XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NEUROSI5]

Wow very intense

Wow now this was some really "INTENSE" stuff and for your "FIRST" film or animation on the grounds I would have to say that this was some very good stuff, and think you could reallu make this into a series and hope you do, Alright so this was pretty good and I really like how you presented this There was some nifty scnes and what not, but mostly you have a nifty and unique submission here, so I cant wait to see how the rest comes out, and hope you keep making stuff like this. You have an Extraordinary flash entry, And I am Officially a new fan of this style and your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would have to say that this was some very good stuff, and think you could reallu make this into a series and hope you do

~X~

Coutto responds:

Thanks man, i still have a lot to learn, but i dont know if i can do a series about it, took me months doing this animation. I have projects to make a new animation using everything i learned with this same idea about dark future and cyberpunk, i dont know if i can call it a continuation, but it's going to be another story.

[Hazbin Hotel Parody: Reception]

Notbad at all

A decent opening scene you have here, a good start to a decent submission, I do think you could make this a tad bit longer and maybe ad some subtitles, allthough it could have some improved elements but for waht it is you have impressed this viewer, so keep up the decent work, and ill be an instant fan, and you can really make this into some Cutting Edge stuff, You gave it an Extraordinary feel and touch, so nice effort all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you could make this a tad bit longer and maybe ad some subtitles

~X~

zachdewd responds:

If it was any longer than the joke would have been ruined.

also that would just be too much animation for me to do.

[CLOSE ENCOUNTER that kind of]

Cool Claymation

So these "CLAY-MATION-TYPES" are really nifty they bring a new style of animation and thats what you have here but I have to say that this was a good entry with some nice "CLAY-ELEMENTS" about it and I was geneunly pleased with all the clay action in this fim so nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would throw in some flashy effects more then you have now and really keep it exciting but what you have now is pretty good.

~X~

dexheartwood responds:

thank you very much for your comment and advice.
It's nice to read constructive comments from people who can appreciate the short despite all the technical limitations and not. thanks

[Reduce]

This was notbad

I do have to say that the "BACKROUNDS" are pretty good and really intense the characters here are pretty amazing you really put some energy into this one, Now ofcourse I do wish there was more dialog on this one and more story depth to it, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Now ofcourse I do wish there was more dialog on this one and more story depth to it

~X~

Mejson responds:

Thank you for your sincerity,
will there be more dialogues in Reduce 2?
Maybe so, but they will be of better quality.
A story will develop over time.

Regards,
Mejson

[Dusk's letter]

Well notbad

So this was notbad I am guessing this was more of a lip test or something like that from what I saw it was not too bad was kind of interesting and it's always hard to get that part just right but I do like what you have done here and the animation that was there was not too bad so anyways nice job here some good testing hope to see more animation from you in the near future and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added animation but not much

~X~

cuteveemon responds:

Thanks for your kind words to this crappy piece I did a while ago. But I believe yeah, it was for practice back in the day. As of now, I work with a new program and lip sync is easy as pie. Hopefully you might see them. ^^

[Huntress Episode: 1 - Pilot]

Love it

So here was something really good, the character "CREATIONS" are very impressive some of the best I have seen in a good while, the "STORY" is pretty good and I really want to see more on how you evolve this story, my advice is that you ad some subtitles it would be a plus for this kind of series if you take it that far.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my advice is that you ad some subtitles it would be a plus for this kind of series

~X~

timeisbutawindow responds:

Thank you I will keep that in mind for the next episode.

[EDDSQUEST]

Haha Nice

So this was actually pretty "GOOD" I like all the different element scenes I think you can improve on the movment animation when he is running like have a different soda on different moments and also some added animation in the backround scenes, but overall this was actually an amusing film here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you can improve on the movment animation when he is running like have a different soda on different moments and also some added animation in the backround scenes

~X~

RomWatt responds:

This is based on BRODYQUEST, which already had fairly basic animations, I just wanted to replicate the very style of BRODYQUEST, and if I had to add more animations, that would have been a little too much additional work for me, and a majority of the backgrounds weren't even made by me. Also, I'm still relatively inexperienced with 2D/cartoon animation.

[Broken Hand: No Evil 032]

Very nice film

This here is a good Attempt and This was a good way to start this off, this type of flash movie is always my favorite and you have really absorbed the effects in this one. The Dedication is here, I really like this the "VOICES" are great I think adding some subtitles would be a plus on this film, the "ART" is pretty amazing

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think adding some subtitles would be a plus on this film

~X~

Warlord-of-Noodles responds:

Subtitles: I feel ya dude. I do like to be able to turn subs on and off so that's why if you want the subbed version you gotta watch it on youtube when it comes out there as it has programmable CC.

[Douglas Confronts Heather]

Nice animation here

I will start this off by saying this was pretty good of an "ANIMATION" it flowed from each scene to the next, Some added flashy effects in the action mode moment would be nice, Dedication is always key, Alright sofar there is some good direction with this one, I am always trying to give some type of positive feedback somehow, even if you dont use it, it is still there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added flashy effects in the action mode moment would be nice

~X~

Axelstation responds:

thanks for the feedback

[Michael and James - This House is Mine]

Really nice

So this was really good the characters are amazing and funny you really have "SOMETHING" here and I was glad to review this, I would suggest and encourage you to make a grand series out of this and let the characters evolve and go on some adventures, This is like a Golden ticket and a Grand entrance into this movie, So here this one jumps out at you with some style and unique style, and sometimes we find something different in the portal and thats what I found here today. This film Suited me just fine now onto more of it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest and encourage you to make a grand series out of this and let the characters evolve and go on some adventures

~X~

MatsuJackie responds:

I actually have a whole season planned and another episode is already written and being voiced.