XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[A hope]

The art is nice

The art is good here very good rich in detail nice comic style aswell not too many frames here but I'm thinking so things stand out even more maybe we could get the frames or borders as some like to call them make them more thicker even adding some color to them would be a plus on things. Just something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Possibly but maybe not. The borders frames could be thicker

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DaveRooder responds:

Page 2 : https://mavruda.deviantart.com/art/A-Hope-page-2-640791711

There's page 3, but things at that time went somehow bad to me and never made to finish it.

[Take My Hand]

Beautiful piece

There's so much about this that is beautiful I like all the elements in place and that moon I don't know feel like it could be bigger maybe brighter more luminated but maybe that's just me you have some nice color and everything meshed well together and overall this is a nice art piece and glad I reviewed it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting or larging up the moon

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Xiolee responds:

thank you :D

[Russel]

Nice

Nice work here the skin tones are absolutely beautiful and we'll textured into just the right tone that was a very nice touch the detail of this whole piece was beautiful and I really liked what you did here some nice design great backround and just overall great stuff here so keep up the great artistic stulish stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great creation no changes needed

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flurohead responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback XwaynecoltX! I really appreciate the compliments and will strive for the best in upcoming works :)

[Christmas 2017]

Very sharp looking

Wow I must say you really outdid yourself here with this beautiful piece a very nice piece the reds really stand out and everything has come to light and the shine is very impressive as well some nice points here and you even made it to be funny and amusing as for improving on things I would say maybe more shine but you really covers it all in this absolutely beautiful creation very cute as well nice job all the way around here so other then the shine on some points like lips it doesn't need much more if even that so anyways it was a pleasure to review this it's a positive piece all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine would be nice on lips maybe but probably not needed

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kyllaandotto responds:

Wow!!!
Thank you very much for this review!!!!
It is always nice to read comments like this :D
Thank you so much!!!

[Earth Chan]

Really nice drawing

And here we have a nice drawing and coloerd well and a nice sloagan as well all a nice piece of work that you have here I thaught you could have done a little more with backrounds and such and even more shine on the hair. Those are just a few ideas that might run thru your head but overall this was a pretty decent piece. I like the line work here and the overall design of this it seemed to all work out for the best though and I enjoyed reviewing it so nice job indeed anyways untill next time keep up the great wor

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the hair and something more to do with the backgrounds

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TreC101 responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) I agree with what you said about the hair, but I didn't draw any backgrounds because this piece was just a quick lil thing to get over with. I do get where you're coming from though and really appreciate your suggestions :D

Also, Merry Christmas!

[Holiday Gif 2017]

Cute

Well this was a nice gesture. I love the animated stuff here the art style was pretty good and some fresh colors as well as some nice line work overall this was a nice gesture of a holiday so nice work there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some small animation in the backround as well

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cecameron responds:

Thank ya!

[Young sniper Reicher]

Nice work

A good soldier build here great pose nice gun I think there was some extra needed shine though in a few different places such as the background from back have a burst of light there and more glare and shine on the gun as well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have more shine and some burst of light in some areas

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Thavane responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I will take notes for next time <3

[A Kibbles Christmas]

Very nice

Well first off congrats on a beautiful piece there is a lot coming thru the portal and it's nice to find stuff like this it brings some balance to the art portal. The globe was cool I did think that could have more shine on the glass. But that's just one idea maybe more texture in the furr and well that's probably it as this was a pretty solid piece I had fun with reviewing this one and look forward to more from you. Keep up the quality

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the globe

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QuiteSplendid responds:

thanks a lot for the feedback glad you liked it ^^

[Dancing Stars]

Fantastic

You have some nice skills this was a fantastic piece of art and very different the detail alone is pretty impressive I like this style and I think all this needs is maybe some borders but in the same style as the rest of your art so it matches up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some enticing borders would be a nice touch to this

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Jenny-Jinya responds:

Thank you so much, I'll be trying my best to improve! :)

[Getting Ghostly Twyla]

Beautiful piece

I like this I love how the texture meshes well and the stars in the background are nifty but they should glow a bit more so make the stars glow more gives off more mysterious and mystical feel about them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the strars in the back

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ROGUEKELSEY responds:

Thank you very much for your feedback, I'll note to play with the background lighting more in the future!