Wow very intense
Wow now this was some really "INTENSE" stuff and for your "FIRST" film or animation on the grounds I would have to say that this was some very good stuff, and think you could reallu make this into a series and hope you do, Alright so this was pretty good and I really like how you presented this There was some nifty scnes and what not, but mostly you have a nifty and unique submission here, so I cant wait to see how the rest comes out, and hope you keep making stuff like this. You have an Extraordinary flash entry, And I am Officially a new fan of this style and your work.
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I would have to say that this was some very good stuff, and think you could reallu make this into a series and hope you do
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