XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rawest Forest Reanimated Collab]

Haha very nice

So this mario world themed film was nice it was like a music video with all the clips and different scenes and that song was a good fit too onlything I would add on might be some subtitles to all the happenings going on, There are some things that could be worked on in order for it to be even better dont get me wrong its pretty good as is, Alright so this was pretty good and I really like how you presented this There was some nifty scenes and what not, But mostly you have a nifty and unique submission here so I cant wait to see how the rest comes out and hope you keep making stuff like this, You have an extraordinary film entry, And I am officially a new fan of this style and your work.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
onlything I would add on might be some subtitles to all the happenings going on

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snailpirate responds:

yes finally, we get our very own wayne review

[Serpent City]

Zombies

So this was pretty cool, the zombies theme is always a good one, the sound quality seemed a little low but otherwise it was fine, So I would say that the animation was notbad and this was a decent submission. I really look forward to seeing more stuff like this untill then keep working on great stuff, So a lot like some wine tasting event thats what this reminds me of, you have brought all the right elements in this movie type and with lots of different flavor and taste and thats what stood out on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the sound quality seemed a little low but otherwise it was fine

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DampOwl responds:

I really appreciate the constructive feedback. Thanks for watching, and taking the time to review!

[Edelgard's Bondage Skit]

Notbad

So notbad its a good steamy scene kind of short would be nice if it had more scenes maybe even some story to go along with it, but for what it was very steamy nice visuals and good artwork so really nice job all the way around on this one keep at it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
As mentioned.

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Aster-Effect responds:

thank you very much, this work was actually from november ago actually, still experimenting on something ^^;

but yeah i got your point and idea :)

and thank you very much by the way :3

[Animal Crossing: Eternal]

Very nice stuff

I love the animation on this one would really love some dialog to go with this, Nice submission allthough it did lack some stuff, it could still be better, So I have mentioned some ideas and even basic stuff that other Movie like this one have so below in the improvments section may help good luck either way, So this was new and fresh I like this because it was kind of different sort of like when you get a new spray or fragrance its fresh different and you want to check it all out.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
would really love some dialog to go with this

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PixelFlickr responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I only gave myself a week to do this whole thing as a challenge, so finding voice actors and arranging things in that time would've been difficult hah, but I definitely plan on having dialogue in the future!

[How To Make A Jill Sandwich]

I liked it

So this was actually notbad the art style was decent the audio could have more qaulity to it, the movie itself could be longer with more scenes and such, the characters were funny and it was a decent little animation I could see you adding more to this maybe more stories and such.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
the audio could be better

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JavaGhoul responds:

Thank you for watching and the feedback I appreciate it! I'm working on improving my animations as much as possible =) stay tuned for more ;D

[Oney Plays Animated: Batman + "Hansel"]

Like it

Very impressed with this one theres alot going on with the batman and joker characters maybe ad some subtitles for this, It felt very fitting with how there was alot of Focus and stuff going on. And with this film it was actually pretty good, I liked the effort you put forward on this but there are still a few more things here and there that could make it even better, Ok so I tend to watch some sports and something came to mind about this film, Its sort of like when they do draft picks, doesnt matter the sport but This film would probably be a first round pick I would think because of the entertainment value you gave it.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe ad some subtitles for this

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BreBitz responds:

Thanks!
It's pretty fast-paced because of the audio but I get what ya mean. There's definitely heaps of areas to approve on so I'll keep that in mind for next time!

[ThorClock Takes Over: Part 12]

Very fun

And once again another fun clock movie you bring all the elemnts and make it entertaining you have a good fun story here and bring lots of clocks to showcase I am enjoying the series sofar, and look forward to even more, so keep making more they are great.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
no major changes

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Ushnor responds:

thanks for the support!

[ThorClock Takes Over: Part 11]

I like it

And so the clock film continues love the clocks here and onlything I might ad would be some subtitles, So it does have some potential and so once again this was a decent filmI really liked what you presented, Now ofcourse there was some improvments that could make it much better I suggested some ideas below, but for what it is you presented a good film with an entertaining and replay value, Here was something entertaining, you have some nice elements about it and it was an enjoyble little animation video you have presented here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
onlything I might ad would be some subtitles

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Ushnor responds:

I understand some of the voices are hard to understand, but if I added subtitles I think it would be somewhat distracting. It would also be hard to do subtitles that wouldn't "give away" some gags by showing the punch line early

[syphilis sisyphus sassafras succotash]

Entertaining

So another clock movie seems like they are live once again you have really pushed the limit I love seeing all the deifferent clocks a fun element of a movie here, would love to see more with this style but anyways a fun flash animation of some clocks.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
make more even more depth within a story

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Pop-Tart responds:

I'm doing one movie a day which all form one story. Some days tho, the spam gods win over quality..

[ThorClock Takes Over: Part 7]

Entertaining

So this was an entertaining flick, kind of like a music video somewhat the animation on this was pretty cool, the artwork was decent too I had fun with this one and it was overall a fun little animation hope you make more such as this one, so nice work sofar.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
No changes just make more

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Ushnor responds:

I shall make more, and the world wil lhave XwaynecoltX to thank for it!