XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Moms Day!]

Cute and short

Well this was a cute and short animation you have here, the idea is really "FUNNY" and you have some ideas that could even make this better like you can make it longer for sure and the idea you do have here has so much potential. anyways really nice work here loved it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like the short you have here but the thing about this was that it was just too short and you really could make this whole film alot better with either more short flicks three or four differant short ones, or just add more stuff to this short one, like more content more visuals longer and more indepth, and atleast thats a start in making it better and much more improved.

~X~

YULFO83 responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I created this the day of mothers day so i didn't have much time to make it longer, also not sure where else i can go with it. maybe other animals on mothers day? I hope to make longer content soon. I just need more time to work on stuff. thanks again!

[The New Leeds Account: EP01]

Very good

This was nifty love the characters and the "ART" style is really good, you sure do have a series here so go with it,
I wouldnt mind seeing some more elements like in the backround effects, But you have earned my respect on this one, good job here. but lets really get into this review now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind seeing some more elements like in the backround effects

~X~

RichardMather responds:

Thanks! I'll work on the back ground effects!

[June Bug]

Really cool

So this was really amazing I love this "ANIMATION" you make it dark yet make it funny with little moments like the "BLINKING" skull and the cute music really refreshing videos you have here and love the "VIBRANT" colors that you ad onto these they are very refreshing indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A nice style of color and amusing humor it really does not need anymore changes.

~X~

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Its always nice to hear a review from XWAYNECOLTX! the pum, kin, King...

[Animation Experiment]

Nice visuals here

Wow this was really intense and I really love the shadded and black and white style you have here, there was a few "SCENES" and I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles, But you do have a very unique and different entry here so nice work hope to see more just like this, So breathing some new life into an old style of film seems to always work for the best just like you have done here, and its all working out for the best, so lets keep that aspect up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some more added scenes maybe ad some dialog into the characters or even some subtitles

~X~

PatrickDomingo responds:

Thank you Very much XwaynecoltX ill try to added scenes and dialog next time
Thank you very much for this tips its really helpful :)

[The Music of Erich Zann]

Im an instant fan

Wow I am loving the "BLACK-WHITE" style here I was sad that this was so short though this has a deep vibe about it and looks like it can be a deep series if you make one from it, my advice is to make a series from it, So I will start my Opening Remarks on that thsi film has Earned points by me for the effort and time put in on this one, you Focus on the efforts and it will be some good Entertainment for all to enjoy.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my advice is to make a series from it

~X~

Cthulhuzann responds:

Good news/bad news. Bad news: it's not going to be a series. Good news: It's a much longer short! Stay tuned.

[POWERLESS.fla]

Impressive

Always with some intense "DETAIL" and graphics, you always come up with some great madness vids so nice effort, more blood and much more flashy effects like cracked screens and such, You seem to know what you are doing here with a well tuned in system and achieve the best of the flash efforts, I like what you have here sofar and I hope the rest is just as interesting and entertaining.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more blood and much more flashy effects like cracked screens and such

~X~

Krinkels responds:

Thanks for the review, dude.

[Hey You Guys]

Very different

So this was unique and "DIFFERENT" I really like the "COLOR" theme you went with here on this one, that was nifty and some of the effects were just as good, my tip of the day is that this one could be longer more scenes more character and so on, I like this because it was something different, it kind of reminds me of a new spray or fragrance that just came out its new and fresh. so keep that up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my tip of the day is that this one could be longer more scenes more character and so on

~X~

RichardMather responds:

Thanks!

[School Scare]

Interesring

So this was notbad it was an interesting little short you have here I wished this had been longer and maybe more executed on the humor but for the most part you did pretty good with this animation and hope to see more like this from you it was entertaining for the most anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be longer

~X~

artistunknown responds:

Yeah, it's been a good while since I've done anything long enough to have substance (minus my ground hog day cartoon). I've got something with actual substance coming up REAL soon.

Also it's good to know that the only thing that needs improving on something FMTS-related is the length, makes me even more tempted to go back to the full episodes.

Thanks!

[Sublo & Tangy Mustard #9 - Bad Guys]

Cool characters

So you have some nice characters here, Ok so I think of this as a big movie event and the people would cheer you on even more, So keep doing what you have been doing its a good start and I can see alot more comming from this, So Kudos on your Imaginative and View of a unique style here. make more of this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more of this

~X~

Aaron-Long responds:

Thanks! I'm working on more episodes, and the story is gradually going to become more serialized, or at least there will be more continuity with larger story threads occuring across multiple episodes. Hopefully it will all feel contiguous when binge-watched.