XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ramen Humanized]

Very nice

Another good charchter here I like the shades on this one you have some nice detail here too and I like the title and the name of this charracter so that was a nice job here you have some interesting ideas here

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Again no changes needed

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Triple-Stabber responds:

Thxx, great that you liked it. This Humanized thing is a so so happening, I juat post it whenever I think of something cool. Also thx for the idea compliment ♥

[Kiss]

Notbad

And here we are with a kiss this was cute the bodies are well portionate the background was pretty good these are some interesting drawings you have and some even better charchters here anyways keep up the good work

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes at this time

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Triple-Stabber responds:

Yeyy, I have gud bodies. Tbh I see this drawing as old and I have better body drawings now. And yeah I'll continue drawing definitely ♥

[Marker]

Interesting

So this was an interesting piece here this was good and kind of funny with the scratched out nips but the drawing itself was pretty good I thought so anyways keep making nifty and unique pieces such as this one

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Maybe a version showing the nips

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Triple-Stabber responds:

Well can't unmarker the nips since it's actually marker'd. Rip

[Tristen]

Nice charchter

So this was a nice charchter I'm thinking most of your art is based off your comic style but this was a nice charchter not sure about the yellow background but Iver all a nice charchter hope to see more soon anyways good stuff

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
Good stuff here no changes

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Triple-Stabber responds:

Thxxx, yellow was because actually there was purple on the shirt. So thought iy would be a good contrast, and you said Tristen was nice so ♥

["THE RED STRANGER???!!!!"]

Nice work

So this was some "NICE" work you have her the "RED-STRANGER" looks good I would ad some suggestion of more shading and or texture in the overlaying hoody of it maybe make it darker then the inner clothing even some small detail on this piece would be pretty cool, you have a nice idea here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I would ad some suggestion of more shading and or texture in the overlaying hoody of it maybe make it darker then the inner clothing even some small detail on this piece would be pretty cool

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wheatly14 responds:

thanks ill probably do another and keep your advice in mind, thanks again!

[Demon Babe]

Very nice

Seems like you know how to make a good "DEMON-GIRL" I like the element here the black clothing over the red skin tone was nice, the shine on the black clothing was a really nice touch too, the white backround I thaught you could have had a bit more darker tone but not darker then the black outfit, nice work though.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the white backround I thaught you could have had a bit more darker tone but not darker then the black outfit

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PorcelainKitten responds:

Thank for your input I really appreciate that. Will definitely take that into consideration.

[I see you~]

Really deep work here

I love the view shot on this and the dark element, I do wish there was more blood around maybe even more splatter of blood in different places, This was a great and fantastic piece of art and dont see much different styles like this so I wanted to review this piece a its very good work. The details are very nice as they just seem to come together and depict a strange scene from a subtle World as you have created here, Nice yet strange The overall flow seems to come together and tell a unique story.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
I do wish there was more blood around maybe even more splatter of blood in different places

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NegaShep responds:

Aw thank you so much! While this is a personal piece, I did keep in mind that I was sending this to a company that was working on a horror visual novel and their advertisement said no heavy blood and or gore. I kept myself pretty tame! But thank you! Perhaps in my next piece that's similar to this I'll do more of what I really prefer for 'spooky times'.

[Gimme Pineapples]

Nice

So here was something really nice, I particulary like the "SUBTLE" painting and color you have on here, great expressions on there faces too really came out well, as for any changes here dont think this piece really needs any you have done a fantastic job here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
dont think this piece really needs any you have done a fantastic job

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Risenshiney responds:

Awww golly! Thank you so much! Its an old thing done on my Wiiu so I'd be less inclined to make changes anyway ahaha. Hints for next time would still have been lovely though!

Thanks again!

[Inktober 2017 #12 - Spooky Selfie]

Very nice

So this was pretty good here, the black and white was nice the deep stare this one has is vert nice I like that you showed off your pens and such a very nice piece here and another art piece that does not need any changes here, so really nice work on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no changes needed.

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BoMToons responds:

Thanx!

[Dickneck Comic Page 1]

Cool comic

A newgrounds BBS comic that was cool, not sure why I have not seen this before but its pretty amazing work, the color and darkness of the bbs are just right this is a nifty idea and think you should continue on with this piece and make a whole series out of it and the bbs, anyways nice idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a nifty idea and think you should continue on with this piece and make a whole series out of it and the bbs

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Galneda responds:

You're in luck! This thing was continued in my flash animation Dick Neck: Origins.

https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/509631

With an extended story that kicked up in another thread, found here:

https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1330422/1

At this moment, there are no intentions to continue Dick Neck's saga. A few sequel ideas have been written, but none executed. I'd be willing to share what I've written, but given how my time is spent, there's nothing happening with it anytime soon. A perfect opportunity for some other artist to give their own crack at it, because at this point nothing is canonized and it's all open to interpretation by anyone. No one owns Dick Neck. So have at it!

Thanks again for the thorough review!