XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spare me]

Short film

Very short well that was a nice short and when I say short it really was a short, I think you can stretch this one out and make longer just a bit, some more scenes would be cool, just an idea though, so its something to think about or ad other short ones with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
One thing I noticed was that this was just way too short, and you have a few options here, add more to your film, more scenes more info, more content, and or add this along with other short films all in one film so that there is abit more depth to the whole film.

~X~

hreyas responds:

its not a short film,I animated it on a dialogue for a group called 11secclub. But anyways thanks for the suggestion, i appreciate it

[Hank Hill's Bizarre Adventure]

This was cute

A random adventure for hank hill, I like it. So here was something I tend to like when comming across these kinds of flash works. you have additional content in this one that have made this flash come alive. and I Absolutely adore this Surprisingly interesting submission. You should make more like this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make more strange adventures of hank hill like this one maybe a series of sorts.

~X~

Stanpai responds:

Thank you for your review! I actually made this as a sort of "pilot" to gauge interest in me making a series like you requested, so yes, if all goes as planned, that's the end goal.

[Nothing/Void]

This was cool

I love the randomness of this, it really braught out some nice effects and such, so nifty little film you have here, But you have shown the effort here and it cameout with some quality and I hope you make more stuff like this, some things can be better as I will get to shortly though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more

~X~

FlowDownStream responds:

Thank you so much, it means a lot to hear from you, and we're glad you enjoyed it! We've got a whole lot more on the way, so stay tuned! Thanks for the stars.

-GoodL

[comfortable 2- escape to Africa]

Different

Well I have to say that this was sort of different kind of random, no real direction with this one, I would love to see more flashy effects on this though, it was kind of entertaining though, and as improvement I guess you could put more flashy effects.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned more flashy effects.

~X~

CapaciousSpace responds:

flash it up fam

[Pico Parody X (2010)]

Wow

Ok well first off that was kind of funny, and the "ANIMATION" alone was very impressive so nice work indeed, but really short maybe you can extend this to be longer with more plot and such, I am generally pleased with all this there were a few points thatcould be better, but again those tings can be cleaned up and whatnot,but for starters this was a good entry and hope it all pansout for the best.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
really short maybe you can extend this to be longer with more plot and such

~X~

ToonCastleTV responds:

Hey, thanks for taking the time to review my movie. I am well aware of the flaws and shortness of this movie, but wanted to submit it for fun just because :) I am ready to move on to bigger and better things hopefully in the future ;)

[Madness WhiteHank Collab]

Nice

Well this was pretty good of a film I like the blood, And do think you actually do need more blood like on the ground and dripping and flying all around that would be a nice effect, But now I just wanted to comment on how I preceived this to start off, and sofar I am pretty intriged by it, so glad to see something good here. Perhaps some little stuff here and there can be tweaked, And there is room for some various ideas of improving on this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
do think you actually do need more blood like on the ground and dripping and flying all around that would be a nice effect

~X~

Kenamy responds:

Actually i'm pretty sure i added it on my part, guess it's just gone lol. but i usually adds some, sorry about that.

[Dads A Cuck]

Notbad

So this was notbad the music was cool and seems to fit well, I did think this was a tad short so one idea would be to be a tad bit longer but your character work is pretty amazing and stylish and the toon itself was plesent just wish it was longer, anyways nice work here, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this one longer.

~X~

meatcanyon responds:

I really appreciate your critical feedback. I will definetly look into making longer pieces in the future! Thanks for watching l!

[hey bro]

lol

Well what Can I say about this it was very amusing and very entertaining, really really short though this was funny and gave me a good laugh and such you really made for some good humor but again this was just a very short animation and I could see you doing more with it maybe new scenes and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well for sure needs more animation, more scenes more flow of this so it flows like an animation but you still have a nice idea here, So while you do have an entertaining short here it seems too short, maybe havving some other shorts along with it, or make the existing one longer with much more depth. give it a try it cant hurt and im pretty sure your fans will enjoy it alot more. just something to think about.

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alecgrosso responds:

Thanks for the advice :) I agree it is too short. There hasn't been much of a response to this video until I uploaded it to NG. So fleshing out / making a sequel for these guys may happen after all

[Hey, are you up?]

Amazing

So here was an amazing film you have very fun to watch and review and like that you won some awards on this that's always nice and shows how good your work is but anyways it was a tad short but everything else was on point so good animation here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Extend this to be longer

~X~

Fantishow responds:

I want to expand on this film for sure. Thank you!