XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hiro the Dense]

I like it

So this was cool, I really like this the "STORY" alone is pretty interesting my suggestion for small improvments would be first the Candle flame could have more of a realistic movement and also adding some subtitles, but other then that this was a great story and hope you make more like this.

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my suggestion for small improvments would be first the Candle flame could have more of a realistic movement and also adding some subtitles

~X~

ZedrinBot responds:

I don't want to bake subtitles into the video itself, that's something I do on Youtube using their captions service, as it allows me to easily produce / outsource translations for other languages.

[Delirium]

Oh wow

Dang I have to say this is really artistic and entertaining of an animation and will be one of my faves after this review you have a new instant fan with this all the different elements are so artistic and different, I think you should have had some different music to really flow with it, but besides that this was some amazing work.

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I think you should have had some different music to really flow with it

~X~

ILLLOGIC responds:

Thanks! Animation is definitely not a strong suit of mine but IT SOOO FUN. Glad to hear the parts you like and don't like. It helps me get a perspective so I can improve.

[Paul wears Prada]

Cute little animation here

The art quality was notbad and the bears are cute and make for a delightful serries here you should for sure make more of these with more bars and such, but anyways a good little toon you have here I was really enjoying this, it has some good humor, so keep that up.

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Make more of these silly bear toons.

~X~

theBEARtrap responds:

Thank you for your kind review. We are definitely in the works with more bears! Bear with us and we will do our best to push em out! Cheerios!

[La Voum - Animated Music Video [Trailer]]

Wow Nice

So I have to say this was really "SHORT" that was the only "DOWNSIDE" to this the visual points and music together made this a fantastic movie or video in this case, so my opinion of advice is to make this longer, So while I do sit here and write something up here, I do want to say that you have already impressed me with the style and direction you have taken with this project.

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so my opinion of advice is to make this longer

~X~

nuxttux responds:

Hi there follow individual,

Thank you for the feedback, it is appreciated. I come with good news... What you saw is a trailer for the longer video that I am uploading as I write you this message.

Enjoy!

[3AM]

Very intense

This was way too "SHORT" but I have to say it was really "INTENSE" the rendering and pixel together made for some nice elements and "VIEW-POINTS" like the shadows on the ground and wall, but again wish there was more depth to this besides just the great view points some dialog and story would have been a nice improvment but regardless it was still a very nice visual point of view.

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wish there was more depth to this besides just the great view points some dialog and story would have been a nice improvment

~X~

ninjamuffin99 responds:

Yeah I pretty much made this more or less last minute with no planning (done in about a week), but this has inspired me to do something way cooler/longer/more depth.

[RCP Madness | S01E03 | Aggravation]

Cool madness

This was cool, I like the madness theme here and there was some decent action in this one, you have some good animating skills, I like all the "BLOOD" and some nice style at that, very nice work here and a good animation hope you make more like this soon.

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Would love more story depth in these.

~X~

RoetCarPower responds:

Thanks, I hope to fill all the plot holes in the next one.

[Madness WhiteHank 2: With a Vengeance]

Nice

Another cool "MADNESS-DAY" film and here we had tons of action great jumps and flips and even "BLOOD-SHED" Wouldnt mind some type of dialog to make these better but as always these madness types dont really need much of that, This was something that was interesting and you really put the effort and make this come fourth into its reality of talent and such, thats what I really liked about this.

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Wouldnt mind some type of dialog to make these better but as always these madness types dont really need much of that

~X~

kRyy responds:

I added more blood like you asked to

[The Ballsack Ninja]

Funny

Well I have to say that this one was really funny I especially like the "VIBRANT" color use here, and like the action scenes and ofcourse the balls are pretty funny too, you have some nice animation here very good "FLOW" of comedy and entertaining value, so nice job indeed.

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Maybe some added flashy effects on action scenes like more spalshes and such, but honestly you may not even need that this was a nice piece of film here.

~X~

ChutneyGlaze responds:

Thanks again for the cool review X! I promise to put the flashy lights and splashes just for you!

[The Art of Quitting]

Interesting

This is actually pretty good, It was a tad bit short though, and I do think you can ad some "COLOR" into this, but the meaning behind the film is what really its all about so nice work here good little inspiring film you have here, you should make more like this.

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could be longer and and some added color would be another nice idea.

~X~

AnimatedStruggle responds:

Sorry for the late response! I haven't logged in in forever.

I hear you. Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm actually working on a 360 degree run cycle for a new channel intro video. I'll be sure to splash some color on it.