brightness the "FEMALE-CHARACTER" is still apparent in all her detailed glory with the sharp line work, The intricate design behind her as well as the glowing sphere she’s sitting on "PRODUCES" an impression of divine omniscience for her, That idea if correct is compatible with a bright presentation, A lack of clearness to her surroundings also brings in mysteriousness for her character and what it could represent which provokes the viewer’s thoughts.

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Another amazing piece and design seems like you could have more domminant lighting come from behind her.

~X~

VortexVisionz responds:

Thank you for the detailed review! It’s nice to know that my work can be looked with the vibes I try to put into a piece. Also nice to know from another’s perspective the things I could improve upon! Thank you

[Inktober #17]

Ok decent

This was a nice idea to take your last inktober work and add something to it. It is like you took the shell of the art and placed it as a focal point with a nice artistic style. I think the way you kept it more as a sketch was an interesting choice and the fact that each version of him isn't exactly the same was also a nice touch. I think overall this is a good job but I would add up a border to this one as this one could use more lines to go with the nice textured lines within Luffy.

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Add a border to match those nice lines within each Luffy.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's three different experiments with the outlines, but the middle one does stand out yes. Thanks for the feedback!

[Inktober #14]

Decent

OK so this one is a bit tricky, you see, I know what you are capable of doing and to make something so simple is good but not great. I do think in terms of artistic ability you can make something as small as a smile a good thing, but I wish there was more. I mean, the lines are sharp, the color is popping, but nothing more to this one. I know you probably were not going for something big here, but I expect more detail from you with these, but that is a personal opinion.

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Nice but needs more detail and not as simplistic

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I don't think art quality should be measured in terms of effort so much as the end result. ;) But that seems to be what you're contemplating too! Appreciate the thoughts. Though I do like simplicity too. Sometimes less is more IMO.

[Inktober #27]

Love

This one is like a good one about love and the different aspects that love can have. The purples you used here are nice because they have a vibrancy to them. I think you picked a good selection of colors that compliment each other and give off that sense of love and kind of gives me that feeling of peace too. I just wish you cropped this one a bit as a lot of unused space can look nice, but this seems a bit much to me. I'd make this more of a decal design.

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Too much unused space, just try to crop it next time and make it more of a decal

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm yeah, could've had less background here. Thanks for the review!

[Inktober #28]

Love part 2?

I see you are going for that design of re-using the art in a new way again. I do like when you do that, but with this one, it seems dry. I mean, it looks great as the last one had the great colors and this one still does, but it lacks something when you remove things after seeing a finished product beforehand. I think this one is super interesting, but again, you should make these more of a decal design and crop out alllll this unused space you have going on here.

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Once again..too much unused space, just try to crop it next time and make it more of a decal

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

That thing about less is more, you know. ;) Sometimes really feel like it looks better without all the extra, but indeed, would've been better a bit bigger, I agree. Thanks again.

[Inktober #21]

Depth

This one here is okay and has some serious depth going on inside it. I mean, the way the black lines flow with one another is fascinating. I love this style you do because it looks like rain of black making shapes and characters. I do think you use a bit too much black and could use some color on the main characters, but then it may lose that style you've got going on here, so while it may work out to add some color, I would understand if you did not do this.

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Good job as it is, but maybe add color to his one next time

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Cyberdevil responds:

"rain of black making shapes and characters"... I like that. :D Color or no color hmm... it does change the character.

[Inktober #2]

Not bad

I see you've not submitted this one for voting, but I think it is pretty neat as it is. I do like your orange color use and the eyes on these characters are very cute and unique. I like the fact you have an orange under them going with your theme here of oranges. I think the white space is a bit unneeded but you can always add more background later to your work. I know you've done vector backgrounds before so it is nice to see when you do those. I think next time add a bit more and it will be a fully completed piece.

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More additions to this and less white space

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Yeah there's quite a few of these I didn't really feel qualify as portal quality. :) But thank you. These are all Inktober doodles after all so I haven't spent a tremendous amount of time on each one, but will keep getting better I hope; make better things even without tremendous amounts of time required! :) Appreciate all these reviews!

[MCD]

Decent

I do love a good logo for companies. I think this was not bad and was done well for what it is. I do think your lighting is off in places, it just seems all over the place with those dots, but I see this making a good logo or something for a banner. I do like the use of color and your vector designs seem to flow well with polished line work.

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Work on the lighting for your designs a bit more but good overall

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Hmm yeah, not sure what I was going for with those dots, seems like an unfinished pattern when you start looking at it... good eye. And glad you liked the logo overall!