XwaynecoltX's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Saturday Afternoon]

It was decent

~~REVIEW~~
This was nice, has a very great day type of feel, meaning not too hard allthough you do give it a nice almost intense build up wich then changes up quite abit from what it started with, theres alot of differant chchanges in this alot of {MIXTURE} wich is ok with me, just seems like there alot of stuff going everywhere, but really other then that i thought it was alright and liked it very much, anyways good tune here, i look forward to more from you soon,

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe not as intense of a build up but other then that it was alright.

~X~

ElectroHarbour responds:

Thanks very much for explaining what was wrong with the song. Yeah it does have a kind of intense build up, especially flattening the chill atmosphere.

[Hero Of The Machines]

Pleasent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this had an interesting {SOUND} starts off very good kinda reminds me of some {BATTLE-SCENE} thats about to start and such, like on distant field or something its very soothing aswell and has a small build up wich was ok with this one, i just found it to be very nice and pleasent. so if i could offer any tips of improving i think i would add some more deeper sounds towards the end, but other then that i thought it was alright with some nice effort on your end, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some deeper sounds in the tail end of the song would be nice.

~X~

XenonMB responds:

will keep that in mind, thanks for the review :)

[-Distant Seas-]

Prety decent

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was great i love the guitar and differant sounds in this one, there was a good amount of mixture in this piece, kinda reminded me of {ZELDA} somewhat, i do however wish you built it up more it had a more straight forward tempo, and needed a push there somewhere, so if anything you could improve on this it would probably be more build up and pushing it over the top, but besides that i liked the mixture of sounds and liked the guitar in there, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more push, more build up

~X~

Step responds:

That guitar is one of the most overused preset sounds that came with FL Studio ;D.

Again, I agree with you that this lacks any 'oomph' or a buildup. These songs are very old and I really didn't know what I was doing at the time. In fact, in this song I desperately wanted to add some drums but I didn't know how xD.

Thanks for the review. Going back to all these old songs sure is giving me nostalgia, haha.

[AB - Up To The Sky]

I love it

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this starts off pretty good i like the {PIANO} and especially like how it {PICKS-UP} nice touch there, the piano playing is very clear and sharp, very welldone on this part, also great title as it has that feeling and the piano just gets better as it plays on, the tune is actually abit long but it kinda works well that way, you start mixing it up towards the middle, this is a really nice piece im adding this to my fave, but anyways great piece, i look forward to hearing more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
nothing i thought it was perfect.

~X~

AsteroidBlues responds:

Thanks for rev, man ) I really appreciate that )
While i`m writing new stuff, u can hear some of my old stuff which is uploaded here already and some that i will upload in a matter of days )

[Polymorph]

Decent

~~REVIEW~~
So this was notbad, kinda neat actually starts of simple and pleasent, and has a good tone throughout the track very soft feel as it moves along, it is very just straight along so maybe giving it more of an over the top points like some deeper sounds some bass would push it abit more, something that would push it over though, but it does need something more there, but other then that it was pretty impressive, so try and making some new sounds in there along with some build up, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Good track just needs more something that will push it over the top, maybe some backround effects and some other mixes of differant sounds

~X~

kohlirowe responds:

Hi, thanks very much for the feedback. Much appreciated.

[Mortex]

Pretyy good tune you have here

~~REVIEW~~
Oh this had some good beats and starts off freat with a really good build-up, and starts really {JAMMING} wich i really liked, its a very very kicking jamming jam here, i love the build up then you start adding some differant variaty into it and such, really good tune here, about halfway you start to change it up but not too much and that was ok it has its own mind kinda hehe, but anyways great stuff, it was a pretty good listen and i enjoyed it very much, i look forward to more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
In the end i thought it could use more of a bang not a calm down, just an idea though

~X~

Fr34KC responds:

That was kinda what I was going for, I still don't like the cymbal though (but finding the right sound between low and high freq is a pretty time-consuming job to do) and I'm going to tweak around in this one for while since I'm not in a very creative mood (with all the exams going around) but for the "kicking jamming jam" there that's something I like about Maximus, it can really push your sound to the max.
I appreciate the thought, I'm certainly going to look into that (going out with a bang)
I just need some fresh ideas on how to put that into it (and at the same time erasing that ANNOYING click sound due to the side-chaining)

Thanks for your review =)

[Sentinel of the Mountain]

Decent guitar

~~REVIEW~~
oh this has a nice beat and tune here, great guitar, has a sorta {SPANISH} feel to it, the starting of it anyways, it goes off into some other variaty of tune thats cool sounding and more soothing and such, so i do like the variaty, i especially like the {GUITAR} it was abit differant sounding then other guitars, so props to you and the clarity was pretty good on this, so overall i was very impressed with this, the middle to end could have more of the guitar but other then that it was pretty good stuff, keep up the good audio tracks.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of the guitar throughout the track would be a good direction.

~X~

masterjiji responds:

DEALBREAKER INCOMING
It's a bass.

[Quantiy Mass Theory]

Decent tune

~~REVIEW~~
hmm well this was something differant it has some good sounds here and seems to go well and {FLOW} well together, and seems to be ok, i thought it was alright, the sound qiality is pretty good though but again like the others it would be nice to get some {BUILD-UP} in it and maybe some really good endeing bang or something like that, but from what this was heard it was pretty good solid and good flowing with some good quality to it, very nice indeed, so as to improve, more build up and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as mentioned above, some more build up would be key

~X~

BLack32Out responds:

K thanks

[shadow dark touches]

Needs some quality on sound

~~REVIEW~~
hmm ok so understanding its just a {LOOP} thats cool, but there seems to be alot of distortion that could be cleaned up, infact also adding some {VARIATY} to it with other sounds and instraments, could make it into a somewhat longer loop and that would actually be ok aswell, but i think from this loop the most you could fix up is the {QUALITY} of it as it doeas sound distorted and takes away from what is there and would be nice to hear it in a more clear and sharper sound, so nice job on the effort good luck on anything new you have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some quality and cleaning up the distortion would greatly help.

~X~

NekoMika responds:

Thank you, one of the first pieces I made on my really old comp when I still had FL Studio 8, don't have it on current comp. I appreciate the insight and helpful tips though. I think I have gotten a better ear since then as well so if I ever made another piece in FL Studio 8 demo, it would probably sound a whole lot better than this did then.

Thanks for the review.