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[Naruto vs. Luffy Trailer]

((( HMM NEEDS MORE )))

~~REVIEW~~
I understand its a trailer but still needs more such as more animation since this one had very little of it, also cutdown the text as itw as abit much more visuals would improve on it and more content...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Much more content, Well to be a good trailer it needs to have more detail and more info on the full version, while its a trailer it should be short but still give enough scenes, story plot, and characters info and give the viewers something to want to look forward to the full version.

~~OVERALL~~
Its a start but lacks more info and animation of whats going on...

~X~

Xelly-Welly responds:

I'll keep that in mind ;)

[Death Within 1]

((( NICE ANIMATION )))

~~REVIEW~~
Interesting idea for characters, but i thik you started it out perfecrly and nice work on the "MUSIC" the also nice touch on the whole "SLOW" motion really giving it a good movie feel, nice work indeed, keep at it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more detail on the characters...

~~OVERALL~~
A good start, unique characters, good animation and nice effects...

~X~

FBI-06 responds:

And yet, another review!!!OMG!Thanx a lot man, u now how long I've been waiting 4 another review, thanx!!!!
Hope you enjoyed.=) Ilya.

[Good Vs. Evil]

((( CUTE CHARACTERS NEAT MUSIC )))

~~REVIEW~~
Odd characters, and you had a nice "INTRO" to the movie, allthough you could add some bodies hehe, as for the animating it seemed ok, i thought it was funny and had good humor to it, nice "MUSIC" some voice-overs might have been a better choice though, or have the music change, anyways good flick, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well it seemed like a "TRAILER" so make it more like a movie or have some plot to it, even if its a trailer it still needs more then that...

~~OVERALL~~
Odd looking characters with stick bodies, kinda like a short trailer...

~X~

Rudy responds:

I understand. This is very old work of mine, I got more instore for the future.

I'm probably not gonna finish this series anyway.

Thanks for your review.

[FWA - Squirrel]

((( FUNNY SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
Hshs ok well while that was short i was very funny, and some very smooth animation, the characters were very small, but i guess they have to be, i would think about making the flash abit longer, maybe even more scenes and such, anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make it longer and more scenes, or I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
A short short, but very funny and entertaining, could use more scenes though...

~X~

TheDevilMyself responds:

Thank you for your critique! It was right on. I wish i could go back and fix things, but due to a hard drive crash the original project file was lost. I've started toying around with more animating and am definitely keeping in mind the length of the projects i am working on. As i mentioned, the squirrel project was my first foray into the world of flash animation and lo, it will not be the last.

I'll be back.

Multiple shorts probably would have been the end fate of this project were it to have continued - hell you never know it may still - there was a whole storyline i was working out in my head involving some sort of rivalry between birds and squirrels - seems almost childish now, but it would be fun!

Again, thanks for the in depth critique of my poor little short! Keep up the good work!

D

[Fat, Dumb n' Happy]

((( FUNNY )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, the "VOICES" were abit hard to understand at times but it was ok, the characters looks well amde and were funny, nice scenes but you should have presented some more scenes, i enjoyed the flash...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some subtitles...

~~OVERALL~~
A decent flash wellmade characters, funny humor and very entertaining...

~X~

RSQViper responds:

Well, it was my first movie so based on that I think it's really good.

Thanks for the input, but as far as subtitles go, I may or may not ever use them. It would really depend on the movie itself, I guess.

You should check out my other stuff if you enjoyed this. My animation and graphics have improved greatly.

[Ratbag & Furball #04]

((( HAHA )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, the "VOICES" were actually really good, and the "IDEA" of a studio and script on pacman was excilent haha, anyways nice job, hope to see more like this sometime...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more episodes such as this...

~~OVERALL~~
Great episode awsome voices and neat idea...

~X~

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Why, thank you!

[Three's Company Teaser]

((( FUNNY AND SHORT )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny and neat, the characters were abit odd but that was good, you could give them some more shadng in there body and faces, i thought the toon was abit short, and also at times it was hard to hear or understand whatw as being said, maybe some subtitles could help...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shading and detail in the characters, more scenes, and more story stuff, All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble... Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny characters, and a short animation but sorta funny, nice job...

~X~

ClusterLaw responds:

Yea, as I've nearly completed the first episode I've improoved my animation skills and before I start working on the second episode I will first go over the character details and improove them all. Thanks for your feedback! Be sure to watch episode 1! It's alot better.

[Robust & Dog II]

((( I LIKE THIS )))

~~REVIEW~~
I like this, eventhough it was dark all the way through it was neat, maybe to improve add a backing to the "TEXT" sorta like a text bubble to read off better, but as for the flash itself it was neat, i hope you cintibue it into more episodes and such, anyways good animation...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some text bubbles like a backing for the text you already have...

~~OVERALL~~
Neat dark flash has style to it...

~X~

Extar responds:

Glad you enjoyed this one more as I did try to step things up quality-wise on this one.
A backing to the text or higher contrast text could be a possibility, but no bubbles or arrows pointing to how is talking etc.
Well done for not being like 90% of the other reviewers and moaning about the darkness like a pussy.
There's a good chance there will be more of this.

[Anarchy Face 17: S.C.I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
Not sure if i seen the others but i supose i will after this, it was an entertaininga nd interesting flash it did get abit confusing at first but soon understood it, could use more graphics detail and some compressing of the file, but for the mostpart it was entertaining and fun...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Compress the file as much as you can, and add more detail and effects...

~~OVERALL~~
Inteeresting flash and abit confusing at first but funny and entertaining...

~X~

Destroya responds:

I'm starting o think your a fan now.