XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Digitalart]

Beautiful

wow I love this especially the "FLAME" red like hair it throws a viusal idea maybe making a border on the edges here with the red flame like hair, A fantastic piece you have here, there are some points i may get to later that you could improve on but for the mostpart it was pretty nifty I thought, I did find this to be Delightful and just an overall piece, allthough some areascould be improved and I will get into that. Alright so I will throw some props at you as this was a pleasure of an art piece and these types of piece is what really gets me inspired to review things like this, so nice job.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
a viusal idea maybe making a border on the edges here with the red flame like hair

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DidiEsmeralda responds:

Thanks XwaynecoltX for your suggestions I will keep you in mind.

[Screen Smooching]

Cute

So here was something cute and "SIMPLE" now with this piece I could see you adding some backround detail here on this one, it has some decent potential, but the backround needs something maybe even a little design or added color on the backround, you made an amusing art piece though.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I could see you adding some backround detail here on this one, it has some decent potential

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MrUnder responds:

Thanks for the ideas dude ^^

[Void]

Notbad

So this one was pretty good, the "PIXEL" was pretty nifty and it is some amazing pixel you can see the fine details, as for that backround it doesnt match all that well with the pryamid, but I do like the work you are doing here and your pixel art style is really great.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would change the backround for something more darker.

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SiccRicc responds:

I will keep that in mind with my next piece thank you :)

[Lisa Loud]

Simple and fresh

This was some simple and "FRESH" art it also reminded me of the old classic cartoons of the past, the "COLORS" are fresh and this has a nice sleek look about it with some really nice visual point here, maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them, a good art piece you have here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe as some added effects you could make all the liquid and solutions have a glow to represent some energy to them

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LuchoVolke responds:

Thank you very much! I'm very glad you liked it. It's kinda oldie, but since then I've been polishing this UPA-ish style, adding some texture (in this piece the brushes carry all the texture) and contrast and such.
Again, thankies! :D

[Once in a dream...]

Beautiful

A very beautiful here the girl is adorble the character work is fantastic and the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer, Well thats just a suggestion anyways you do some good work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the hanging stars are a nifty idea now as an add on to the stars make some sparkle make some glow brighter and some that are just dimmer

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Ryouhiko-Ankuu responds:

Thanks for your review! Definitely too late to edit this exact work since it's way too old, but your suggestion will come in handy in some future works.)

[More Doodles]

Nice

So this was cool, and you have some nice black and white "DETAIL" this is one of those pieces you could ad some color or maybe just parts of it has some color, but overall this was pretty good and a good black and white drawing and sketch, so keep making some fancy sketches.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
his is one of those pieces you could ad some color or maybe just parts of it has some color

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SquizofrenicCat responds:

Hehe, thanks for the very nice criticism! This is very old so I'm honestly surprised.
I'll be posting some of my tumblr stuff in the future, your feedback on color is actually very useful. I haven't worked on many colored pieces as of late.

[Super Sonico Winter]

Cute

So here was a very "CUTE" character not sure how to review this one as its pretty solid work, maybe some added elements in the backround to show she may have been doing other things maybe a snowman in the backround, anyways you have some nice detail here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe some added elements in the backround to show she may have been doing other things maybe a snowman in the backround

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HBeats responds:

Thanks for the input, glad you like her :)
Yeah the background doesnt do much for telling a story. I was supposed to have some snowmen around her, but decided they didn't match the background (more because of how the lineart looked)
I'll take it into consideration for future works tho!

[Machi scribble 01]

Cute art

So this was some "CUTE-ART" here it almost reminds me of some "PIXEL-ART" it was a bit bland though especially in the backround and I could see you adding a little more depth in the backround even as some subtle props and such, But anyways thi was pretty good work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
it was a bit bland though especially in the backround and I could see you adding a little more depth in the backround even as some subtle props and such.

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MachiToons responds:

hmm... yea i get what you're saying, but a scribble is a scribble afterall haha
I meant this mostly just as a warm-up, since I hadn't drawn it quite some time, personally those simple backgrounds are just a way for me to add strong contrast, a color study so to say.

Thanks for the tip regardless, I agree there's just a tad too much negative space in this

[Mismagius by Biffalo]

Cool character here

So the "PURPLE" is looking good and I think adding some extra shine on the upper front of the hat would be a nice touch up here, but overall the character itself is pretty impressive with a nice fresh and sleek look here, I was really impressed with this character.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I think adding some extra shine on the upper front of the hat would be a nice touch up here

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Derfiul responds:

Thanks for the advise! I'm still learning, so any suggestions are highly appreciated :)