Notbad
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad at all the vocals were ok, but i thought the vocals could have been abit more sharper there was some points were the sound gets "DISTORTED" but that was more or less the backround music sounds, but i did think this was amusing and it could sound better with some other sounds and instraments but the whole cream cheese was pretty interesting, so nice job there, good luck on anything else you got comming up.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as suggested the guitar sometimes was getting in the way of the vocals, maybe some cleaning up and even more variaty of differant sounds.
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