XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sack O' Puppies #1]

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was funny and somewhat entertaining, but i do think it needs some sorta better animation, as the characters were just here and there, but it was funny just abit short...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Better animating, better character designs, and longer scenes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny but could be better...

~X~

iamkatieholmes responds:

Thanks for the review but im working on a gallery of the comics this animation was created from. and you'll see it looks just like the comic. its actually supposed to look like this.

[Los Angeles is Burning]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea with the whole burning idea, and i must say the song was very impressive, this title caught my attention though i live in so calif and therew as recently fires heh anyways nice job, keep it up...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should make more to this, You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny idea, great music and decent animation...

~X~

Kyora-Mishiso responds:

Thanks.

[Circles Versus Triangles]

((( HAHA CUTE )))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was cute, the weapons were neat, and the music seemed to fit aswell, the shapes were really basic though, but all n all it was funny and entertaining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and shading in the props like weapons and shapes...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny and amuing, abit basic though...

~X~

swordsman21 responds:

I was going for something basic, to help me get a feel for flash, plus I thought simplicity would make for an easy to understand concept. If I make more of these in the future, which I hope to because CVT is pretty close to my heart, the weapons and animation will get better and more detailed, but the combatants will always be simple shapes, becuase I love it.

[guard I]

((( INTERESTING )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was interesting kinda cute actually, the "AUDIO" seemed to get abit anoying after abit, but i was impressed how it all animated together kinda neat, hope to see more work from you soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the "WINDOW" larger it seemed abit small...

~~OVERALL~~
Strange and interesting but entertaining, so notbad...

~X~

Ooli responds:

thanks for the review. I made the music stopable and will keep the others comments in mind for the part 2.

[Robust & Dog]

((( NEAT STYLE )))

~~REVIEW~~
This was sorta neat with the whole "B&W" theme, and the characters were neat, i do think it needs some work on more detail like in the backrounds and more effects, also abit of color would spice up things...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more animation to the characters, I noticed the text was abit sloppy, why not give it some detail aswell as some Text bubbles, a decent font with some deep colors and good text bubles should improve on this... Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W...

~~OVERALL~~
A neat little flash but could use some improving...

~X~

Extar responds:

Glad you enjoyed the flash and thanks for the review!
Having black and white, then adding some bits of colour like for blood is too corny, I'm not going to start ripping off Sin City wholesale. Also, text bubbles would totally spoil the style of the flash, I was aiming for something subtle and not brash, even if readability and such would suffer.
You actually wanted more text? Most people get a headache when I ask them to read instead of me shouting the story at them through voices.
I'm not entirely sure what you thought was wrong with the font, too large/small or just not visible enough?
I will agree with you that there wasn't much detail in the backgrounds. However, I thought really detailed backgrounds would just be distracting and could mean the characters could have been lost with it being in black and white.
The criticisms you mention are the exact limitations I imposed on myself to actually make the flash unique and not like every other flash on NG, if I compromised them the flash would lose any individuality it might have.

[Halo short : starwars]

((( MADE ME LAUGH )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was entertaining, and gave me a few laughs here and there, the mixture of starwars and halo was interesting, the whole button cliking for the text was abit anoying though... but overall it was funny and amusining...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I noticed the text was abit sloppy, why not give it some detail aswell as some Text bubbles, a decent font with some deep colors and good text bubles should improve on this... Instead of using butons to proceed to the next msg, just have it flow as a movie, viewers may get anoyed at always having to press the button...

~~OVERALL~~
Funny mix of parodies but it will give you a good laugh, anyways nice job on this short...

~X~

fish-orb responds:

lol thanks for the review i no alot is to be impproved but the movie only took me 3 hours to make just as a short parody XD

[Nail]

((( NOTBAD )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well notbad kinda neat music that seemed to flow well with the very smooth animtion, and the "ART" was very unique aswell, it all seemed to just flow together very well which was neat, i enjoyed it, hope to see more like it soon...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some different colors like with the backround, would be nice...

~~OVERALL~~
Smooth animation aswell as some nice artwork...

~X~

MorrowDays responds:

Thanks! I love these GOOD BAD OVERAll reviews. They're very helpful.