XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Introducing Lyiah]

Very nice

So this was pretty "NICE" the "COLOR" is amazing, the animation was pretty good I think with that bopping of the head seems like she is listening to music maybe ad some ear phones to represent that, very nice work here though this was pretty decent character work and animation.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
that bopping of the head seems like she is listening to music maybe ad some ear phones to represent that

~X~

JaviJavi responds:

yeah that makes sense i probably should've added headphones of some sort on her ! thanks for the nice words i appreciate it !

[AKUMA]

Great use of color

Great use of "COLOR" on this piece all the different color and shines make this "ARTISTIC" I do think some added color in the backrounds or even in a frame or border form, This is different yet interesting, Its stuff like these kinds of art-works that keep me enjoy reviewing these kinds. And I have seen lots of art work on here. But you bring a sense of Freshness and this reviewer is very Supportive but at the same time im Stunned how well you have Captured such a brillinat idea here, So with this one you bring all sorts of different elements and thats just a huge plus especially for me, these are different in there own way and have a style of there own, And truly amazes me to find stuff as good as this.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do think some added color in the backrounds or even in a frame or border form

~X~

Cubesona responds:

well, I actually just redrew the whole thing. Let me know if this is any better!

[Feliz Día de Muertos 2018]

Very nice

This was really "NIFTY" I am really loving the "GLOW" I think that your border could have ad some glow on it but overall this was a nice art piece with lots of nice characters and some even better glow, great artwork here it was some a nice submission and glad I could review it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
your border could have ad some glow on it but overall this was a nice art

~X~

GomiZombie responds:

I think you are trying to hint me at something, but I can't really tell what hmmmmm

[Pie]

Interesting

An interesting piece here, First of all I want to say that your backround art is pretty nifty and made for this piece to be more focused on, the characters are both cute and dark and thats ok too, seems like you could have added a frame and border on this, you do some nice work here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like you could have added a frame and border on this

~X~

goshprosh responds:

Thanks for the feedback - a more structured border has been something I've been considering to change up my presentation a little since my normal m.o. usually winds up being character + abstract/simple background floating in a white void. My friend ATinyOctiipus is really good at framing/presenting things pleasingly around her artwork, and I'm thinking of taking a leaf out of her book on that.

[lazy grim reaper]

Cool

So this was a nice "ART" piece here I am loving the moon and the one "EYED" girl, really nice artwork here some nice detail and just a very nice visual point here, would be cool if the one eye is glowing more and maybe more moonlight shinning down on the stone statues, good stuff here keep it up.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would be cool if the one eye is glowing more and maybe more moonlight shinning down on the stone statues

~X~

zombiemiso responds:

thank you for your impressions and suggestions! it helps me a lot!

[Over the Garden Wall]

Nice

So this was pretty good stuff here it was "CUTE" I like the dark and "SCARY" element here Those eyes of the scary character seem like they could have more of a glow about them an idea ofcourse, overall you have some nice work here nice color and a nice scary element.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Those eyes of the scary character seem like they could have more of a glow about them an idea ofcourse

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theaaronschmit responds:

Yeah, that's a good critique. His eyes don't have enough glow to them, and I guess I was trying to mute out the Beast in the background so it wouldn't contrast with Wirt and Greg in the foreground. But I'll keep that in mind and potentially correct that in the future.

Thanks for the criticism :>

[Quick Paint - Princess Vixen]

A nice princess

So here was a nice "PRINCESS" really love what you have done here with the backround and added a visual there almost like she is comming out of it, seems like you could still ad some sort of borders on the outter edges though, anyways great character design here this was pretty cool here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
seems like you could still ad some sort of borders on the outter edges though

~X~

UnityPress responds:

I assume you mean the background element itself needs a border? It's a good idea and one I'll suggest to Rif to try out the next time we're doing a quick paint :) Thanks for the feedback, its genuinely helpful!

And i'm certain the character's owner will be happy to receive more compliments XD

[Flying Mortars]

Nice design

So there was some nice design going on here with this one, I do think you need more stuff like action of war and such in the backround, just more stuff in the distance, but besides all that you have done some amazing work here and was really impressive.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do think you need more stuff like action of war and such in the backround, just more stuff in the distance

~X~

CapnJ responds:

Thank you for some useful criticism! I haven't thought about the details of action of war. I might draw something more like this in the future!

[SoulFire's Family]

Interesting group of characters

So these are some interesting group of characters if you have a web comic you should post them here because these characters are pretty nifty,some added details like the eyes could have more of a glow and maybe more texture in the skintone, but overall this was pretty good detail of some character designs.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
if you have a web comic you should post them here because these characters are pretty nifty,some added details like the eyes could have more of a glow and maybe more texture in the skintone

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SoulFireDragon responds:

been thinking of doing that actually! owo expect some of my comic to be posted here soon!