Very good
This was nifty love the characters and the "ART" style is really good, you sure do have a series here so go with it,
I wouldnt mind seeing some more elements like in the backround effects, But you have earned my respect on this one, good job here. but lets really get into this review now.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind seeing some more elements like in the backround effects
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