Could be louder
This had a soft touch to it maybe that was the idea, but i must say that it was still soft, and you had some backround effects that are ok, but im thinking you need to push the effects more upfront and more of focus, and abit "LOUDER" wouldnt hurt either, this would give your track abit more depth to it and make it a more fun experience for all. But anyways keep up the decent tunes.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Improvments are always abit hard to come by especially with music cause you dont know where to start, but i think you do have something decent here so ill suggest some possibilities that could help and improve on this. Well you may want to bring the effects more fucus and the whole tune could be louder aswell.