XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kingdom Hearts: Keyholder]

((( INTERACTIVE CHARACTER SORTA )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm notbad, i really liked the "CHARACTER" detail, and the "VOICES" was even good, also nice way of doing it with someone like talkin to hm and such, even some interactive for the user was nice, the flash seems to go on abit too long thogh but was neat how you animated it, nice work...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmmm not sure it was ok...

~~OVERALL~~
Some interactive, and neat character actions...

~X~

gumOnShoe responds:

... glad you liked it a bit and found it interesting, but this thing definatly has room for improvement.

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[R&FMV - Floor!]

((( FUNNY VIDEO )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very neat, kinda like a music video but it presented some very good art and even better animation, and as for the "MUSIC" it was very fast and hip really made for a neat flash, nice job...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some subtitles thoughout the flash as the song is really fast...

~~OVERALL~~
Fast video good music, and even better art...

~X~

stoners-lunchbox responds:

I'm flattered. I might have to make a full version of this music video. I can only imagine the kind of success it'll get.

Thanks for watching!

[merry lockmas]

((( COULD BE BETTER )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was ok but seemed to lack something, maybe better graphics, but more characters and scenes aswell, and also i couldnt understand what was being said so maybe add some subtitles it would help alot of people to understand whats being said...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more content, more scenes, more characters, Add more scenes besides just the one or even two the flash had, kinda show the world you have created in the flash it will give the flash more depth, and keep it interesting, The one thing i find an issue with clock/lock flash's is the "VOICES" always hard to hear or understand whats being said, so i would suggest some subtitles for an overall better understanding of whats going on...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but could be abit better, and subtitles would help...

~X~

SafeClock responds:

Lol, bear in mind this is my first flash, and i made it over a year ago. :3

[Fred and Frank: Portal]

((( ENTERTAINING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaing but, in my opinion i think the "MUSIC" was way wrong for this, it didnt flow like say abit slowr music might work, and the characters do need some work, aswell as more content with more scenes...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More content, more svenes, a change in music and some character work...

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining but needs more to it...

~X~

aiken-at-ng responds:

i agree about the music but this was only a polot cartoon. i migth release fred and frank : the portal (V2) one day

[The Perfect Cast]

((( VERY FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was very funny, i had a good time with it, the "CHARACTERS" sorta reminded me of the "GHOSTS" from pacman anyways great animation clever and entertaining, you should make more like in a series or something...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just make more epeisodes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and entertaining a very clever flash...

~X~

Lino responds:

Yeah, I'm gonna make more episodes. And yeah they DO look like the ghosts, lol. THANKS!!!

[GG - 11/25: Starberry]

((( LOL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well i dont know about the whole gg days but this did make me laugh, allthough the animations and art were slightly sloppy but it has room to be improved, also lower the filesize thatw as just abit much...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lowering the filesize would be a start, more effort and detail on characters to backrounds...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny random, and silly, but thats what makes newgrounds go around right hehe...

~X~

Starberry responds:

4:00 AM Turning over in bed In the darkness The twinkling of stars
I push my way, swimming through tepid sheets
Pallid A flash A tear-bug 1 Hide-and-seek
The entrance to dreams It can't be found
Is it OK yet? Not yet!



Always whenever I'm shaking, I'm wanting to live
And nothing more than that
The azure flame It burns on Until it becomes a star



All alone The new moon
The flower guardian is (playing) Hide-and-seek
Rain is falling on the continuation of the dream
Is it OK yet? Not yet!



This vast sky, In your eyes, What colours do you see?
A bright despair Keeps running through my chest

In the midst of the light? In the midst of the darkness?



From the beginning, there?s been nothing Yes, nothing
Because of that, the entwined wind slices through my mind
In the act of seizing it,
This second will immediately leave
Always whenever I'm shaking, I'm wanting to live
And nothing more than that
The azure flame It burns on
Until it becomes a star








oh and why are you reviewing this god awful old thing

[Fast n' Quik Thxgvng mvie]

((( HAHA FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, i love the characters well minus the sticks, anyways you presented a decent flash and i really liked the use of color, and the "VOICES" were really good nice animation, hope to see more soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More randomness would be cool...

~~OVERALL~~
Lots of stuff happens on this but you all will love it...

~X~

funymony responds:

Hahaha, thanks. The stickfigures are a phase. But now, I am killing them off. >=O .... now they have square torso's and are growing FINGERS! *high five* Thanks for the review. Haha, there are some complaints that sometimes there TOO MUCH randomness.

[Unearthly]

((( NOTBAD AT ALL )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hey there was some nice artwork in this clock flash, i was actually suprised, but anyways it was also abit on the strange side but thats what made it neat, and the whole "B&W" style was nice, anyways nice animation, you should make more like this...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Abit of color here and there would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
A "B&W" strange and odd flash but entertaining indeed...

~X~

Silvercherryclock responds:

Thanks for the advice

[Naruto vs. Luffy Trailer]

((( HMM NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
I understand its a trailer but still needs more such as more animation since this one had very little of it, also cutdown the text as itw as abit much more visuals would improve on it and more content...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much more content, Well to be a good trailer it needs to have more detail and more info on the full version, while its a trailer it should be short but still give enough scenes, story plot, and characters info and give the viewers something to want to look forward to the full version.

~~OVERALL~~
Its a start but lacks more info and animation of whats going on...

~X~

Xelly-Welly responds:

I'll keep that in mind ;)