XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[TD-Shut The World Out]

Nice style

And so this was a nice style I like some of the jokes and the drawings are not half bad you do have some good flow of animation here I think you could make the story turn into a few twists with more depth but it was still a good story here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good story maybe as more depth with a few twists and turns

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Raziberry responds:

A few twists and turns? Dude, this is my real life, sorry my life is boring!

[Game Grumps Animated - WHO FARTED?]

Nice

I have not seen alot of the game grumps stuff but have to say this one caught my eye with some nice style I like the idea of this one too very nice animation the random ideas in this was cool too you really did push the effort and made something great so for that alone props to you on all the hard work hope to see more from you in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not too sure more of the random ideas turned into more

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TheWitchBoi responds:

Thanks for the review! This cartoon was actually made back in 2013, so a LOT has improved since then. Hope you consider following me and more of my work!

[Super Action Cops]

Entertaining

Well this one was pretty entertaining and you do bring out the comedy with all the elements and the characters are notbad and a good flow of animation is good here always nice work I would love to see more random comedy and humor though you did an outstanding job so keep that up anyways untill next time nice flick

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More random comedy and humor

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Derp-dee-derp responds:

Glad you liked it, new toon up now, check it out! Jailbird 2 - Deadly

[Pogo Lock's]

Random

So here was a random one, and it is ok because it does have a nice sound from the music and the animations was notbad eiether, it was kind of short though and you could have made this one a tad bit longer a few more characters here or there and a few more different scenes, but its a decent random animation. Before I get started on this review I would like to take this time and say that this was a decent flash entry and you have done alot to bring the fun and entertaining value to the table, so props to you for that, as for the rest it was all a good flash and I really enjoyed what you have presented here, glad to see you putting the effort fourth here. Now even though this is the end here, There are just a few fix ups it needs but so far you have a good piece of flash here, Both fun and entertaining and you added another twist along the way. and you added Attention to Detail.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could have made this one a tad bit longer a few more characters here or there and a few more different scenes.

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AubergineLock responds:

I made this about 15 years ago but thanks i'll try and improve on it!

[Reuel Shorts - Get up!]

So this was interesting

So this was an interesting film but I liked it and the animation is not bad but could be more smoothed out but you have a good idea here and the ending was pretty good and such an interesting one as well so nice job and you also won an award as well that was a plus so congrats on the award your film is very good very nice flick keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More smoothed out animations

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ReuelAnimations responds:

Thanks for the review! on that time i had very poor knowledge about the movement, but now i improve in that aspect, also animating with mouse make things very hard to work with, specialy with new frame by frame scenes, but it's just a minor problem.

Again, thank you!

[Recommended]

Notbad

So notbad at all I found this film to be kind of entertaining gives some good insight on how things are with YouTube now I wouldn't mind some added humor in there and even much more animation it's not bad it just would be nice to have more. But I liked it and liked what you presented with it as it was so nice work here and look forward to even more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more humor maybe even more animation

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artistunknown responds:

Yeah, there could definitely be some more animation in this, I was especially rushing with this one, but not in a good way. Going to be putting more effort in the future.

Thanks ;3

[Unloved]

Decent

So the animation in this little movie is pretty decent but its just so very shor so if anything is suggested here today I am gonna go with making this more then a clip ad some longer motiones new scenes and just more stuff that the doll or character does maybe he walks thru town or something.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The doll needs to go more places not just the one scene, make this movie longer, more depth needed.

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Enoll responds:

Thanks for the review my good man.
This animation served its' purpose to the depressed 15yo me working through emotions

[It's Totally 3D, Guys!]

Amusing

Well this was pretty amusing I like what you have done here and the characters are pretty funny and amusing you seem to have pulled together a nice film here and lots of randomness I do think you can ad even more of that as this was pretty funny

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More randomness for more funny

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STOOVRS responds:

thanks but uhh if i put in too much randum xd all i would get would be 1 star ratings (for a very good reason, too)

[Everybody Loves Minions!]

Simple

Nice work here I like the idea of this and like the work you have here the animation was not the best and you could improve on some graphics detail but some good stuff here and was kind of funny it was entertaining infact so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some improved graphics and animation

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artistunknown responds:

Improve how? That's pretty vague, the animation's about as smooth as the rest of my stuff, do you mean the drawings could be more detailed? I don't really see what's worse compared to some of my other animations, I thought some of the drawings were even better than some of my other cartoons.

Of course it's not the best, it'll never be the best, especially when the intent is to make something as fast as possible :p