XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Holy Water]

Brilliant

Now here is a good comic I could really get into you really showed off the great characters also bringing in some nice humor into this as well and the art style was just beautiful so I really got into this and kept me interest up high so nice work on this one and I hope you make more of this because this is some fancy and pretty brilliant stuff so as a sort of improvement idea maybe instead of the white borders have a light redish or a light brown but something different then the plain white. But with all that said this was a good piece of comic and I look forward to even more of the series if there's anymore

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Do something different with the frames

~X~

ZeTrystan responds:

Oh, for the borders, I usually keep it white for the integration on other websites that uses it as their background, to make it looks seemless. :) Since Newgrounds has a black background, I can imagine it's quite visible ahah.

Thanks for the comment!

[Mermaid and Piano]

Nice

These under water styles are always hard to do it seems but I have to say you could ad more stuff in this one like on the sand ocean adding more shells and such and some fish in the backround maybe even groups of fish looking at her would be a huge plus but that's my imput for the day more props more ocean creatures

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More ocean stuff including shells and fish

~X~

ToxicMaiden responds:

Couldn't agree more! I actually went and touched it up awhile back. You can see it here: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/toxicmaiden/mermaid-and-piano-re-worked

I really enjoy that sort of thing.

[Fire Elemental Lady]

Beautiful

A beautiful piece here and I must say the red swirly things above her head could be more brighter they seem like a good focus point and more texture in the red background also but besides all that this was a pretty good piece of art just more texture and you will be good to go anyways untill next time nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter red and texture reds

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ToxicMaiden responds:

Thank you! I really appreciate all the feedback you have been giving me.

[Queen Of The Eyes]

Very artistic

And here was something very artistic the whole blue theme was a great idea and really enjoy what you have done here with the eyes and "GLOBES" I think you need to make those parts really light up even more with a real glow of some sorts or whatnot, it will push more focus on it. And as I come to a close here, you have done well, you have suprised me and have an outstanding piece of art here, you have for sure got me doing a double turn on this one. And Finally something that has Polish rawn all over it so you have some good talents and they are being put to good use. Anyways nice creative style here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more glow on the globes and eyes.

~X~

Urichov responds:

Holy shit it's XwaynecoltX from newgrounds

[2B fan art]

Oh wow

So what you have here for us is one big swoop of eye candy nice detail and a great element of style. so that was a plus for me, the detail really shines. wow I must say this is something for an eye to admire, there is alot of beauty in this like the backround and reflects off the character herself there some nice focus points I do think that the "SWORD" should have much more shine on it though or a sparkle at the end. So you have done something here not a lot of people can do and thats show off the great talents in pieces like this and thats rare.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some shine in the sword and a sparkle here or there.

~X~

Neferity responds:

Thanks so much!!!! actually this draw it's a little old hahaha I gonna redraw it ! I'll take your tips for it , thank you <3

[Dishes...]

Very nice

Wow this is beautiful but to answer the question about comic there are lots of comic series on here even one that's about 700 comics long so it's a pretty good place I would think as for your comic yes this is a nice piece love your use of color and theme and your character design is very nice I think the frame work could be more dazzling then just the plain type and style but maybe adding a color or spiky waves or something but regardless of all that this here is a fantastic comic and I look forward to seeing much more of your work come through but anyways untill next time keep up the brilliant work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Frame work could be different just a tad

~X~

Caustic-Imp responds:

Thanks for the kind words!

I’m not really using a good program for panels, bubbles, and lettering so that definitely an area I need to figure out. Thanks for clearing up the comic thing, I haven’t seen any on here but I am not super active here so that’s more on my end.

[The Churn Wurm]

Wow I love it

Wow this is great stuff here the line work and eye for detail is really good I could see you having a really nice colored version of this or even a colored backround to accent off the drawing itself, but anyways very nice detail here. Alrigh you have something good here like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and I do look forward to more soon. Yould extend some parts in this art, and ofcourse some more polish is always good, but anyways I have enjoyed this piece very much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround base color, or a colored drawing would be nice.

~X~

ConstipatedNugget responds:

I’m glad that you like it! I definitely agree with you, though, this could use some more polish.

[Fushi]

Very beautiful

Now this one here was very beautiful the white hair alone with all the different color tones was so impressive even with the snow falling you had a lot of white falling it still seemed to work well with the skyline very realistic style too the wolf also played another white point but none of this changed anything and the whole piece came out so beautiful designed so for you this was a brilliant and beautiful npiece and fine line work lived up to your name so nice work on this and I don't see any changes needed on this at all. But anyways before I end here by on this review props to you on a wonderful piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above everything worked well together and no changes needed

~X~

Cipcal responds:

I've actually been struggling with my lineart, so I'm glad that my work paid off. Thank you for your review!

[The last one out of Beach City]

Nice work

Well I must say this one here is a very nice enrgy of work and you really tell a story within your creation with everything from characters to the brick wall or even there imagination it all comes alive an I am thinking you should put some shine and sparkle into this like some on the wall with a corner of the bricks sprakling and maybe more light effect shinning down on them maybe even a tinted light on them it would bring more focus on to an already decent design and art piece but I like what you have done here with this and I have come to enjoy your subtle style here it creates a story within the artwork so for that nice job indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle here and there with some more lighting also

~X~

PedroTorres responds:

Thanks for this more than helpful critic. I'm glad you liked the work and I will try some changes on this to see how I can give more life to it

[Evil Morty]

Brilliant

Wow this is absolutely detailed with expression and motion that it's uncanny very nice work here the amount of detail and texture that goes into this is crazy but you pushed the limit on this and brought us a very well detailed character and not only that but you showed us some nice effects to go along with it and bring out a nice style very different from what others show us but this was a brilliant piece and shows all the talent you bring to the table as for suggestion on this I don't have anything for that as you made a very detailed piece of artwork with some awesome talents so no changes on a fantastic piece of art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on such a perfect piece already

~X~

TristanTait responds:

Wow, thanks so much for the kind words :D
I try and add a little bit of my own flavour to all the characters I draw up to make them stand out a bit from other fan art pieces. Really happy to know it's something that you guys like and appreciate :D Thanks