XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mortal Kombat Theme ~Remi]

Nice track

~~REVIEW~~
hmmm now this does sound alot like mortal combat wich is cool because i loved the games and movie, haha great work with the {PIANO} yopu even mixed in your own style with the more softer feel moments then you really bring it up and power through the song so all and all a good theme of a song nice variation of your own style while still keeping touch with the main theme so awsome job there, a nice piece on one of my faves, now as to improve? hmm maybe more darker feel the keys seemed abit on the light side, other then that it was alright.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more darker theme to reflect the games and movies. maybe with deeper keys from the piano or something

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Step responds:

Thanks for the review! I was hoping you could check out my newer songs rather than my old ones but I still appreciate the lengthy reviews! I agree that a darker theme would've been nice but unfortunately at the time I was limited with what sounds I could use. Thanks again!

[Pezmobile - Distant Tomb]

Nice fast tempo

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was an interesting track, it started off slow but soon picked up very fast then you had some strange yet differant sounds mixing in here and there and thats one thing i really liked about this one, the beat gets faster and louder very nice touch there, now some harder beats could be installed especially when it gets to be a fast tempo, maybe some hard drums towards the end? just an idea, so overall i like it and an end improving tip would be ad some hard beats in there with the fast tempo so it has that end {WOW} anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice work here adding an ending powerful dominate drum beat might give it that end climax, but all together its decent.

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Pezmobile responds:

Thanks alot dude.

[Echoes in the Wind]

Decent track

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm ok so i decided to review some of your stuff, now this one really starts off too quiet, or soft sounding even 20 seconds into it its quiet, you should raise the tempo up abit and alot sooner, its a good song even the {SIZE} was decent, so to improve on this decent track you have, speed up the starting and add some loder or faster tempo going in there, besides all that it was decent and pretty mellow for most of it but still has a good feel, so nice job on this one hope to hear more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As explained needs a higher sounding feel and or a faster tempo, it needs to be spiced up somewhat

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doppler73 responds:

Hey, this is my first audio submission, so i was learning when i made this.

[Dream of Water and Land]

Soothing and pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hey now, this was another good track of yours, it is very soft though, you might want to raise it up a notch, now this is a soft and pleasent feel of a song so i can understand it should be that way, but a little higher wouldnt hurt, its soothing and seems to flow on like in some story like something is sailing away or some sad moment, more of a sad moment, i can really see this being in a very dramatic flash so props to you for bringing out the emotion on this one, can this be improved on? yeah maybe with some deeper sounds and differant pitches here and there, anyways nice track

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As above some deeper pitches and raise and lower sound quality

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Semaphore responds:

thank you very much XwaynecoltX

[Galaxy Of Light]

Top notch

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm now this was a very pleasent tune, not too overbarring or too low or too soft at all, just a nice and pleasent feel, very easy flowing there is really nothing i can suggest to improve on this one, cause i think its pretty right on as is, not perfect but its almost there, i just love the pleasent and easy flowing of this, so very impressed with what you have here, but i suppose if i could suggest any changes and or improving it might be, to lower the filesize just a tad, other then that its top notch in my book, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some file reducing would be a start.

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Semaphore responds:

thank you very much

this was my second song Iv'e ever created for about 2 years as I start making music =)

[Thunderstruck! Electric]

Notbad at all

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this has an interesting sound to it, it is fast paced to kinda like in an action scene, so i can see this being used in some sorta flash, The {QUALITY} of the sound was great and even though it was fast paced it ran smoothly with high end quality wich is why i liked it alot, not the best work, but its still at the top of my list and while this is one of your older pieces its still very good quality so props to you on this one, as for improving i dont see much but if anything should be said or even suggested, maybe have some {DEEP} bases in there at times that slowly pick up, idk kinda random but still something anyways nice job on this audio track.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well not much from my point of view but maybe adding some deep base once in awhile would mix it up somewhat, anyways nice job.

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Semaphore responds:

AC/DC FTW =D

thank you very much XwaynecoltX

[-ganon95- Bit.trip Part2- CORE]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm ok this was differant it has some variaty in it but it changes too much but i like how you blend the changes so it doesnt have a gap between changes, i think you could rais the volume at times but that could just me, the quality is pretty decent though, for the mostpart its a good little tune, now on improving, volume raising, and more variaty but not at the cost of such a size, but it is decent track here, anyways good luck in anything new coming up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the gaps between variarty mixes is too long, and raise the volume in the gap points.

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ganon95 responds:

it changes too much?

i don't understand why i keep hearing this. its SUPPOSED to change up often, i don't want it to sound repetitive...the gaps are too long? at the most these gaps are like 3 seconds long.

though, i do agree the volume is a bit low at times.

[-Distant Lands-]

Nice variaty

~~REVIEW~~
Oh wow, the music does get better over time here now this one i liked because you did have a variaty of instraments from piano to trumpets, but this one was abit more better put together, the "TRUMPETS" were really amazing thought it seemed with the piano and trumpets and even the "FLUTE" that the song really shined through, so really nice job there, and i really enjoyed this especially since i played a trumpet when in grade school, so anyways props to you and i can see how your skills are getting better, now as to improve, maybe make the trumpets have a more dominating role.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the trumpets played more aswell as the flute, as its something i have not heard of a combination.

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Step responds:

Yeah you're exactly right about this one. I like the trumpets too since they give the song a sort of fantasy, adventure theme to it, and I agree that it could have been used a bit more with the flute, but in any case this is a pretty old song of mine; one of my first. My new ones are a lot better :P.

Anyway, thanks for the great review!

[Opaquely Clouds]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
This was very pleasent kinda did sound like the ocean, a smooth feel like if a sail boat is just sailing a way its very soft and pleasent i really enjoyed this, i dont see much at all to improve on this but if i was to say anything give it a mix of some even {SOFTER} sounds, maybe throw in some slightly deeper ones, but not too much as to take away from what you have but anyways you really have an awsome piece here keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some softer mixes in there wouldnt hurt

~X~

Semaphore responds:

Thank you very much XwaynecoltX =)