XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-ganon95- Bit.trip Part2- CORE]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok this was differant it has some variaty in it but it changes too much but i like how you blend the changes so it doesnt have a gap between changes, i think you could rais the volume at times but that could just me, the quality is pretty decent though, for the mostpart its a good little tune, now on improving, volume raising, and more variaty but not at the cost of such a size, but it is decent track here, anyways good luck in anything new coming up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the gaps between variarty mixes is too long, and raise the volume in the gap points.

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ganon95 responds:

it changes too much?

i don't understand why i keep hearing this. its SUPPOSED to change up often, i don't want it to sound repetitive...the gaps are too long? at the most these gaps are like 3 seconds long.

though, i do agree the volume is a bit low at times.

[-Distant Lands-]

Nice variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow, the music does get better over time here now this one i liked because you did have a variaty of instraments from piano to trumpets, but this one was abit more better put together, the "TRUMPETS" were really amazing thought it seemed with the piano and trumpets and even the "FLUTE" that the song really shined through, so really nice job there, and i really enjoyed this especially since i played a trumpet when in grade school, so anyways props to you and i can see how your skills are getting better, now as to improve, maybe make the trumpets have a more dominating role.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the trumpets played more aswell as the flute, as its something i have not heard of a combination.

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Step responds:

Yeah you're exactly right about this one. I like the trumpets too since they give the song a sort of fantasy, adventure theme to it, and I agree that it could have been used a bit more with the flute, but in any case this is a pretty old song of mine; one of my first. My new ones are a lot better :P.

Anyway, thanks for the great review!

[Opaquely Clouds]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
This was very pleasent kinda did sound like the ocean, a smooth feel like if a sail boat is just sailing a way its very soft and pleasent i really enjoyed this, i dont see much at all to improve on this but if i was to say anything give it a mix of some even {SOFTER} sounds, maybe throw in some slightly deeper ones, but not too much as to take away from what you have but anyways you really have an awsome piece here keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some softer mixes in there wouldnt hurt

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Semaphore responds:

Thank you very much XwaynecoltX =)

[Crappy star wars theme loop]

Very amusing

~~REVIEW~~
Haha ok now this one was funny and amusing, very entertaining, and i see its used in a few episodes of a flash series so notbad there, it was pretty loud even for my speakers but all in good fun, now i enjoy starwars and this was another fun little version of it so nice job on that, Now with all that said, i would normally suggest improvments right about now but i think this is best as is it has a humor about it and that makes it much more enjoyble, So not the greatest but still good i thought. and its been a pleasure listening to your sounds.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well like i said you probably could improve this with sound quality and better rendition of the starwars theme, but this was good humor i thought

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LapisLapines responds:

lol

[Die Rig Die]

Amusing voices

~~REVIEW~~
lol this was kinda cute, i think you did an alright job with the voice and editing , I like the robot voice too it seemed to work together with the other voice and the backround music, and speaking of the backround music that was a nice touch and again worked with it so nice job on that one, Now as for improving on this one, i actually think its fine as is, but if anything is said to help improve this little loop i suppose i would say, ad more convo of the two voices, and maybe some more effects in the backround music, other then that its pretty awsome,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad more effects in the backround music ecchos and maybe some drums could be a start, also some more convo between the two voices would be another good point

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LapisLapines responds:

OK.

[Button Game XMAS Instructions]

Entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was interesting it has a wacky and quirky sound to it, its very short so can see why its a loop, there is a {DUCK} in there at the end which i thought was really cute, now even for a loop this was short i think iit could still be improved on i would suggest have the duck sound in there abit more, or maybe the talking abit more, just something that is making it last just a tad longer, but other then that it was interesting, nice loop.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be abit longer maybe a few more duck sounds, as suggested above

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LapisLapines responds:

LOL

[Introspectiv Odissy]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm some nice sounds going on in this one, it starts off soft and picks up with some differant sounds in there wich is nice, but i would love to hear more of an impact sound in the middle, The whole tune is very quiet, and the ending has somewhat of a large gap these are things that could be improved though, say like if you thru in some {DRUMS} some soft drums so it still reflects the other soft instraments, but other then that it was notbad at all. anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some deeper sounds, maybe some drums, and also shorten the {GAP} at the end

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Kosmiker responds:

This track is from my first works, if it was today i would most likely make it different with more layers and sligtly different composition.

Your input is very important and I appreciate any kind of tips that can help me make a more enjoyable and well composed music so thank you for the review. ;)

[[P] - Plankton (Dubstep)]

Nice effects

~~REVIEW~~
This was pretty impressive, i especially like how you had some echo effect at the start, at first i wasent sure what to expect, but as the music plays on it has some really good sounds especially the voices i hear from it they really fit well with this tune, and everything cameout very sharp sounding, so a well put together tune here and props to you for that, how can this be improved on? well probably more of the voices echoing would really get this even more, anyways nice job i enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more of the voice echoing that really made it more unique.

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Pezmobile responds:

Thanks alot for the honest review. I think i might fix/add a few things on this song now that ive gotten better

[P]

[madness?]

Too short

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was something differant and interesting, its way too {SHORT} and could use some other sounds in there but again its too short so i suppose it could be used in some sorta sound/fx, so as to improve on this you need more sounds, it should be abit longer, not much to review on this one but still as i said needs abit more work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs to be longer more content.

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Christopher78 responds:

Thanks, my newer songs r much more {LONGER} :P

[Trancotic Symphony Remastered]

Very pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
This was actually pretty nice tune here it really flowed well and i like how you added some variaty and change it up nice, It doesnt have any gaps that are really noticble, it flowed well right from the start, Its a very pleasent tune, and really. now as to improve on this im not sure but if anything maybe have some louder tones in there for the more intense parts of it, but mostly very good flowing tune you have here so nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some louder and softer tones at the propper times such as a deeper tone for more intense feelings.

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Semaphore responds:

thank you very much XwaynecoltX